[David Goldberg]

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[detoomey]

Howdy folks – no home studio yet, but hoping to get some general thoughts/feedback on this read. Thanks very much.

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[Tom_S]

Very nice voice and it sounded well-recorded. I like how you told a story and maintained my attention.

[detoomey]

Appreciate the note Tom

[hsturgis]

This feels really conversational, in the best way! I feel like you are really painting the picture of what the commercial would look like. And I think pacing and tone were appropriate as well.

[gwenthevoice]

Hello All! Here is a practice script for the awesome Nordic Track! Any comments are welcome but I especially would like feedback on the following:
•Does my read sound conversational?
•How is my diction?
•Working on my pace – how is it?
Am I reading my copy with a good flow or do I sound choppy?
How is my audio?
Thanks in advance!

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[detoomey]

Gwen. you have a very smooth tone and quite soothing to listen to. Lovely. It’s a bit controlled, and could be messier and a pacing could have more variety. Overall, you have a strong vocal presence that draws you in.

[gwenthevoice]

Detoomey, thank you very much for that insightful feedback! I will keep this in mind and try to vary my pace a bit. 🙂

[Earthbul]

Any and all feedback is welcome and appreciated. Script written by Chat GPT for an existing company.

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[detoomey]

Earthbull, very strong right out the gate and very consistent. Voice is buttery and inviting and it worked well with the mood of the piece.

[MattSchonberg]

Hi all, working on a Commercial demo and posting here for feedback on my practice. Thanks! Script is The REI Difference in the library.

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[Terra Ashe]

I think you have a nice pace! Sometimes you’re emphasizing certain words a bit hard, maybe try a “shrug it off” take to bring in a little more converstaional-ness to it, but good job!

[gwenthevoice]

Hi everyone! I am practicing for a commercial demo. Looking for feedback to this Nutro dog food ad. For starters, here are some questions I have:
Does my read sound conversational?
How is my diction?
Working on my pace – how is it?
Am I reading my copy with a good flow or do I sound choppy?
How is my audio?
Thank you in advance!

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[Brian Lakes]

Hi Gwen!
Your voice is very calming. I like it! Your pace and diction are good, you had a pause in there between full and active lives. A tad more inflection to sound even more believable. Audio sounds good!
Overall good job. Keep it up!

[gwenthevoice]

Brian, thank you for that feedback! I will keep this in mind and add more inflection and be sure to watch out for pauses! 🙂

[AirlinesOfficeDesk]

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[rjoesbury]

Hi all, first time poster. Looking for feedback on pacing, breathing, sound quality and voice. Thanks.

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[Kim Meade]

Please review and provide constructive criticism of my Coronavirus public service announcement.

Thanks

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[gwenthevoice]

This is a good audio, good pace, relatively upbeat. You have just a bit of mouth noise but that can be reduced. Check out Waves plugins. Particularly, the Waves NS (noise suppression) and the Waves DeEsser.

[Frantz]

Hello everyone, just practicing here- creative feedback regarding my tone/flow/pace is appreciated!

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[gwenthevoice]

Your voice is almost musical! 🙂 Good pace, good pitch. One minor thing… On the grammarly script the word ‘meet’ disappears… You seem to rush through that. Beyond that, I would not change a thing.

[waninick]

Hey gang. Wanted to post something to see if my audio stack is up to the task. This is a clip where the first part is dry, straight from the mic. It is then repeated with R10 De-click, De-Noise, and ProEQ3, all in Studio One 6.5 (not the Pro version).

Any feedback is welcome. Thanks.

TimG

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[MattSchonberg]

Hi all! Working on my second demo now, doing some between classes practice/homework recording commercial practices, any feedback is appreciated.

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[Terra Ashe]

Hi! You have a very bright and positive tone with this, which I think is right direction for it. I think it could be a more conversational(you had a fabulous conversational part at the “no promises on less mess but definitely…” section try bringing in more of that) if you don’t already have someone specific you are telling about this. One other thing, there is a lot of this vs that in this script, play with those differences more. Good job!

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