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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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  • #80292
    ikrani
    Participant

    My latest and possibly last round of coach homework. It was only now that I realized I’d spent the last 3 months recording next to a ticking clock. I just didn’t notice until I moved my microphone back about 5 inches and caught some of the ticking in my reads. By then, it was too late: I had everything recorded and the levels all adjusted.

    So, if I missed any rogue ticking noises, my apologies.

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  • #80280
    Silver Wit
    Participant

    Here’s my recordings for my 3rd assignment. Any tips and advice are appreciated. (part 3)

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    • #80295
      ikrani
      Participant

      Just took a gander at your ALA read. While your pitch range was kept tight, I think you could’ve stretched it a little more while still keeping a serious tone. You always want to keep your potential audience engaged. Also, there’s a couple spots where your mic caught your intake of breath.

      For comparison, I also listened to your Arby’s read. Perhaps it’s because my initial acting “training” came from mimicking Tim Curry’s performances, but I think you really should work on getting comfortable with a broader pitch range when you record. There’s only a subtle difference in overall tone between the two, which may be what you were going for, but I would think a more obvious difference between commercials would demonstrate a better range of usefulness to a potential client.

  • #80275
    Silver Wit
    Participant

    Here’s my recordings for my 3rd assignment. Any tips and advice are appreciated. (part 2)

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    • #80321
      Cheechman
      Participant

      Needs more emotion, more authentic.

      Also the sound needs alot of work, as in microphone or sound proofing.

  • #80270
    Silver Wit
    Participant

    Here’s my recordings for my 3rd assignment. Any tips and advice are appreciated.

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  • #80261
    raven808
    Participant

    Practicing changing emotions! Thank you for the feedback 🙂

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  • #80259
    Tates-VO
    Participant

    Here is more of my stuff I’m sorry I had to do multiple posts

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  • #80256
    Tates-VO
    Participant

    Here is more of my recordings sorry I had to try to post all of them

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    • #80362
      raven808
      Participant

      For the Heart one… great pacing! .. it was hard to understand the words that came directly after CPR but otherwise good enunciation!

  • #80253
    Tates-VO
    Participant

    Here is more of recordings I appreciate any feedback 🙂

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    • #80532
      Cheechman
      Participant

      Too fast, Lists should be said in different tones too.

      Good voice, like me need more practice.

  • #80249
    Tates-VO
    Participant

    Hey guys I had some recordings done for practices I might post more in a little bit but I appreciate any feedback thank yoj

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  • #80248
    raven808
    Participant

    Some fun character practice, please let me know what you all think and apologies for any background noise! Thanks everyone!

    • #80360
      raven808
      Participant

      Not sure why it didn’t work! Here it is…

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