[David Goldberg]

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[MCR Marketing]

There is some exciting news for foreign investors due to recent geo-political developments and the emergence of several financial factors. This coalescence of events, has at its core, the major drop in the price of US real estate, combined with the exodus of capital from Russia and China. Among foreign investors this has suddenly and significantly produced a demand for [url=https://www.mcrmarketing.pk/islamabad-golf-city/]Islamabad Golf City[/url]. investments.

[MCR Marketing]

There is some exciting news for foreign investors due to recent geo-political developments and the emergence of several financial factors. This coalescence of events, has at its core, the major drop in the price of US real estate, combined with the exodus of capital from Russia and China. Among foreign investors this has suddenly and significantly produced a demand for Islamabad Golf City

[Madhatr673110]

Hey Folks. This is my first posting. Here is some homework I’ve been doing. I’ve been struggling with mouth sounds for weeks. Any help on that and opinions on these reads would be appreciated. Thank you.

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[Hazaro]

These were great for your first go! If you’ve been struggling with mouth sounds then your practice has paid off as your enunciation sounded great! You can work on making the material more personal and specific as you keep moving forward. Great job!

[Silver Wit]

I feel like you should believe in the product you’re trying to sell. It sound more like you’re reading the product and not selling it.

[Cheechman]

I would suggest not going up and down in tone so much.
Also, highlight the action words, as I call them, to draw more attention to the product.

[JNMullett]

Hello again, here is another practice read I’ve been working on. Any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance!!

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[latyesemca]

Wow! Talk about a medical read! You crushed it, without a doubt!

[Grace17]

Hey! I would love some technique/delivery feedback on this. I left the breaths in, so if you have any advice on breathing technique that’ll be great too. Thanks!

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[MayeWest]

Nice silky voice! I also liked your pace. Someone here have me advice on breathing and said I can use the soft pallet in the back of my mouth or turn away from the mic to take a breath. Good read!

[G Cobb]

New to the game interested in feed back,two lesson’s so far

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[Grace17]

Thank you for the tip ValleyDoll!

[Grace17]

Hey! I would love some technique/delivery feedback on this. I left the breaths in, so if you have any advice on breathing technique that’ll be great too. Thanks!

[madtrammell]

Hello everyone, hope you are all having a great week! I have another practice read for narration that I would love some feedback on, thank you!

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[latyesemca]

You sound like you really believe in the product! I will say that it sounds a bit choppy in places like they were part of different takes and you had put them together since there are strange pauses before or after phrases. The tone was very warm, and the volume was PERFECT. Great job!

[RCampos]

Very nice variety in tone and pitch throughout your read, which keeps the topic interesting. I have just two small critiques: I thought your pause just before “broken in” could be a tiny bit shorter. And, you say a long “a” when you say, “is a good way.” I think it would sound more conversational to use a short “a,” like we usually do in conversation.

[Grace17]

Your audio volume level is great and your voice is perfect for this read! I would say the beginning up until “running mates” needs more flow in the words, it’s a little choppy with pauses that are too long. Try not to overthink what you’re saying and lastly I would recommend trying to let more of your personality out. You had more personality from “This video” onwards but it’ll be great to hear that more through out.

[JNMullett]

Hi All, still working toward my narration demo. Here is another practice read. I would appreciate any feedback you may have. Thanks in advance!!

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[Donnamichelle444]

#79685
I am impressed with the clarity of your voice – GOOD JOB

[Donnamichelle444]

#79685
LikeGlen you’re pretty good with the conversational style. Honestly, it did sound real.

[IlikeGlen]

Thank you so much Donna Michelle
For taking the time to listen to my recording and giving me such positive feedback thanks again.

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