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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    The Edge Studio Feedback Forum is the best place for you to post a recording and get feedback from the community! Record in your home studio, upload the file, and see what people think. This is a great place to get some advice on your technique, on your home studio, or to ask for people’s opinion on your reads. Remember, that this is a community forum, so please remain positive and encourage your peers in helpful ways. If Edge Studio feels that a user is too negative, or antagonizing other members of the community, they will have their posts deleted, and risk being banned from further communication. 

    Stay positive, listen to each other, and have fun!

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  • #80050
    raven808
    Participant

    Hi, this is my first time on here so please ignore the lack of editing (i.e. background noise). Thank you for the feedback!

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    • #80076
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Hi Raven. Your clarity, tone and inflection are all there, great job on that. It does sound a bit forced however, I think if you can connect to the material and personalize it more, it would really elevate it to sound more natural.

  • #80026
    Hazaro
    Participant

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  • #80017
    Hazaro
    Participant

    A few more for feedback. Anything helps and I’m grateful for it. From the same assignment working on being even more specific in my commercial reads. Thank you in advance!

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    • #80241
      cbehrens
      Participant

      Great reads! One thought I had may be to try out different patterns or variations of pitch.

    • #80121
      Silver Wit
      Participant

      I’d say my biggest bit of feedback would be to use a bit more pauses in your read. You know the material well, just give it some room to breath

      • #80129
        Hazaro
        Participant

        Thank you for that. I try to gauge how long the spot might be, but realize I might be editing a bit too tightly!

  • #80012
    Hazaro
    Participant

    Would love feedback on any of these. Working on getting even more specific with my commercial reads. Thanks so much!

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    • #80186
      Tates-VO
      Participant

      Hi I like your crayola I think it needs a little more excitement but otherwise it sounds so clear

    • #80022
      MayeWest
      Participant

      Good reads!!! I like your Motel 6 and Revlon!!

  • #79995
    sfeldman
    Participant

    I have my first-ever narration recording next week and I’m a bit nervous hahaha – I’d love feedback on these!! (In coaching, we’re working on my modulation/emphasis, pace, and not being too choppy.)

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    • #80057
      raven808
      Participant

      The college one suits your voice really well! It felt informative and engaging.

    • #80011
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Nice energy in Mattel and nice pacing in Fibromyalgia. Your voice is great for the college narration – the pacing sped up a bit after a little flub and got rushed though. Don’t worry about that as you can go back and record over it no one will know! 😉

  • #79993
    TimberTykes
    Participant

    Good Evening, everyone!

    I have here another recording, for practice! Feedback or criticism of any kind is much appreciated, as usual.

    Since my previous entry, nothing has changed. I’m looking for opinions on glottal stops, involving words that end with ‘st,’ ‘ps,’ ‘xt,’ as well as words with the usual ‘t’ in them. You know the ones, lol. Also, I tried my best to keep the reading at a moderate pace, so please let me know how I did there!

    Personally, I feel that I could’ve varied the word ‘babbling’ a bit more, but hey.

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    • #80058
      raven808
      Participant

      All the “t”s sounded great to me! I’m not sure if it was intentional or part of the scripts but some “pauses” seemed a little long in between words (i.e. after “talking” and before “blue”) but if that was intentional, nevermind! And your voice compliments the script well!

    • #80007
      Hazaro
      Participant

      No glottal stops stood out to me, thought it sounded great. The last ‘poke” in “Pokemon” got slightly lost, but easy fix. Read was great IMO!

  • #79977
    madtrammell
    Participant

    Hello everyone, I have another practice attempt in preparation for my upcoming narration demo record. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, thank you!

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    • #80008
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Good pacing and enunciation!

  • #79967
    Dominic
    Participant

    Hello everyone! Third round of reads, any feedback is welcome!

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    • #80187
      Tates-VO
      Participant

      Hi Dominic your tone was good and pace was just right and it sounds like your ready to offer a deal to buy so nice job

    • #80010
      Hazaro
      Participant

      These are great Dominick, you have a natural storytelling vibe. Pacing, enunciation and tone are all there. I felt that Earth Doc could have been a touch more more intimate as it seemed like you were shouting a bit, but overall these were great!

    • #80009
      solin232
      Participant

      Hi, I enjoyed both of your reads ! didn’t notice anything negative that stands out to me. I thought your pacing was good and you kept me engaged through both reads, great job!

  • #79959
    Artist7
    Participant

    Thanks for the positive, helpful feedback, latyesemca! Will try to incorporate the good tips during the next read!

  • #79954
    AJS10
    Participant

    Hello! Would love some input on this file — mainly looking for input on the audio quality not so much performance. Right now I’m just focusing on how my voices sounds, background, etc, to see if I need any home studio improvements – if you’re tech-savvy enough to help! Thank you!!

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    • #80023
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Hi AJS10, wouldn’t necessarily call myself an expert but listening closely to and the audio sounds really clean to me! Didn’t hear any extraneous noises in the background at all.

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