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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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September 15, 2022 at 4:01 pm #80026
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September 15, 2022 at 3:40 pm #80017
Hazaro
ParticipantA few more for feedback. Anything helps and I’m grateful for it. From the same assignment working on being even more specific in my commercial reads. Thank you in advance!
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September 22, 2022 at 4:39 pm #80241
cbehrens
ParticipantGreat reads! One thought I had may be to try out different patterns or variations of pitch.
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September 19, 2022 at 4:05 am #80121
Silver Wit
ParticipantI’d say my biggest bit of feedback would be to use a bit more pauses in your read. You know the material well, just give it some room to breath
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September 15, 2022 at 3:30 pm #80012
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September 14, 2022 at 10:29 pm #79995
sfeldman
ParticipantI have my first-ever narration recording next week and I’m a bit nervous hahaha – I’d love feedback on these!! (In coaching, we’re working on my modulation/emphasis, pace, and not being too choppy.)
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September 16, 2022 at 1:31 pm #80057
raven808
ParticipantThe college one suits your voice really well! It felt informative and engaging.
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September 15, 2022 at 3:10 pm #80011
Hazaro
ParticipantNice energy in Mattel and nice pacing in Fibromyalgia. Your voice is great for the college narration – the pacing sped up a bit after a little flub and got rushed though. Don’t worry about that as you can go back and record over it no one will know! 😉
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September 14, 2022 at 9:44 pm #79993
TimberTykes
ParticipantGood Evening, everyone!
I have here another recording, for practice! Feedback or criticism of any kind is much appreciated, as usual.
Since my previous entry, nothing has changed. I’m looking for opinions on glottal stops, involving words that end with ‘st,’ ‘ps,’ ‘xt,’ as well as words with the usual ‘t’ in them. You know the ones, lol. Also, I tried my best to keep the reading at a moderate pace, so please let me know how I did there!
Personally, I feel that I could’ve varied the word ‘babbling’ a bit more, but hey.
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September 16, 2022 at 1:41 pm #80058
raven808
ParticipantAll the “t”s sounded great to me! I’m not sure if it was intentional or part of the scripts but some “pauses” seemed a little long in between words (i.e. after “talking” and before “blue”) but if that was intentional, nevermind! And your voice compliments the script well!
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September 15, 2022 at 2:35 pm #80007
Hazaro
ParticipantNo glottal stops stood out to me, thought it sounded great. The last ‘poke” in “Pokemon” got slightly lost, but easy fix. Read was great IMO!
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September 14, 2022 at 1:49 am #79977
madtrammell
ParticipantHello everyone, I have another practice attempt in preparation for my upcoming narration demo record. Any feedback is greatly appreciated, thank you!
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September 13, 2022 at 10:03 pm #79967
Dominic
ParticipantHello everyone! Third round of reads, any feedback is welcome!
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September 20, 2022 at 7:41 pm #80187
Tates-VO
ParticipantHi Dominic your tone was good and pace was just right and it sounds like your ready to offer a deal to buy so nice job
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September 15, 2022 at 3:00 pm #80010
Hazaro
ParticipantThese are great Dominick, you have a natural storytelling vibe. Pacing, enunciation and tone are all there. I felt that Earth Doc could have been a touch more more intimate as it seemed like you were shouting a bit, but overall these were great!
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September 15, 2022 at 2:54 pm #80009
solin232
ParticipantHi, I enjoyed both of your reads ! didn’t notice anything negative that stands out to me. I thought your pacing was good and you kept me engaged through both reads, great job!
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September 13, 2022 at 6:18 pm #79959
Artist7
ParticipantThanks for the positive, helpful feedback, latyesemca! Will try to incorporate the good tips during the next read!
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September 13, 2022 at 5:09 pm #79954
AJS10
ParticipantHello! Would love some input on this file — mainly looking for input on the audio quality not so much performance. Right now I’m just focusing on how my voices sounds, background, etc, to see if I need any home studio improvements – if you’re tech-savvy enough to help! Thank you!!
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September 12, 2022 at 8:54 pm #79922
gigihernandezdoesit
ParticipantHello gorgeous people!
Wanted to post a couple takes from practice this week. I’m working in my coaching on varying my sound and tone for different types of commercials, using pace in a way that makes sense for each script. I’m also still working on developing my spanish language scripts! If you speak spanish or have an ear for it, would you take a listen?
Keep in mind I’m still only recording on my phone and not looking for technical feedback! Thank you!Attachments:
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September 15, 2022 at 4:03 pm #80028
Hazaro
ParticipantReally liked your pace and tone for Nike. Purina was a lighter tone in comparison and started well, would have loved to have heard more of it to see how you played it out to make a better assessment. My apologies as I can’t really give feedback on Spanish Allstate but the tone and energy was definitely different!
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