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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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September 30, 2024 at 11:07 pm #100729
Karyn Bennitt
ParticipantHi there! Would love to get creative feedback – recorded on my phone. I realize I fumbled “other than that”. I’m very new at this and would love to hear about the pace, tone – anything! Thank you!!
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October 8, 2024 at 10:14 pm #101103
JamesB
ParticipantFirst, I agree with Marcus that it sounds great. You are speaking clearly while keeping conversational. If you hadn’t mentioned the “fumble”, I probably wouldn’t have heard it. For being very new, you’re getting this quicker and better than I am. I could be wrong but there is a slight difference in delivery once you get to the list of differences, to my ear. Not a bad thing, just something that stuck out to me. Keep up the good work!
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November 20, 2024 at 10:02 pm #102513
Catherine Heitman
ParticipantVery nice. Crisp, playful and energetic.
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October 2, 2024 at 11:59 am #100810
MARCUS BOOTH
ParticipantHello Karyn! I just listened to your VO audio file. I must say the way you read your script sounds very conversational and believable. It really sounds like I’m listen to a commercial on the radio. You also sound clear and precise when you speak as well. I listened closely to the file several times and I couldn’t find anything mistakes or any fumbling. I’m a fellow VO peer who is new to VO as well, so I’m learning and improving too. Overall great job.
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September 27, 2024 at 5:24 pm #100693
Sarah DeMike
ParticipantI’m back with a new recording. I was trying to focus on making it sound more natural and conversational, would love to get some feedback from you guys. (still haven’t gotten a great recording space set up, so just creative feedback please)
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September 30, 2024 at 9:35 pm #100727
Karyn Bennitt
ParticipantI think you sound great! I would just slow it down a bit – that is something I struggle with :-). I like your tone the overall read was really great!
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September 27, 2024 at 6:31 pm #100695
JamesB
ParticipantGood job! You have variety throughout the read and nailed emphasis on those ‘money’ words, drawing my attention to them. The delivery sounded conversational, perhaps more like speaking to colleagues on the topic than one-on-one conversation but I think that works for this script. It sounds like you have natural pauses breaking up the word flow making it sound more conversational, but there are times when it sounds almost a little rushed to my ear. That could be reverb from your recording space causing the pause to sound shorter than it actually is, so maybe nothing. Again, good job!
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September 27, 2024 at 12:49 pm #100679
kellcbell87
ParticipantI feel like something is a little off with this read I did. Any suggestions? Thanks in advance!
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September 27, 2024 at 5:17 pm #100689
JamesB
ParticipantI think it’s the same issue I have. The pacing and delivery sound a little like you are just reading a page causing it to seem ‘flat’. I believe that’s what you’re feeling is off about this read. I can only give advice that I hear and usually works for me. Find the words that deserve emphasis and give some variety in your delivery of those words to draw attention to them. Then, once you got that figured out go back and read it as if you are speaking to someone about the product. Hope that helps and hopefully some of our more experienced colleagues will give their thoughts.
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September 29, 2024 at 5:21 pm #100701
kellcbell87
ParticipantI think that’s it – thank you!
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September 25, 2024 at 12:37 am #100589
JamesB
ParticipantHello all, looks like I had one more that I couldn’t add to that last post.
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October 15, 2024 at 8:41 pm #101326
Catherine Hayden
ParticipantThis is great! I don’t have much to say other than that it’s a really strong conversational read. I see some comments on your other audios that one or two spots don’t have that same time of read so I’m guessing you really connect with the content here. Great job!
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September 25, 2024 at 12:36 am #100584
JamesB
ParticipantHello all, looking to get some constructive feedback on these reads. Thank you.
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October 21, 2024 at 10:16 am #101415
Laura Sparks
ParticipantI really enjoyed Curiosity Stream, your voice and use of inflection to make the read engaging to the listener. I notice there are a couple of breaks in the flow, but overall great job!
