[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[latyesemca]

I would love some feedback on this take! I wanted to read it as a whisper but not too much of such.

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[Terra Ashe]

I think your tone is right on, not really a whisper but more of lets talk quietly c*s it’s 2am and someone is sleeping next to you so nailed that.
– Trying slowing down/extending the first word, it’s getting a little lost and slowing it down would help establish the low and slow late night tone.
-I’m losing the word “bright light”

[Bwatts]

Hi. I’d appreciate any creative feedback re pace, diction, flow, etc. Thanks.

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[Terra Ashe]

Coconut oil.
– Lovely voice! Feels rushed, but instead of just thinking of slowing down I would just try to focus on who you are talking to specifically. Really tell them about how amazing you’ve realized coconut oil is.
Writers voice
– I think you have a lovely pace and flow with this one. I would maybe try being a little brighter at the top(nothing over the top just a little more friendly) and see what that does to the rest of it.

[Bwatts]

Hi. I would appreciate any creative feedback re pace, diction, flow, etc. Thanks

[Donnamichelle444]

Nice!!!

[Donnamichelle444]

great voice – be mind of the pausing – I am working on that now

[Donnamichelle444]

Love your choice of Script – try acting it out a bit more – draw by your acting

[vlwalinski]

Hi Everyone,

I’m working on prep for a commercial demo and attached is my homework assignment. Any feedback you could give would be great! Thank you for your help!

Best,
Veronica

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[Artist7]

Hello, everyone! I’d appreciate some feedback on these two reads. Do they sound conversational, and how is the sound quality? Thanks so much!

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[Tibrious]

*THIRD UPLOAD* Any and all constructive feedback on the scripts that I have created and used for my commercial voiceovers would be greatly appreciated. I am also looking forward to hearing any feedback regarding the sound quality. This is my third and last upload at this time:

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[Tibrious]

*SECOND UPLOAD* Any and all constructive feedback on the scripts that I have created and used for my commercial voiceovers would be greatly appreciated. I am also looking forward to hearing any feedback regarding the sound quality. This is my second upload:

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