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    Edge Studio
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    The Edge Studio Feedback Forum is the best place for you to post a recording and get feedback from the community! Record in your home studio, upload the file, and see what people think. This is a great place to get some advice on your technique, on your home studio, or to ask for people’s opinion on your reads. Remember, that this is a community forum, so please remain positive and encourage your peers in helpful ways. If Edge Studio feels that a user is too negative, or antagonizing other members of the community, they will have their posts deleted, and risk being banned from further communication. 

    Stay positive, listen to each other, and have fun!

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  • #58308

    Hi
    all Some of you will be surprise (who is this and from where he arrived here) This is Nepali Voice over artist Bhawani Niroula. you can search my name and website on google. this is my voice please send some suggestion(you guys seems very professional).
    here it is,

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  • #58287
    mkell755
    Participant

    Good evening all! I’m looking for any and all feedback on my daily recording (recorded on a phone). I’m going for direct but authentic and believable. Let me know what you think. Thanks!

    Mary

    They’re called books. You may recognize them. Men have relied on them for millennia. Read up, man up. Put on your glasses, then go kick the tar out of every project you’ve ever dreamed of. Become more self-sufficient, build your future or just enjoy a satisfying, productive read. It all starts here. Duluthtrading.com/books

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  • #58280
    katelyndawnvo
    Participant

    Hi! Here is a PSA for an eating disorder. Warning: this is about an eating disorder which may be triggering. I’m recording my demo tomorrow!! Wish me luck 🙂
    Katelyn

    Eating Disorder PSA:
    You notice your friend has been throwing away her lunch. She’s started wearing baggy clothes – all the time. She seems tired. These are warnings of an eating disorder, the deadliest mental illness we know. But early treatment is the key to recovery. And as a friend you can be the difference.

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    • #58282
      mkell755
      Participant

      Hi Katelyn – very good read! Sounds very believable for the add for your voice. Great tone, pitch and pauses at the right times, and you definitely were invested in the piece. Good luck tomorrow! You’ll do great!

      Mary

  • #58271
    svenbot5000
    Participant

    Howdy! Just posting a quick one take recording for practice, any feedback is appreciated!

    Quality Inn

    When he checked in, he was Mr. Simmons. When he checked out, he was just plain Bob. Quality Inn. We’ll see you there.

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    • #58283
      mkell755
      Participant

      Hi Svenbot! I liked this read – very nice and upbeat and your voice is well-suited for this type of commercial. Good job!

      Mary

  • #58260
    lmayo13
    Participant

    Hi,
    Wanted some feedback on a medical read. Content, sound quality etc…
    Thanks.

    The corneal epithelium is a thin layer of fast-growing and easily regenerated tissue kept moist by tears. The epithelium absorbs oxygen and cell nutrients from tears, and then distributes these nutrients to the rest of the cornea. The part of the epithelium that serves as the foundation on which the epithelial cells anchor and organize themselves is called the basal membrane

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    • #58284
      mkell755
      Participant

      Hi LMayo! Great read! Your voice sounds very smooth, warm and calm, and very good for a script like this. Good pacing and enunciation throughout. Very good!

      Mary

      • #58286
        lmayo13
        Participant

        Thanks for the feedback.

    • #58263
      katelyndawnvo
      Participant

      Very lovely read. You have a great voice for medical narration. I would say with this read there were pauses so you could work on smoothing out the pauses and only pause between ideas/sentences. You did a much smoother read for the 2nd and 3rd sentence, so the first one os more “pause-y” than the other two. Really nice work!

  • #58236
    mkell755
    Participant

    Hello all! I’m looking for any and all feedback here to my daily recording. This was recorded on my phone, so this is just for practice. Trying to sound authentic for this sort of commercial. Thank you!

    Mary

    Balance Bar
    A six-pack of lite beer is still a six-pack of beer. Eat with your head. With it’s 40-30-30 ratio of carbs, protein and dietary fat, Balance Bar is a great-tasting way to give your body the nutrition it needs. Plus it has 23 essential vitamins and minerals. To learn more, log on to Balance.com. Balance Bar. Eat with your head.

