Feedback Forum

[David Goldberg]

The Edge Studio Feedback Forum is the best place for you to post a recording and get feedback from the community! Record in your home studio, upload the file, and see what people think. This is a great place to get some advice on your technique, on your home studio, or to ask for people’s opinion on your reads. Remember, that this is a community forum, so please remain positive and encourage your peers in helpful ways. If Edge Studio feels that a user is too negative, or antagonizing other members of the community, they will have their posts deleted, and risk being banned from further communication. 

Stay positive, listen to each other, and have fun!

• This topic was modified 4 years, 1 month ago by David Goldberg.
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[latyesemca]

If I had a cat I would very much put them on this brand…if they could!

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[Hazaro]

Good job on this. I liked the tone and it was nice and smooth throughout

[waninick]

A good read. Might want just a little more something on the comedic lines, make them stand out just a bit.
Nice work…!

[latyesemca]

This sparked so many memories of the Pizza Hut commercials I used to watch when I were younger!

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[Hazaro]

Nice tone and inflection! Some of the words got a little lost when speeding up, so being more mindful of diction. And the energy dropped a bit the last two sentences but otherwise very natural!

[latyesemca]

An interesting copy but wouldn’t mind doing more of these!

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[Joe Slade]

I really enjoyed your voice and the soothing quality you put into this read. The read came across to me as soothing and somber. I think I would like to hear a bit more energy and voice inflection even though the topic itself is so serious. Keep up the great work!

[latyesemca]

After doing this copy so much, I started to convince myself with signing up!

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[latyesemca]

Could’ve really used a Excedrin this day for sure.

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[waninick]

Nice read. I have to focus to get past the sound quality, but when I do, the delivery seems really inline with the script. However, you may want to check the name of the product. You said ‘Eucerin’ instead of ‘Excedrin’. Other than that, well done.

[latyesemca]

Oh no! That’s embarrassing. Thank you! I listened to it so much I didn’t even catch that.

[latyesemca]

This was a toughy for sure!

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[latyesemca]

I look forward to reading the feedback on this one!

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[Hazaro]

Very natural read and tone. I felt you could slow it down a bit and just be clearer as some words got lost.

[latyesemca]

Trying to go for that sophisticated woman vibe.

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[Kent]

Good speed – makes message stand out.
Sounds a little hollow/echo-y.
“…to fit YOUR room” = maybe staying on “your” a little long? Obviously emphasizing, but almost sounds like it’s a catch/stumble.
Deep tone does sound “sophisticated.” I like it.

[latyesemca]

Decided to do a little fun take on it; gave the fairy a character. Any and all feedback is very appreciated!

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[waninick]

This was so good. Just a bit fast in a couple of places and the words kinda dropped on each other. But you nailed the feel!
Can’t wait to hear you in a real studio with a better audio chain.

[latyesemca]

Any and all feedback is very appreciated!

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