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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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September 19, 2022 at 6:18 pm #80148
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September 19, 2022 at 5:56 pm #80143
Logan DFD
ParticipantHi everyone! I’m looking for some feedback on natural delivery and whether I have enough variety in pitch. Thanks for listening!
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Because A-1 has all the taste that makes every bite count.Attachments:
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September 19, 2022 at 5:45 pm #80139
Cheechman
ParticipantThis an actual audition script read.
I’m torn between the 2nd and 3rd read.
What do you think?
This is the description:
This client helps the NHS, education and so on. It requires a confident, caring and mature voiceover. 60-second voiceover, 140 words. Guide track and film will be made available to shortlisted candidates.Script to read: Notes: confident, calm, clear and proud.
We’re the goodies!
“We believe that good public services are the key to a stronger society.
We are The PSC, and we exist to make public services brilliant.”Attachments:
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September 22, 2022 at 12:01 am #80217
madtrammell
ParticipantI think the third take is great!
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September 19, 2022 at 6:55 pm #80155
Hazaro
ParticipantI liked the 3rd take best but think you could slow it down a hair and give the words a bit more weight. 😉
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September 19, 2022 at 12:17 am #80105
darleneharris
ParticipantHi Everyone! Would love some feedback on the attached narration practice scripts in preparation for my next coaching session! Thank you!
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September 19, 2022 at 10:33 am #80130
Hazaro
ParticipantGreat job on these! One tiny thing I would say (something I’ve done myself) is not to break up a word into syllables for the sake of clarity. It was only once in the first Brit-tain. Your clarity is already there and these both sounded great IMO!
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September 18, 2022 at 3:46 pm #80096
Thomas_D
ParticipantHere’s a few more reads from my narration session. Any and all feedback is welcomed (thanks in advance)
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September 20, 2022 at 7:22 pm #80182
Tates-VO
ParticipantHi Thomas the telsa was take was good,I think it should slowed down just a little bit but other wise it’s good
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September 19, 2022 at 2:04 pm #80136
LindsayLaVelle
ParticipantHey Thomas, I liked your Telsa read. I think you could take your time a bit more because, as someone unfamiliar with the script, I wanted to really hear all the details. Well done!
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September 18, 2022 at 2:57 pm #80092
djmetzner
ParticipantPosting my first practice read! This is a documentary narration. Open to any reactions or suggestions. Thanks!
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September 20, 2022 at 7:24 pm #80183
Tates-VO
ParticipantHi djmetzner I liked how your voice was very consistent and how mysterious it was when reading the script it sounds good.
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September 18, 2022 at 3:39 pm #80094
Thomas_D
ParticipantHi djmetzner! Liked how even you kept the pitch and tone throughout the recording. I feel like it’s hard not to change pitch/tone when doing a documentary read, but thought you did a great job here.
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September 18, 2022 at 2:39 pm #80088
verderbert90
ParticipantHey all, would appreciate some feedback on the attached. These are from the studio library – I’ve been trying to focus in on narration.
Thank you!
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September 18, 2022 at 11:12 am #80080
G Cobb
Participanthello everyone,looking for feedback.
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September 21, 2022 at 11:57 pm #80216
madtrammell
ParticipantGreat diction and pacing on both reads!
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September 19, 2022 at 3:56 am #80119
Silver Wit
ParticipantGreat voice, and great Nike read. I feel that you could pick up the pace a little in the first half of your newmans read, because the second half of that is spot on.
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September 17, 2022 at 3:33 pm #80078
bnielsen15
ParticipantHi everyone! Here’s some homework from my latest Narration session. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. Thank you guys so much!
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September 20, 2022 at 7:33 pm #80184
Tates-VO
ParticipantHi your voice sounds so professional and it was very clean and it sounds very friendly
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September 19, 2022 at 2:05 pm #80137
LindsayLaVelle
ParticipantYou managed to make telephony interesting! This comes across as friendly and upbeat. Nice!
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September 16, 2022 at 1:16 pm #80053
raven808
ParticipantPlease ignore the background noise and thank you so much for the feedback everyone 🙂
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September 20, 2022 at 7:35 pm #80185
Tates-VO
ParticipantHi raven I like the video game take and it sounds sarcastic which is very cool and I didn’t hear anything in the background so your all good
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September 17, 2022 at 2:53 pm #80077
Hazaro
ParticipantYou capture the tone well and are a very good reader. I would love to hear a connection to who you’re talking to though, to really reel me in with your authentic self.
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