[David Goldberg]

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[RGK3]

Hello,

I’ve attached two reads in advance of my next session. I’d appreciate any feedback on the reads themselves. Many thanks in advance!

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[Grace17]

The Beringer read is believable(doesn’t sound like you’re reading) and confident. It’s great that your attitude shifts to be more warm when mentioning that “everything we’ve learned is yours to enjoy, every time you pour a glass of our wine.” because more warmth fits what’s being said there. I advice practicing the script with other attitudes as this one was very serious. Try more warm attitudes for example, like thankful, Playful, reminiscent.

The serious attitude of the Wachovia read fits, though it’s always helpful to practice with other attitudes than the obvious. Try to incorporate more flow from word-to-word, in Wachovia the words are very blocked off from each other so that it sounds a little choppy.

[adarn010]

Happy November to all! Please feel free to review and critique these two recordings. All feedback is very much appreciated by this novice 🙂

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[Gill]

Nice read on Jack the Ripper, very engaging and kept my attention also your flow is good
Be careful with over exaggerating your words.

Financial Advise-The pace is slow and should be a little faster, your pausing frequently causes the read to be choppy try reading this script the way you did at the beginning of Jack the Ripper. Also, be aware of glottal stops as you had quite a few in this read, be mindful also of Ta which should be Too.

[adarn010]

Thanks for the feedback. Noted.

[Tates-VO]

These are the last two let me know what you think?

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[Gill]

Nice read on Jack the Ripper, very engaging and kept my attention also your flow is good
Be careful with over exaggerating your words.

Financial Advise-The pace is slow and should be a little faster, your pausing frequently causes the read to be choppy try reading this script the way you did at the beginning of Jack the Ripper. Also, be aware of glottal stops as you had quite a few in this read, be mindful also of Ta which should be Too.

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[Tates-VO]

Here more recordings let me know what you think

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[Hazaro]

Hi Tates. I like how you chose a tone with each one and the first 2 were relatively easy to follow but be mindful of keeping the pace and not speeding up too much.
The meditation was clearer throughout – rushing just a bit at the end. Felt you could have been more relaxed with it if the listener is to do the same. Really liked your energy in the Doc on Jazz but the pacing got too fast as you rushed words in the beginning and towards the end of sentences that got lost.

[Tates-VO]

Here is my recording I would like to here some feedback

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[Hazaro]

Overall on these I would say to be mindful of your pacing and diction. It sounds like you’re rushing through the text and words get swallowed and lost.

[madtrammell]

Hello everyone, hope you are having a great start to the week! I have another narration practice read that I would very much appreciate any feedback on. Thank you in advance and Happy Halloween!

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[Pamela B]

Great read! You pulled me in from the first word, and. I wanted to hear the rest of the story.

[Ksmack]

Great voice. Alot of personality to the read.

[Silver Wit]

Your voice has certainly drawn me in. I was thinking, “Yes, what about Amelia Earhart? Do go on.” So kudos there.

[Tates-VO]

It sounds so good nice pace

[MayeWest]

Looking for positive feedback!!

Happy Halloween!!

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[MayeWest]

Happy Halloween!! Would appreciate some positive feedback!

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[Silver Wit]

This is really nice. You have a great voice for putting someone at ease.

[Tates-VO]

That’s sounds nice just a little staticky but it’s good

[Ksmack]

Happy Halloween all.I have attached a few more demos for my last class before my demo prep. I have been concentrating on my audio processing chain such as graphic EQ and compression, normalization. Feel free to listen and Critique. Thank you so much for your feedback last time. Thanks.

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[marioh5]

Happy Halloween all! I am close to recording my demo and I would be grateful for any and all feedback for the attached recordings, I hope y’all are having a great day and thanks for the help!

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[Hazaro]

Nice job on these marioh5. I don’t know if it’s where or what you’re recording with that sounds like you’re really projecting though- which wouldn’t be necessary. You’re clear and intentional with your reads and it kept me engaged.

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