[David Goldberg]

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[latyesemca]

All the makeup commercials that aired after school flashed before my eyes as I read this!

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[latyesemca]

If I had a cat I would very much put them on this brand…if they could!

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[Hazaro]

Good job on this. I liked the tone and it was nice and smooth throughout

[waninick]

A good read. Might want just a little more something on the comedic lines, make them stand out just a bit.
Nice work…!

[latyesemca]

This sparked so many memories of the Pizza Hut commercials I used to watch when I were younger!

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[Hazaro]

Nice tone and inflection! Some of the words got a little lost when speeding up, so being more mindful of diction. And the energy dropped a bit the last two sentences but otherwise very natural!

[latyesemca]

An interesting copy but wouldn’t mind doing more of these!

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[Joe Slade]

I really enjoyed your voice and the soothing quality you put into this read. The read came across to me as soothing and somber. I think I would like to hear a bit more energy and voice inflection even though the topic itself is so serious. Keep up the great work!

[latyesemca]

After doing this copy so much, I started to convince myself with signing up!

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[latyesemca]

Could’ve really used a Excedrin this day for sure.

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[waninick]

Nice read. I have to focus to get past the sound quality, but when I do, the delivery seems really inline with the script. However, you may want to check the name of the product. You said ‘Eucerin’ instead of ‘Excedrin’. Other than that, well done.

[latyesemca]

Oh no! That’s embarrassing. Thank you! I listened to it so much I didn’t even catch that.

[latyesemca]

This was a toughy for sure!

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[latyesemca]

I look forward to reading the feedback on this one!

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[Hazaro]

Very natural read and tone. I felt you could slow it down a bit and just be clearer as some words got lost.

[latyesemca]

Trying to go for that sophisticated woman vibe.

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[Kent]

Good speed – makes message stand out.
Sounds a little hollow/echo-y.
“…to fit YOUR room” = maybe staying on “your” a little long? Obviously emphasizing, but almost sounds like it’s a catch/stumble.
Deep tone does sound “sophisticated.” I like it.

[latyesemca]

Decided to do a little fun take on it; gave the fairy a character. Any and all feedback is very appreciated!

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[waninick]

This was so good. Just a bit fast in a couple of places and the words kinda dropped on each other. But you nailed the feel!
Can’t wait to hear you in a real studio with a better audio chain.

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