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  • #81167
    ShellyMadison
    Participant

    Another exercise in varying my reads. Thank you everyone for your talent!

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    • #81309
      Hazaro
      Participant

      I thought both of these were good and appropriate ShellyMadison, great job!

    • #81221
      Tates-VO
      Participant

      Very nice and I love calmness of your voice with this piece

    • #81217
      Thomas_D
      Participant

      Hey ShellyMadison! Loved the Rome2 read! I was about to comment on Rome1 and then heard the second take and thought “yup! That’s the one”.

      Great read

  • #81160
    Thomas_D
    Participant

    Hi All,

    Here are two more practice reads. My attempt here was to try and sound more natural without sounding like I’m reading from the script. Any and all feedback is welcomed, as always.

    Thanks in advance

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    • #81222
      Tates-VO
      Participant

      I feel like the ready player does more natural while other sounds it’s being rushed a little

    • #81216
      jadethevo
      Participant

      Hi Thomas,

      The Ready Player One recording feels a bit more natural to me. For Wise Man and Hope, I think it would beneficial for you to enunciate just a little bit more, and think of a friend as you speak.

  • #81157
    TheVoiceTalentSL
    Participant

    Hey, can I have some feedback on this dialogue style voiceover? Feedback most appreciated. In terms o fdelivery, voice modulation, and overall quality?

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    • #81311
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Your delivery was great, maybe just differentiating the voices a bit more so it’s clear when it’s a different character. There was some background noise affecting the sound quality overall though.

  • #81154
    heimowit33
    Participant

    Aside from technical issues. Can you please provide some feedback on my read? I am beginning to work on my commercial demo.

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  • #81150
    ShellyMadison
    Participant

    Trying for variety in my audience and tone. Will take and appreciate any feedback but specifically focused on providing multiple takes on the same script. TIA!

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    • #81316
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Sounded a little unsure in the second one, but then you bounced back. Felt the difference between the two and both appropriate for the spot.

  • #81146
    Artist7
    Participant

    Hi, Unity-

    The overall read was good. Two things.. your words seemed to run together at “your” and “child”….sounded like “chore child.” Also sounded like you were “reading” towards the end (“Brought to you by Autism Speaks…..”).

  • #81142
    Artist7
    Participant

    Hi, Everyone-

    I would appreciate some feedback (no technical/production related comments) for these two homework recordings, especially around overall flow. Thanks for your time!

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    • #81319
      Hazaro
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      You have such a clear, sweet and trustworthy voice. It flowed quite nicely as well. There were a couple of pauses in PNC that could maybe be tightened up a bit but a minor tweak that didn’t take away from the read IMO.

  • #81135
    MayeWest
    Participant

    Hello! Looking for positive feedback.

    Thank you!!

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    • #81223
      Tates-VO
      Participant

      Raiders one I feel it was very nice and but it sounds quiet but it’s good

  • #81126
    Steve Z-A
    Participant

    Hi Folks- This is my first time posting recordings and I look forward to working with you all. Thanks in advance for any feedback you might have. I am working in the narration genre and with these pieces I am wondering about my pace, and also the “conversational” vs “narrative” dilemma with my presentation. Thanks!

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    • #81320
      Hazaro
      Participant

      Good job with these zakon. The difference in tone for both was palpable and appropriate. As well as your clarity and pacing.

    • #81224
      Tates-VO
      Participant

      The earth one sounds clean like a documentary would sound like. Nice

  • #81119
    Cheechman
    Participant

    Heer is another audition from Mandy’s. Script is below.
    It’s a grandpa telling a story to kids.

    Script to read: (Speaking to children in a gentle tone, telling a story).
    ‘Well, he had been in this place for such a long time he’d forgotten how it felt to do anything else.
    I think he was scared to move. Scared of what might happen if he did.
    ‘ ‘I will come back tomorrow with another bowl of soup for you, a bit bigger than this one and even more magical!’
    ‘It’s all I could do.
    The sad little fella had to make the choice for himself whether or not to move from the place he had been sitting for so long.
    It was something that needed to change inside him and I knew it would take a little time so it was best to leave him be.’

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