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    • #58270
      svenbot5000
      Participant

      Hi Mary! I think you have the right voice for this type of ad. Try to imagine that you’re talking to someone you know about this balance bar before you do the read. Pretend you’re really excited about letting them know that this is going to change their life. I believe this will help make the copy sound more conversational than just reading off the script. Hope that helps and keep up the good work!

      • #58285
        mkell755
        Participant

        Thanks for the feedback Svenbot! I will work on visualizing talking to a friend about trying out the bar, good tip. I really get excited about energy bars in real life! Will try to ramp up the excitement too. Thank you!

        Mary

    • #58254

      Hi Mary,
      Cute attitude. It is a little choppy: for ex, consider the pause after the first “beer” and the pause after “Eat”, and “Plus” You do a great job of changing inflection on “is still” and “with your head”, so the pauses are unnecessary and make it sound stilted. Your delivery on 40-30-30 sounds almost bored, but it is a big deal, as is the first time you mention the product. The pause before “Balance Bar” is good as it makes us pay attention to what will come after. You might try a smile in your voice on the final joke of “eat with your head.” Hope this is helpful. Good luck.

      • #58262
        mkell755
        Participant

        Hi Laura, thanks for the feedback! I will work on the unnecessary pauses and choppiness, good points. More smiling during the read too is good. Thanks again!

        Mary

  • #58222
    kfvoice
    Participant

    Happy Monday, all!

    Here is my submission for today!

    I did a documentary read from the script library. I am aware of background noise (not hydrated enough today), and would like feedback regarding anything else. It is appreciated.

    Kathy

    Animal Heroes

    Not all heroes are human. Sometimes heroes bark, meow, or even grunt. They may be covered with fur, have curly tails, or live in an alley. We’re about to meet some real-life animal heroes. Each one of these heroes has performed an amazing rescue. Sometimes they even put themselves in danger to help others. We’ll meet a dog who rescues stray cats. A brave cat who saved her five kittens from a fire. A pig who got help for her owner who was having a heart attack. And a guide dog who led his owner down 71 flights of stairs when the World Trade Center was attacked.

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    • #58228
      mkell755
      Participant

      Hi Kathy! I liked this read. It was warm, well paced and with good micro-pauses between thoughts to let the listener hear and understand what was being said. Good natural tone. Good job!

      Mary

      • #58268
        kfvoice
        Participant

        Thanks Mary!

  • #58216
    docr15
    Participant

    Last homework upload. Happy Thanksgiving! Thanks again for all comments!

    PawnCast247
    Thanks for joining us for this episode of PawnCast247. Be sure to check out PawnCast247.com to learn more and access other episodes of the show to get even more p**n knowledge and experience, straight to your earbuds.

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    • #58229
      mkell755
      Participant

      Hi Docr15! Very nice read! I like the deep warm tone and good pacing and emphasis on certain words in the read, sounded like a very good fit for your voice. Very good job!

      Mary

    • #58227
      RYoung
      Participant

      Hi Doc, nice work on these, sound like you’ve been working hard! The podcast one is spot on in my opinion. Clubmed one is soothing the way you delivered it maybe a tad too slow? Mercedes one not sure, anyway good luck to you!

  • #58214
    docr15
    Participant

    More homework! Thanks again for all comments!

    Club Med
    Imagine for a moment … nothing. No clocks. No ringing phone. No traffic jams. No radios. No newspapers. And no crowds. Now imagine a Club Med vacation. An island village where aqua seas brush dazzling white shores. Where lush green palms line wandering paths. A place where evenings are filled with entertainment and dancing. A Club Med vacation is like none other. Ask your travel agent.

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  • #58212
    docr15
    Participant

    Hey there everyone. Posting some homework reads for my commercial demo prep. As always, thanks for any and all comments on anything about them, warts and all!

    2020 Mercedes E-Class
    A car that can actually see like a human.
    Using stereoscopic cameras it can even stop itself if it has to.
    The technology may be hard to imagine, but why you would want it, is not.
    The 2020 E-class.
    It doesn’t just see the future…

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    • #58230
      mkell755
      Participant

      Hi Docr15 – great read and nice quiet, calm, confident tone. Very good read for your voice. Good read!

      Mary

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