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September 27, 2024 at 5:21 pm #100690
Sarah DeMike
ParticipantYou’ve got a great variation in pitch in your voice while still sounding natural. It’s really nice to listen to and I love it for commercial-style reads, especially the Curiosity Stream recording. I agree with the previous poster that the Ancestry spot doesn’t quite hit the same, I think because it’s a more personal/intimate subject. That particular copy has a much more solemn vibe and I think that’s the difficulty. Good stuff so far though!
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September 26, 2024 at 12:57 pm #100644
MGoh
ParticipantHi there, I enjoy your voice. The thing I’m not hearing is the thing I’m working on myself — connection. I like your pacing and appreciate how you’re landing on some words or injecting some attitude into others. But it doesn’t still doesn’t feel like you’re talking to me in person. The ancestry clip, for example, I don’t feel like you’re actually asking me the questions so much as reading them. How would you ask me these questions if I were standing right in front of you — and you really wanted to know if it was my mom in those pictures? How can you translate that kind of engaged energy to the copy?
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September 24, 2024 at 9:24 pm #100582
Karyn Bennitt
ParticipantThank you so much!!
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September 23, 2024 at 7:05 pm #100509
kellcbell87
ParticipantI think I nailed this one on the first try! What do you all think? Some night time baby music and bam!
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September 23, 2024 at 6:59 pm #100503
kellcbell87
ParticipantHey! I can’t pick a best take for this American Express spot that I’ve been practicing. Very minimally edited as I wanted to nail the whole thing in one take. Which one do you all like best and why? Thank you so much!
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September 25, 2024 at 8:17 pm #100617
JamesB
ParticipantFirst, great job on all three. In my opinion, take 3 was your best. It had more emphasis on keywords and sounded more conversational than take 1 or 2, to my ear. It also sounded like you had more ‘energy’ at the end of the third take than the other two. All were good, I just liked 3 the best for those reasons. Again, great job!
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September 23, 2024 at 7:01 pm #100507
kellcbell87
ParticipantHere’s the script!
American Express – Private Payments
Do you know me? Probably not. In my business, recognition is always important, but when I’m buying goods online, I prefer a little privacy. With Private Payments from American Express, I get the security of a unique number created for each business transaction I make. Because my private information is my business.
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September 23, 2024 at 1:46 pm #100492
Gmenjin
ParticipantHey all! So I’m just getting into the world of voice acting and decided to take a stab at a script on here. Let me know how I did and what I should improve!
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October 21, 2024 at 10:33 am #101420
Laura Sparks
ParticipantSuper energy and flow, I would like to hear some more variance in tone than volume, especially at the end when he’s the good guy if the money is right. Great job!
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September 25, 2024 at 8:21 pm #100619
JamesB
ParticipantI think the two previous replies are spot on. I look forward to hearing your next take on this and how you work in the suggestions you’re getting here.
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September 24, 2024 at 11:51 am #100558
MGoh
ParticipantGreat energy! Good feeling, but sometimes I can’t make out what you’re saying because the momentum obscures the words. This seems very much an acting exercise, so assuming you’re aiming for drama shows or video games. I agree with the previous poster, being more in the character will help the character’s story land better — right now it’s all the same level of intensity, but if you vary the range, more meaning and empathy will flow.
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September 23, 2024 at 2:57 pm #100500
kellcbell87
ParticipantHey there! Great energy in the read, but a bit over the top at times. Try to really find your character’s intention and that may help ground it more.
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September 23, 2024 at 12:00 pm #100488
MGoh
ParticipantHello, here are two new clips where I’m trying what I think is the appropriate voice for the copy given the finished commercials. Please let me know how authentic it sounds (though I never order a drink this way), and please, can anyone hear my laptop fan??? Thanks!
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September 27, 2024 at 5:13 pm #100688
Sarah DeMike
ParticipantI think the Ketel One spot is a great use of your voice. You’ve really got the sultry vibe going for you. I like that you take pauses, but I think they might be a little bit long, particularly in the Dog recording. It’s got a good amount of feeling and a natural sound, but I think the train of thought gets a little muddy/choppy because of the length of the pauses.
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September 23, 2024 at 1:53 pm #100496
Gmenjin
ParticipantI can’t hear the fan in either of these! Both are pretty solid! I like the fluctuation in your voice on the Ketel one file. Very cool!
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