[David Goldberg]

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[Kent]

May I have your attention? May I have your attention? This public announcement script was a choice made to explore the space outside strict narration and commercials (the stuff I’m primarily focused on).

To my ear, it sounds pretty slow, but I’m trying to be deliberate and detached, if not overtly calming.

Working on studio sound and EQ a bit with this one, too. Would appreciate input on depth of sound, tone, and that kinda deal, too.

Thanks!

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[Cheechman]

Yeah, it’s sounds deliberate and slow.

But the overall sound is great

I too am working on my studio..

[Hazaro]

Your ear analysis was pretty spot on here and overall appropriate! The studio quality sounded crisp and clear to me.

[Kent]

How is the emotion coming across? Looking for lighthearted, but wanting to instill a little…power.
Also, I’m wondering about the studio sound.
Thank you for your support.

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[Cheechman]

I did this read also…..LOL…mine was way over the top.

Need to hillite more of the dodge stuff.

You have great tone.

[Hazaro]

I’m no expert but listening with headphones, quality sounds good! Felt the lightheartedness and power – could maybe give the word “powerful” even more weight at the end to drive it home (no pun intended :D)

[Kent]

Hello, listeners. Been a couple years since I’ve posted. Hoping to shake off cobwebs/dust/rust.
I purposely choose medical scripts in an attempt to work on pronunciation and deliberate delivery. Does my tongue sound thick?
Your input is, as always, appreciated.

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[latyesemca]

Only gone to Six Flags a handful of times and I gotta say; very spot on!

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[latyesemca]

All the makeup commercials that aired after school flashed before my eyes as I read this!

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[latyesemca]

If I had a cat I would very much put them on this brand…if they could!

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[Hazaro]

Good job on this. I liked the tone and it was nice and smooth throughout

[waninick]

A good read. Might want just a little more something on the comedic lines, make them stand out just a bit.
Nice work…!

[latyesemca]

This sparked so many memories of the Pizza Hut commercials I used to watch when I were younger!

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[Hazaro]

Nice tone and inflection! Some of the words got a little lost when speeding up, so being more mindful of diction. And the energy dropped a bit the last two sentences but otherwise very natural!

[latyesemca]

An interesting copy but wouldn’t mind doing more of these!

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[Joe Slade]

I really enjoyed your voice and the soothing quality you put into this read. The read came across to me as soothing and somber. I think I would like to hear a bit more energy and voice inflection even though the topic itself is so serious. Keep up the great work!

[latyesemca]

After doing this copy so much, I started to convince myself with signing up!

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[latyesemca]

Could’ve really used a Excedrin this day for sure.

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[waninick]

Nice read. I have to focus to get past the sound quality, but when I do, the delivery seems really inline with the script. However, you may want to check the name of the product. You said ‘Eucerin’ instead of ‘Excedrin’. Other than that, well done.

[latyesemca]

Oh no! That’s embarrassing. Thank you! I listened to it so much I didn’t even catch that.

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