[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[Thomas_D]

Here’s a few more reads from my narration session. Any and all feedback is welcomed (thanks in advance)

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[Tates-VO]

Hi Thomas the telsa was take was good,I think it should slowed down just a little bit but other wise it’s good

[LindsayLaVelle]

Hey Thomas, I liked your Telsa read. I think you could take your time a bit more because, as someone unfamiliar with the script, I wanted to really hear all the details. Well done!

[djmetzner]

Posting my first practice read! This is a documentary narration. Open to any reactions or suggestions. Thanks!

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[Tates-VO]

Hi djmetzner I liked how your voice was very consistent and how mysterious it was when reading the script it sounds good.

[Thomas_D]

Hi djmetzner! Liked how even you kept the pitch and tone throughout the recording. I feel like it’s hard not to change pitch/tone when doing a documentary read, but thought you did a great job here.

[verderbert90]

Hey all, would appreciate some feedback on the attached. These are from the studio library – I’ve been trying to focus in on narration.

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[Thomas_D]

Hey verderbert90! Off the bat, the “advanced technologies” read sounded very natural, and your tone was great as well. I see where you were going for the wiseman narrations. For those, I’m wondering if you can even play more with pitch/tone.

[G Cobb]

hello everyone,looking for feedback.

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[madtrammell]

Great diction and pacing on both reads!

[Silver Wit]

Great voice, and great Nike read. I feel that you could pick up the pace a little in the first half of your newmans read, because the second half of that is spot on.

[G Cobb]

Thank you very much, I actually wrote the Newman add and at first my pace was much quicker, I cut 8 seconds from the original so I need to find my happy pace,I have had just 2 lessons and I am learning my recording equipment.🙂

[bnielsen15]

Hi everyone! Here’s some homework from my latest Narration session. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. Thank you guys so much!

Legacy Telephony: Welcome to Legacy Group Enterprises. If you know the extension of the person you wish to reach, you may enter it at any time. You may also use the dial by name directory by pressing 9. If you are calling during normal business hours and require immediate assistance, please press zero.

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[Tates-VO]

Hi your voice sounds so professional and it was very clean and it sounds very friendly

[LindsayLaVelle]

You managed to make telephony interesting! This comes across as friendly and upbeat. Nice!

[raven808]

Please ignore the background noise and thank you so much for the feedback everyone 🙂

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[Tates-VO]

Hi raven I like the video game take and it sounds sarcastic which is very cool and I didn’t hear anything in the background so your all good

[Hazaro]

You capture the tone well and are a very good reader. I would love to hear a connection to who you’re talking to though, to really reel me in with your authentic self.

[raven808]

Hi, this is my first time on here so please ignore the lack of editing (i.e. background noise). Thank you for the feedback!

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[Hazaro]

Hi Raven. Your clarity, tone and inflection are all there, great job on that. It does sound a bit forced however, I think if you can connect to the material and personalize it more, it would really elevate it to sound more natural.

[Hazaro]

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[Hazaro]

A few more for feedback. Anything helps and I’m grateful for it. From the same assignment working on being even more specific in my commercial reads. Thank you in advance!

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[cbehrens]

Great reads! One thought I had may be to try out different patterns or variations of pitch.

[Silver Wit]

I’d say my biggest bit of feedback would be to use a bit more pauses in your read. You know the material well, just give it some room to breath

[Hazaro]

Thank you for that. I try to gauge how long the spot might be, but realize I might be editing a bit too tightly!

[Hazaro]

Would love feedback on any of these. Working on getting even more specific with my commercial reads. Thanks so much!

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[Tates-VO]

Hi I like your crayola I think it needs a little more excitement but otherwise it sounds so clear

[MayeWest]

Good reads!!! I like your Motel 6 and Revlon!!

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