[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[Shawn]

Hi All. Posting my first homework practice reads. Amy feedback much appreciated!

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[cbehrens]

Your reads have a nice flow and pacing! When comparing each of these, perhaps think about the specific emotional tone or point of view for each to create more distinction between each read — just a thought. Sounds great!

[Steve Z-A]

Hi folks. Pretty new to all this but very appreciative of any feedback. Wondering especially about my pacing, and if the tone seems appropriate, but all comments are welcome!

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[Shawn]

I thought the Beethoven read was great. Comfortable and interested/ing. Well done!

[Steve Z-A]

Thanks for listening and the comment.

[Bil-Bo]

Coldwell Banker Real Estate

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[Shawn]

Great commercial for Coldwell Banker. Well done with the music. Trustworthy, relatable and interesting intonation to keep me engaged.

[Steve Z-A]

This is great! It sounds like a commercial Caldwell-Banker would be glad to use.

[Mike_Control]

Hey guys,

Here are two quick VO’s for some homework. One is for a wine company, the other for JC Penny. By all means, comment on whatever comes to mind. Thanks!

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[adarn010]

Didn’t realize in my prior post that the file sizes would exceed the max allowed per post. I will attempt to post each file separately.

[adarn010]

Hello All,

As part of my HW assignment I have uploaded two Narration files, one Corp and the other Documentary.

All feedback is much appreciated! Thanks in advance.

[VoicesByJeff]

Hey guys! Getting some more practice before my first demo record. Any and all feedback is appreciated, thank you!

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[Shawn]

really liked the medmal read. Trusting and serious. Enough urgency without being salesy. Well done!

[VoicesByJeff]

Appreciate the feedback!

[VoicesByJeff]

And a few more for practice. I tried to challenge myself to go a little outside my wheelhouse to see if I could strike different tones and get a sense of what my vocal range can be.

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[LaurynM]

I have some more hw, but loving the opportunity to just read through a bunch of copy and get your feedback. I’ve worked on slowing down and smoothing my breathing out. Would love feedback on my tone, inflection, energy, etc. Thank you!

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[Steve Z-A]

These are both great Lauryn. Good inflection made them interesting to listen to, and I would say they have the appropriate energy for the subjects.

[LaurynM]

Thank you so much! I appreciate your feedback!

[ShellyMadison]

good evening lovelies
I’m starting my coaching sessions for commercial so here’s my first go at some scripts for homework. Looking for all the usual: diction, pace, inflection, conversational tone, etc. Give me what you’ve got! And thanks in advance.

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[Declan Waters]

Your delivery is great, you’re confident in the product and the listener knows it. The only thing I can think of for sure is that the tones sound similar to me – while they’re both very good I wonder if the Purina One read could be a bit more playful. Great work

[ShellyMadison]

Thank you for the feedback! I often want to go bigger but worry about it being too much. I appreciate the permission to play and see where it takes me 🙂

[LaurynM]

You have a really lovely tone. Very smooth and comforting. I would pay attention to your breaths in between each phrase. Focus a bit more on fluidity between the phrases you are placing a breath in between, for example, “…home theater// it’s so sophisticated…” and “…fingertips// now if he could…” and watch “Home Theater from Harvey,” that’s the brand, and it sounded like you pulled back on that phrase a little, but overall this is great and very sellable! Great work!

Definitely watch your breathing between each phrase in Purina One, you tend to breath and pause, as opposed to pause and then breath into the next phrase. Your tone on each phrase is cute, I love hearing a smile on each one, even if you’re not actually smiling, your tone seems to smile through. Great job! I hope this was helpful 🙂

[ShellyMadison]

Very helpful, thank you!

[Benn Pharr IV]

G’evening all. Two more readings for my homework assignment. Thanks in advance.

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