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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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September 17, 2022 at 3:33 pm #80078
bnielsen15
ParticipantHi everyone! Here’s some homework from my latest Narration session. Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. Thank you guys so much!
Legacy Telephony: Welcome to Legacy Group Enterprises. If you know the extension of the person you wish to reach, you may enter it at any time. You may also use the dial by name directory by pressing 9. If you are calling during normal business hours and require immediate assistance, please press zero.
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September 20, 2022 at 7:33 pm #80184
Tates-VO
ParticipantHi your voice sounds so professional and it was very clean and it sounds very friendly
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September 19, 2022 at 2:05 pm #80137
LindsayLaVelle
ParticipantYou managed to make telephony interesting! This comes across as friendly and upbeat. Nice!
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September 16, 2022 at 1:16 pm #80053
raven808
ParticipantPlease ignore the background noise and thank you so much for the feedback everyone 🙂
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September 20, 2022 at 7:35 pm #80185
Tates-VO
ParticipantHi raven I like the video game take and it sounds sarcastic which is very cool and I didn’t hear anything in the background so your all good
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September 17, 2022 at 2:53 pm #80077
Hazaro
ParticipantYou capture the tone well and are a very good reader. I would love to hear a connection to who you’re talking to though, to really reel me in with your authentic self.
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September 16, 2022 at 11:27 am #80050
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September 15, 2022 at 4:01 pm #80026
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September 15, 2022 at 3:40 pm #80017
Hazaro
ParticipantA few more for feedback. Anything helps and I’m grateful for it. From the same assignment working on being even more specific in my commercial reads. Thank you in advance!
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September 22, 2022 at 4:39 pm #80241
cbehrens
ParticipantGreat reads! One thought I had may be to try out different patterns or variations of pitch.
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September 19, 2022 at 4:05 am #80121
Silver Wit
ParticipantI’d say my biggest bit of feedback would be to use a bit more pauses in your read. You know the material well, just give it some room to breath
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September 15, 2022 at 3:30 pm #80012
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September 14, 2022 at 10:29 pm #79995
sfeldman
ParticipantI have my first-ever narration recording next week and I’m a bit nervous hahaha – I’d love feedback on these!! (In coaching, we’re working on my modulation/emphasis, pace, and not being too choppy.)
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September 16, 2022 at 1:31 pm #80057
raven808
ParticipantThe college one suits your voice really well! It felt informative and engaging.
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September 15, 2022 at 3:10 pm #80011
Hazaro
ParticipantNice energy in Mattel and nice pacing in Fibromyalgia. Your voice is great for the college narration – the pacing sped up a bit after a little flub and got rushed though. Don’t worry about that as you can go back and record over it no one will know! 😉
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September 14, 2022 at 9:44 pm #79993
TimberTykes
ParticipantGood Evening, everyone!
I have here another recording, for practice! Feedback or criticism of any kind is much appreciated, as usual.
Since my previous entry, nothing has changed. I’m looking for opinions on glottal stops, involving words that end with ‘st,’ ‘ps,’ ‘xt,’ as well as words with the usual ‘t’ in them. You know the ones, lol. Also, I tried my best to keep the reading at a moderate pace, so please let me know how I did there!
Personally, I feel that I could’ve varied the word ‘babbling’ a bit more, but hey.
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September 16, 2022 at 1:41 pm #80058
raven808
ParticipantAll the “t”s sounded great to me! I’m not sure if it was intentional or part of the scripts but some “pauses” seemed a little long in between words (i.e. after “talking” and before “blue”) but if that was intentional, nevermind! And your voice compliments the script well!
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September 15, 2022 at 2:35 pm #80007
Hazaro
ParticipantNo glottal stops stood out to me, thought it sounded great. The last ‘poke” in “Pokemon” got slightly lost, but easy fix. Read was great IMO!
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September 14, 2022 at 1:49 am #79977
madtrammell
ParticipantHello everyone, I have another practice attempt in preparation for my upcoming narration demo record. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, thank you!
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September 13, 2022 at 10:03 pm #79967
Dominic
ParticipantHello everyone! Third round of reads, any feedback is welcome!
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September 20, 2022 at 7:41 pm #80187
Tates-VO
ParticipantHi Dominic your tone was good and pace was just right and it sounds like your ready to offer a deal to buy so nice job
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September 15, 2022 at 3:00 pm #80010
Hazaro
ParticipantThese are great Dominick, you have a natural storytelling vibe. Pacing, enunciation and tone are all there. I felt that Earth Doc could have been a touch more more intimate as it seemed like you were shouting a bit, but overall these were great!
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September 15, 2022 at 2:54 pm #80009
solin232
ParticipantHi, I enjoyed both of your reads ! didn’t notice anything negative that stands out to me. I thought your pacing was good and you kept me engaged through both reads, great job!
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