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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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  • #79453
    Kent
    Participant

    How is the emotion coming across? Looking for lighthearted, but wanting to instill a little…power.
    Also, I’m wondering about the studio sound.
    Thank you for your support.

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    • #79525
      Cheechman
      Participant

      I did this read also…..LOL…mine was way over the top.

      Need to hillite more of the dodge stuff.

      You have great tone.

    • #79460
      Hazaro
      Participant

      I’m no expert but listening with headphones, quality sounds good! Felt the lightheartedness and power – could maybe give the word “powerful” even more weight at the end to drive it home (no pun intended :D)

  • #79449
    Kent
    Participant

    Hello, listeners. Been a couple years since I’ve posted. Hoping to shake off cobwebs/dust/rust.
    I purposely choose medical scripts in an attempt to work on pronunciation and deliberate delivery. Does my tongue sound thick?
    Your input is, as always, appreciated.

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  • #79433
    latyesemca
    Participant

    Only gone to Six Flags a handful of times and I gotta say; very spot on!

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  • #79431
    latyesemca
    Participant

    All the makeup commercials that aired after school flashed before my eyes as I read this!

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  • #79429
    latyesemca
    Participant

    If I had a cat I would very much put them on this brand…if they could!

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    • #79483
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Good job on this. I liked the tone and it was nice and smooth throughout

      • #79497
        waninick
        Participant

        A good read. Might want just a little more something on the comedic lines, make them stand out just a bit.
        Nice work…!

  • #79427
    latyesemca
    Participant

    This sparked so many memories of the Pizza Hut commercials I used to watch when I were younger!

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    • #79482
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Nice tone and inflection! Some of the words got a little lost when speeding up, so being more mindful of diction. And the energy dropped a bit the last two sentences but otherwise very natural!

  • #79425
    latyesemca
    Participant

    An interesting copy but wouldn’t mind doing more of these!

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    • #79550
      Joe Slade
      Participant

      I really enjoyed your voice and the soothing quality you put into this read. The read came across to me as soothing and somber. I think I would like to hear a bit more energy and voice inflection even though the topic itself is so serious. Keep up the great work!

  • #79423
    latyesemca
    Participant

    After doing this copy so much, I started to convince myself with signing up!

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  • #79421
    latyesemca
    Participant

    Could’ve really used a Excedrin this day for sure.

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    • #79496
      waninick
      Participant

      Nice read. I have to focus to get past the sound quality, but when I do, the delivery seems really inline with the script. However, you may want to check the name of the product. You said ‘Eucerin’ instead of ‘Excedrin’. Other than that, well done.

      • #79506
        latyesemca
        Participant

        Oh no! That’s embarrassing. Thank you! I listened to it so much I didn’t even catch that.

  • #79419
    latyesemca
    Participant

    This was a toughy for sure!

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