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  • #81245
    adarn010
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    Happy November to all! Please feel free to review and critique these two recordings. All feedback is very much appreciated by this novice 🙂

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    • #81259
      Gill
      Participant

      Nice read on Jack the Ripper, very engaging and kept my attention also your flow is good
      Be careful with over exaggerating your words.

      Financial Advise-The pace is slow and should be a little faster, your pausing frequently causes the read to be choppy try reading this script the way you did at the beginning of Jack the Ripper. Also, be aware of glottal stops as you had quite a few in this read, be mindful also of Ta which should be Too.

      • #81299
        adarn010
        Participant

        Thanks for the feedback. Noted.

  • #81213
    Tates-VO
    Participant

    These are the last two let me know what you think?

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    • #81258
      Gill
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      Nice read on Jack the Ripper, very engaging and kept my attention also your flow is good
      Be careful with over exaggerating your words.

      Financial Advise-The pace is slow and should be a little faster, your pausing frequently causes the read to be choppy try reading this script the way you did at the beginning of Jack the Ripper. Also, be aware of glottal stops as you had quite a few in this read, be mindful also of Ta which should be Too.

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  • #81208
    Tates-VO
    Participant

    Here more recordings let me know what you think

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    • #81301
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Hi Tates. I like how you chose a tone with each one and the first 2 were relatively easy to follow but be mindful of keeping the pace and not speeding up too much.
      The meditation was clearer throughout – rushing just a bit at the end. Felt you could have been more relaxed with it if the listener is to do the same. Really liked your energy in the Doc on Jazz but the pacing got too fast as you rushed words in the beginning and towards the end of sentences that got lost.

  • #81203
    Tates-VO
    Participant

    Here is my recording I would like to here some feedback

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    • #81307
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Overall on these I would say to be mindful of your pacing and diction. It sounds like you’re rushing through the text and words get swallowed and lost.

  • #81201
    madtrammell
    Participant

    Hello everyone, hope you are having a great start to the week! I have another narration practice read that I would very much appreciate any feedback on. Thank you in advance and Happy Halloween!

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    • #81398
      Pamela B
      Participant

      Great read! You pulled me in from the first word, and. I wanted to hear the rest of the story.

    • #81257
      Ksmack
      Participant

      Great voice. Alot of personality to the read.

    • #81242
      Silver Wit
      Participant

      Your voice has certainly drawn me in. I was thinking, “Yes, what about Amelia Earhart? Do go on.” So kudos there.

    • #81218
      Tates-VO
      Participant

      It sounds so good nice pace

  • #81198
    MayeWest
    Participant

    Looking for positive feedback!!

    Happy Halloween!!

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  • #81196
    MayeWest
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    Happy Halloween!! Would appreciate some positive feedback!

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    • #81243
      Silver Wit
      Participant

      This is really nice. You have a great voice for putting someone at ease.

    • #81219
      Tates-VO
      Participant

      That’s sounds nice just a little staticky but it’s good

  • #81192
    Ksmack
    Participant

    Happy Halloween all.I have attached a few more demos for my last class before my demo prep. I have been concentrating on my audio processing chain such as graphic EQ and compression, normalization. Feel free to listen and Critique. Thank you so much for your feedback last time. Thanks.

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  • #81185
    marioh5
    Participant

    Happy Halloween all! I am close to recording my demo and I would be grateful for any and all feedback for the attached recordings, I hope y’all are having a great day and thanks for the help!

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    • #81308
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Nice job on these marioh5. I don’t know if it’s where or what you’re recording with that sounds like you’re really projecting though- which wouldn’t be necessary. You’re clear and intentional with your reads and it kept me engaged.

  • #81174
    Em0712
    Participant

    Hi Everyone
    Please give feedback!xox

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    • #81220
      Tates-VO
      Participant

      I like the pace it’s just need a bit more excitement

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