Feedback Forum

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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    The Edge Studio Feedback Forum is the best place for you to post a recording and get feedback from the community! Record in your home studio, upload the file, and see what people think. This is a great place to get some advice on your technique, on your home studio, or to ask for people’s opinion on your reads. Remember, that this is a community forum, so please remain positive and encourage your peers in helpful ways. If Edge Studio feels that a user is too negative, or antagonizing other members of the community, they will have their posts deleted, and risk being banned from further communication. 

    Stay positive, listen to each other, and have fun!

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  • #96252
    Bwatts
    Participant

    Hi. I would appreciate any creative feedback re pace, diction, flow, etc. Thanks

  • #96059
    Donnamichelle444
    Participant

    Nice!!!

  • #96058
    Donnamichelle444
    Participant

    great voice – be mind of the pausing – I am working on that now

  • #96057
    Donnamichelle444
    Participant

    Love your choice of Script – try acting it out a bit more – draw by your acting

  • #95992
    vlwalinski
    Participant

    Hi Everyone,

    I’m working on prep for a commercial demo and attached is my homework assignment. Any feedback you could give would be great! Thank you for your help!

    Best,
    Veronica

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  • #95976
    Artist7
    Participant

    Hello, everyone! I’d appreciate some feedback on these two reads. Do they sound conversational, and how is the sound quality? Thanks so much!

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  • #95799
    Tibrious
    Participant

    *THIRD UPLOAD* Any and all constructive feedback on the scripts that I have created and used for my commercial voiceovers would be greatly appreciated. I am also looking forward to hearing any feedback regarding the sound quality. This is my third and last upload at this time:

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  • #95794
    Tibrious
    Participant

    *SECOND UPLOAD* Any and all constructive feedback on the scripts that I have created and used for my commercial voiceovers would be greatly appreciated. I am also looking forward to hearing any feedback regarding the sound quality. This is my second upload:

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  • #95789
    Tibrious
    Participant

    Any and all constructive feedback on the scripts that I have created and used for my commercial voiceovers would be greatly appreciated. I am also looking forward to hearing any feedback regarding the sound quality. This is my first upload, more to follow:

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    • #95982
      JamesB
      Participant

      Just on the scripts, right? As far as quality, it sounds a little quiet to me BUT please get multiple opinions on that before making adjustments to your recording levels because it might be my rig and your volume is fine.

      Black Decker One Touch Coffee Maker: I liked this script. Can fit into a 15-second spot, nails selling points, and has a fun pitch.

      Erie Insurance: A lot of repetitive word usage. Then again, it is what is being ‘sold’. I think the second half is verbal gold.

      Nicholas Coffee: This is a solid script. A good 15-second spot selling a brand of coffee that has something for every coffee drinker.

      For your reads. I liked them all. One Touch Coffee could have been slowed down a little,it sounded rushed to me. Erie Insurance delivery was flat to my ear, I think you’re going for serious/professional. The Nicholas Coffee recordings were both good, the “Nicholas-Coffee-2” was money though. The first word sounds clipped, missing the “kah” on crafted.

  • #95784
    Terra Ashe
    Participant

    Hi! I’m working on scripts to add a PSA spot to my demo. I will only end up choosing one, and all are just drafts below, so plenty of room to change things. Would love any feedback. Thanks!

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