[David Goldberg]

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[atperry]

hey Edge community. Any feedback would be appreciated

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[jwhiddon]

Feel free to critique the read, but mostly looking for feedback on the sound quality. Something to me just isn’t sounding right, not quite sure what it is though. This is with a slight noise reduction added and normalized to -3db. Any feedback is appreciated.

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[smarlowe]

Hello, Looking for any and all constructive feedback on these two commercial samples. Thanks!

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[Cheechman]

Kind of monotone. More emotion would help, otherwise very clear and understandable

[slemay]

Thanks so much I slowed it down and like it better! 🙂

Also, I really liked your Revlon read. The AMEX one was good as well I just felt like you needed to vary the read a bit. The end sounded more natural.

[Kent]

Easy enough to critique, let’s try putting one out there. There is literal hammering and drilling going on just the other side of my studio wall. Recording between that made things more exciting. Better editing practice, too.

I’m hung up on “our time.” It doesn’t sound quite the way I’d say it conversationally, but “ow-er” sounds a little stilted. How would you do it?

History Channel
If you lived before our time, who would you be?
Would you fight your brother for the rights of another? Who would you be?
Would you find new dreams or create wonders?
What if you could choose from a 1,000 yesterdays; a 1,000 lives, when the past was today and the new took your breath away.
Who would you be? What would you feel? How would you live? Who would you love?

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[G Cobb]

this is a nice red,the pace tone changes and diction are very nicegood luck.

[Logan DFD]

I agree with Slemay on varying the pitch on repeated phrases like ‘who would you be’. Also, the phrase ‘how would you live’ was spoken with an emphasis that didn’t quite have the right tone to it. Otherwise, the overall tone of the read was delivered nicely, and your voice compliments it well! Keep it up!

[slemay]

My coach gave me direction to vary the way I say repeating words so on your “who would you be’ maybe try to make it a bit different each time?

[smarlowe]

It’s a really nice read with a very pleasant voice. I’d personally like to hear a bit more “energy” in the read. It’s a little flat. Nothing too crazy, just a little more.

[slemay]

Ok, still rusty but would love any feedback. Again, doing this on my phone so don’t need technical advice. THANKS!!!

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[slemay]

Ok, I am still a little rusty but curious to see how this sounds to anyone that wants to comment. Just a quick recording on my phone so no technical feedback necessary. THANKS!!!

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[smarlowe]

I listened to the Align and Chevy ones. I really like that raspy quality you have to your voice! I liked the Align read, but felt the Chevy read could just be a tad bit faster. Good job overall.

[slemay]

Thanks so much I slowed it down and like it better! 🙂

[Kent]

Good attitude. You can feel it. If you look at it as a graph – like when something is played back – and you see jumps with heightened volume, replace volume with emphasis. Listen to it. There are early jumps, but it flattens a bit for a while.

[slemay]

Great thanks so much and I will listen back!

[samsheeks]

And the last few. Working with a new interface so trying to get the levels dialed in!

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[raven808]

Great pacing and enunciation ! You were very good at keeping your energy up the whole way through! I especially liked the car one!

[slemay]

I think these all sounded great but for some reason Suave was my favorite. Great job!

[samsheeks]

A few more for feedback!

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[atperry]

LOved the read , voice. Expressive in the right places. Maybe a little more, different energy at the end .Director”s choice. Put a smile on my face. Studio sounds great . Keep keepin on

[slemay]

I loved the Connecticut lottery read especially in the beginning because I really believed you won with the fun I heard in your voice if that makes sense. 🙂

[samsheeks]

Any feedback on my “natural” delivery would be great 🙂

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[Logan DFD]

I’d appreciate some feedback on my natural delivery. Which read sounds more natural? Which one fits best?

Balducci’s

Can your food market pass a simple taste test?
At Balducci’s, we put taste first.
This spring, we’re loading up our stores with fresh and chef-crafted foods that are simply bursting with flavor.
Like majestic orange wild king salmon, flown in daily.
And specialties like champagne ham, slow-smoked over hickory chips and glazed with pineapple juice and brown sugar.
Now there’s a store that puts taste first.
Balducci’s.
The food lover’s market.

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[raven808]

I liked the third one as far as it sounding natural! Great job making 3 different takes!

[slemay]

Hi Logan I liked the first one best. I am not an expert but thought that sounded more natural. Only feedback is maybe less pronunciation on the word taste. Nice job!

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