[David Goldberg]

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[Cheechman]

Some reads from McDonalds posts online.

I liked 3 the best.

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[Logan DFD]

Hi everyone! I’m looking for some feedback on natural delivery and whether I have enough variety in pitch. Thanks for listening!

A1 Steak Sauce

With steak, you want to make every bite count.
That’s why we use A-1 Steak Sauce.
A-1 brings out every single bite of steak, or even hamburger.
Mmmmm, delicious.
For me, there’s only one steak sauce, A-1.
Because A-1 has all the taste that makes every bite count.

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[Tates-VO]

Hi Logan I felt like take 2 had a little bit more excitement

[Hazaro]

Hi Logan, I felt like the 2nd take had the most variety in pitch.

[Cheechman]

This an actual audition script read.

I’m torn between the 2nd and 3rd read.

What do you think?

This is the description:
This client helps the NHS, education and so on. It requires a confident, caring and mature voiceover. 60-second voiceover, 140 words. Guide track and film will be made available to shortlisted candidates.

Script to read: Notes: confident, calm, clear and proud.
We’re the goodies!
“We believe that good public services are the key to a stronger society.
We are The PSC, and we exist to make public services brilliant.”

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[madtrammell]

I think the third take is great!

[Hazaro]

I liked the 3rd take best but think you could slow it down a hair and give the words a bit more weight. 😉

[darleneharris]

Hi Everyone! Would love some feedback on the attached narration practice scripts in preparation for my next coaching session! Thank you!

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[Hazaro]

Great job on these! One tiny thing I would say (something I’ve done myself) is not to break up a word into syllables for the sake of clarity. It was only once in the first Brit-tain. Your clarity is already there and these both sounded great IMO!

[Thomas_D]

Here’s a few more reads from my narration session. Any and all feedback is welcomed (thanks in advance)

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[Tates-VO]

Hi Thomas the telsa was take was good,I think it should slowed down just a little bit but other wise it’s good

[LindsayLaVelle]

Hey Thomas, I liked your Telsa read. I think you could take your time a bit more because, as someone unfamiliar with the script, I wanted to really hear all the details. Well done!

[djmetzner]

Posting my first practice read! This is a documentary narration. Open to any reactions or suggestions. Thanks!

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[Tates-VO]

Hi djmetzner I liked how your voice was very consistent and how mysterious it was when reading the script it sounds good.

[Thomas_D]

Hi djmetzner! Liked how even you kept the pitch and tone throughout the recording. I feel like it’s hard not to change pitch/tone when doing a documentary read, but thought you did a great job here.

[verderbert90]

Hey all, would appreciate some feedback on the attached. These are from the studio library – I’ve been trying to focus in on narration.

Thank you!

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[Thomas_D]

Hey verderbert90! Off the bat, the “advanced technologies” read sounded very natural, and your tone was great as well. I see where you were going for the wiseman narrations. For those, I’m wondering if you can even play more with pitch/tone.

[G Cobb]

hello everyone,looking for feedback.

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[madtrammell]

Great diction and pacing on both reads!

[Silver Wit]

Great voice, and great Nike read. I feel that you could pick up the pace a little in the first half of your newmans read, because the second half of that is spot on.

[G Cobb]

Thank you very much, I actually wrote the Newman add and at first my pace was much quicker, I cut 8 seconds from the original so I need to find my happy pace,I have had just 2 lessons and I am learning my recording equipment.🙂

[bnielsen15]

Hi everyone! Here’s some homework from my latest Narration session. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. Thank you guys so much!

Legacy Telephony: Welcome to Legacy Group Enterprises. If you know the extension of the person you wish to reach, you may enter it at any time. You may also use the dial by name directory by pressing 9. If you are calling during normal business hours and require immediate assistance, please press zero.

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[Tates-VO]

Hi your voice sounds so professional and it was very clean and it sounds very friendly

[LindsayLaVelle]

You managed to make telephony interesting! This comes across as friendly and upbeat. Nice!

[raven808]

Please ignore the background noise and thank you so much for the feedback everyone 🙂

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[Tates-VO]

Hi raven I like the video game take and it sounds sarcastic which is very cool and I didn’t hear anything in the background so your all good

[Hazaro]

You capture the tone well and are a very good reader. I would love to hear a connection to who you’re talking to though, to really reel me in with your authentic self.

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