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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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October 27, 2022 at 4:34 pm #81104
Hazaro
ParticipantAnd last one before a session on attitude focus. Realize the sound got a bit muffled in the second one, construction all of a sudden was happening and bummed that I couldn’t rehearse for a bit longer.
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October 30, 2022 at 5:02 pm #81147
ShellyMadison
ParticipantCan definitely hear the difference between these two. Well done 🙂
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October 26, 2022 at 10:25 pm #81097
Hazaro
ParticipantStill working on focusing on my attitude in my reads. Hope they’re coming through clearly.
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November 1, 2022 at 4:40 pm #81240
Silver Wit
ParticipantVery nice difference between both reads. Subtle, but I could hear the difference.
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October 26, 2022 at 8:42 pm #81089
phillipjlee
ParticipantHello everyone,
I am practicing on my narration voiceover for homework. I would greatly like feedback. Recorded on phone, please excuse the low quality.
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October 31, 2022 at 7:56 pm #81226
Tates-VO
ParticipantVery nice vocals and the pace is nice and slow good job
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October 30, 2022 at 5:09 pm #81148
ShellyMadison
ParticipantGreat pace and you have a lovely, full tone to your voice. I recommend marking up a script to give emphasis to important phrases and really honing in on an audience in your mind. You vary your pitch, but otherwise each word seems to have the same weight so it is sounding a bit robotic.
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October 26, 2022 at 12:15 am #81082
Unity
ParticipantHi. The attached file was downloaded as a homework assignment. Feedback would be most appreciated. Thanks so much for your time.
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October 27, 2022 at 8:29 pm #81114
RCampos
ParticipantHi Unity,
I think your voice and delivery bring a gravitas and seriousness – which are both essential to this issue. I just have a couple of small notes:
1. At the very beginning, I don’t hear the “s” in “As a parent…”
2. I think you could give more emphasis to “Autism Speaks” and the “Ad Council” at the end, since presumably they’re paying for this ad and want to be clearly identified.
But other than that, nice conversational tone and effective delivery.
If you have a moment, I would greatly appreciate a comment on my Costa Rica VO, posted 10-27 at 7:57pm. I also have a Cool Jazz VO – posted on 10-25. Thank you!
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October 25, 2022 at 6:02 pm #81071
RCampos
ParticipantHi Everybody!
I would really appreciate your feedback on this read. I’m working on a conversational read while still honoring the “smooth coolness” of a jazz radio station.Attachments:
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November 11, 2022 at 4:23 pm #81557
cbehrens
ParticipantI think your overall read aligns with a conversational feeling; I appreciate your inflection on the word “grooviest”! One thing just to keep in mind may be to play with saying repetitive words like “cool” in different ways, offering more variation. Great job!
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November 1, 2022 at 4:46 pm #81241
Silver Wit
ParticipantYou’ve certainly got the voice for “cool jazz.” Reminds me of the hosts of some jazz stations in New York.
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October 31, 2022 at 7:58 pm #81227
Tates-VO
ParticipantIt sounds very cool nice tone in the voice.
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October 25, 2022 at 7:07 pm #81078
Declan Waters
ParticipantI think your voice and the tone you chose matches the script very well. One critique – It sounds to me as if you end most sentences the same way. Shooting for differentiation particularly at the end of your sentences would help to pace the read and keep listeners engaged. I hope you find this helpful
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October 25, 2022 at 5:09 pm #81052
Silver Wit
ParticipantSome audio for my homework. experimenting with different attitudes. Let me know how they sound. (part 4)
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October 25, 2022 at 6:59 pm #81077
Declan Waters
ParticipantI really like how well you differentiate between the two attitudes that you’re going for. I think blending the two moods to some extent would make for a very convincing read. At first defeated by the pain, but then convicted and confident about the solution that Excedrin provides. Well done
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October 25, 2022 at 6:09 pm #81073
RCampos
ParticipantHi Silver Wit,
I like what you’re doing in version 2, but overall, I prefer version 1 because it’s cleaner and clearer. Version 2 gives me a sense that you’re acting out the headache, and this thought distracts me a bit from your words. I like how you vary the intonation on: throbbing, tension and pain – but I think a more upbeat ending might help. I would appreciate any feedback you can give me on my Cool-Jazz read above. Thank you!
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October 25, 2022 at 5:08 pm #81049
Silver Wit
ParticipantSome audio for my homework. experimenting with different attitudes. Let me know how they sound. (part 3)
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October 25, 2022 at 5:07 pm #81046
Silver Wit
ParticipantSome audio for my homework. experimenting with different attitudes. Let me know how they sound. (part 2)
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October 25, 2022 at 5:04 pm #81043
Silver Wit
ParticipantSome audio for my homework. experimenting with different attitudes. Let me know how they sound.
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October 25, 2022 at 2:57 am #81033
Ymin33
ParticipantHi everyone it’s nice to meet you! I’d appreciate some feedback regarding pacing and whether these commercial samples are engaging. Don’t have a home recording studio yet, working on the technical aspects. Thank you
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October 25, 2022 at 2:58 am #81035
Ymin33
ParticipantGoing to try attaching the other one again
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October 25, 2022 at 6:22 pm #81075
RCampos
ParticipantVery nice read of peas and carrots. It sounds like you felt it and I especially like the bit of magic you create at the end with “let your adventure begin.” Just a few minor critiques. You fade a bit at the end and I think instead you should emphasize the last words. The words “games” and “activities” run together for me. I think you could make a tiny pause in between them and also differentiate how they sound. Finally – you emphasize “your” and I don’t think you need to. I think that rhythmically it would sound better to put the emphasis on “account.” I would much appreciate any feedback you can give me on my Cool-Jazz read above. Thanks!
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October 25, 2022 at 4:52 pm #81039
Silver Wit
ParticipantI like your peas and carrots read. Had a very nurturing quality that really came across
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