[David Goldberg]

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[Esandyii]

Hello all. Would appreciate feedback on these two medical narration mp3s, including the quality of the audio. Many thanks in advance.
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[Silver Wit]

I just want to start by saying, I think your voice is PERFECT for medical narration. However, I feel like you should work on your clarity in the “knee replacement” read. I heard a bit of muddled lines that kinda blurred together. But it was still an enjoyable listen.

[Esandyii]

Many Thanks
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[TimberTykes]

Hello, Esandyii!

First things first, I really enjoy your voice. Very nice and rustic, in my opinion.

In ‘Knee,’ I think the read was very to the point, although I feel that since it’s the topic of the narration and therefore pops up more often, ‘Partial Knee Replacement’ could do with more variance. Also, it seems like some words were running together, but that could just be me. I also like the way you said ‘particular,’ for some reason.

I like ‘A-fib’ much more! I heard more variance here, but I would probably elevate the first ‘ventricles’ and ‘also.’

Great reads, and thank you for allowing me to listen to them!

[Esandyii]

Appreciate the feedback
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[RetsofNoraa]

And here’s the other half of my assignment, which I forgot to attach to my previous post. Oops!

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[TeatroMan]

You have a nice presence and it works for the assignment. It might be on my end but it did sound like some words were meshing together. I’d suggest timing it next time. Other than that it was good

[RetsofNoraa]

Here’s my latest assignment! Going for brighter delivery and more speed control this time around.

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[Silver Wit]

Your delivery sounds good to me, but I feel like if you slow down the line “running your own business running you ragged,” it’ll sound a bit clearer. Good work overall

[Leslie Day]

Hello everyone,
This is my first submission. I have a few more to upload. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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[Silver Wit]

Wow. Such a sweet and relaxing voice. Not too many notes to give, but if I were to have one, I’d say maybe take a slight pause before delivering the last line in your Advil commercial.

[RetsofNoraa]

Great start! I love the soothing tone of your voice, and I think you’re finding your niche quite well. For the Advil piece, I had some slight difficulty telling what the first few words were initially; the way you ran them together wound up sounding more like “mussulex” than “muscle aches.” I think this was due to rushing into the next word, since later on you say the same phrase with far better diction. Then again, maybe I’m projecting because that’s something I tend to do often, myself…

[samsheeks]

One more for Nike

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[joekett]

Nice voice, good read, great pace for the topic. A good Mic and a good sound studio, and you’re off to the races. Keep at ot.

[samsheeks]

Two takes for this one… Not sure how much is too much!

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[madtrammell]

You have a great voice and I really like the energy you brought to this read! The only note I would make is that the pace seemed just a tad quick.

[samsheeks]

A couple spots targeted for kids! Tried to create wonder and excitement.

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[TeatroMan]

Great job with both of them! I think you nailed it with trying to add the excitement to the read and it shows! Keep it up!

[DillonP]

I just finished four reads two commercial and two narration. This is about getting annunciation, Emphasis, speech and other things that will be important. Please let give me feedback I would really appreciate it. Thank You.

Commercials: A-1 Stanek Sauce and Arby’s
Narration: AEC Foundation and USO- Make a diffrence.

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[Hazaro]

Great reads! Enunciation would be one thing to pay more attention to. But very natural!

[samsheeks]

Loved the mood you brought to these! Just make sure you’re dictating the ends of your words – make them more crisp

[Silver Wit]

Hey everyone, I’m working on my first round of assignments (part 3). Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

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[samsheeks]

Make sure you are saving and uploading these as audio files (WAV or MP3) to ensure compatibility with all devices and to make access easy!

[Silver Wit]

Ohhh, whoops. I forgot about that. Thanks for reminding me

[Silver Wit]

Hey everyone, I’m working on my first round of assignments (part2). Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

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