[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[latyesemca]

I had fun with this one! Had a bit of a fun personality come through.

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[Terra Ashe]

Nice read fun for sure, one thing you could play around going further with the tone switch of the “This is john now yikes” in the first half to the “but we have a solution that can solve his problem” in the second.

[latyesemca]

I would love some feedback on this take! I wanted to read it as a whisper but not too much of such.

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[Terra Ashe]

I think your tone is right on, not really a whisper but more of lets talk quietly c*s it’s 2am and someone is sleeping next to you so nailed that.
– Trying slowing down/extending the first word, it’s getting a little lost and slowing it down would help establish the low and slow late night tone.
-I’m losing the word “bright light”

[Bwatts]

Hi. I’d appreciate any creative feedback re pace, diction, flow, etc. Thanks.

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[Terra Ashe]

Coconut oil.
– Lovely voice! Feels rushed, but instead of just thinking of slowing down I would just try to focus on who you are talking to specifically. Really tell them about how amazing you’ve realized coconut oil is.
Writers voice
– I think you have a lovely pace and flow with this one. I would maybe try being a little brighter at the top(nothing over the top just a little more friendly) and see what that does to the rest of it.

[Bwatts]

Hi. I would appreciate any creative feedback re pace, diction, flow, etc. Thanks

[Donnamichelle444]

Nice!!!

[Donnamichelle444]

great voice – be mind of the pausing – I am working on that now

[Donnamichelle444]

Love your choice of Script – try acting it out a bit more – draw by your acting

[vlwalinski]

Hi Everyone,

I’m working on prep for a commercial demo and attached is my homework assignment. Any feedback you could give would be great! Thank you for your help!

Best,
Veronica

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[Artist7]

Hello, everyone! I’d appreciate some feedback on these two reads. Do they sound conversational, and how is the sound quality? Thanks so much!

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[Tibrious]

*THIRD UPLOAD* Any and all constructive feedback on the scripts that I have created and used for my commercial voiceovers would be greatly appreciated. I am also looking forward to hearing any feedback regarding the sound quality. This is my third and last upload at this time:

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