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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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December 6, 2022 at 1:52 am #82129
Bil-Bo
ParticipantDuracell Quantum Batteries TV Audio Track
SFX: Children Giggling: Then Music Under
This Duracell truck has some very special power.
It’s filled with new Duracell Quantum batteries.
These red batteries are so powerful that this year
they’ll power all the Hasbro toys donated to “Toys for Tots”.
Wanna help power some smiles?SFX: Children Giggling: Then Music Under
Duracell. Trusted everywhere.
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December 5, 2022 at 3:23 am #82108
riteshpatil
Participanthttps://mobisoftinfotech.com/mobisoft-company/app-development-company-in-pune
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December 5, 2022 at 2:21 am #82104
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December 13, 2022 at 8:45 pm #82299
RCori
ParticipantI agree with pp the reads sound a little on the performance side, and would benefit from being more conversational (working on this as well my coach). I like your diction in the pieces, but I think as you work on them being more conversational the flow of your words and pitch will sound much better. Great job though!
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December 7, 2022 at 3:51 pm #82189
Stephen Winburn
ParticipantPronunciation and diction are excellent and the reading is very smooth!
My only notes are on tone and conversationality in both pieces. I played both pieces backn to back and the tone was remarkably similar.
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December 4, 2022 at 4:22 pm #82089
ryanp.bogie
ParticipantHello,
Attached are two narration pieces I’ve been working on. Any feedback is appreciated.
Thank you!
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December 4, 2022 at 3:30 pm #82087
DanielButtrey
ParticipantWorking on a narration homework assignment, I posted one about a week ago but since then I got a new DAW (free trial version) and I’ve been playing around with it. Here’s a Superman narration I’ve been working on today.
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December 4, 2022 at 4:58 pm #82092
SteveVO
ParticipantDaniel, this is excellent. The only critique I have is at :08, where you say “long.” It sounded a little like “log” and like you could have hung on to the “n” in “long” just a bit longer and made the “g” a little softer. Other than that, it was awesome.
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December 4, 2022 at 6:58 pm #82094
DanielButtrey
ParticipantThanks Steve! Now that I listen back to it I definitely hear that, I’m not sure why I didn’t hear it when editing. I guess I need to train my ears more 🙂 Also my Superman sounds a bit like Supermen lol
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December 3, 2022 at 3:20 pm #82077
SteveVO
ParticipantA few narrations I’m working on. Any thoughts?
Thanks,
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December 4, 2022 at 7:38 pm #82095
DanielButtrey
ParticipantYour annunciation and pace are spot on to me in all 4 reads. I would say my favorite of the 4 is the Austin read, it reads as you being an ambassador of the city trying to drive tourism there. I get nearly the same feel from the Italy and Alaska reads but to a slightly lesser degree. Out of the 4 Cancun feels the least genuine but it’s still excellent. I wish I could pinpoint what it is that I’m hearing.
Keep in mind I’m brand new to voice over and commenting is part of my homework assignment, I am by no means qualified to critique anyone 🙂
All in all, I really enjoyed all 4 reads, I would just personally rank Austin as the best.
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December 3, 2022 at 1:02 am #82067
Ksmack
ParticipantWanted to add one more longer narration than my previous upload. Thank you in advance for any feedback.
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December 7, 2022 at 9:39 pm #82192
Stephen Winburn
ParticipantI listened to all 3 recordings and it really sounds like you’ve found your niche with your voice. In terms of pacing, diction, and conversational quality it’s all there.
My only critique is the same that my coach gave to me and that is micropausing that sometimes interrupts the flow and makes it feel a little choppy!
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December 2, 2022 at 10:55 pm #82064
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December 2, 2022 at 5:08 pm #82060
DillonP
ParticipantHello everyone I have just gotten done with both a commercial and narration piece. Please leave any feedback that can help me with my diction and enunciation, Thank you.
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December 7, 2022 at 9:55 pm #82193
Stephen Winburn
ParticipantI love the quality of your voice and your range is great for these copy!
I do think what will help with the diction is to slow the pace down a little. “When aspiring writer Zora…” all got a bit blended together, for example.
Possibly, to practice, do a recording that you feel is actually *way too slow* but intentionally over enunciate every word. You should be able to feel the difference in your diction from when you are intentional with every consonant!
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December 1, 2022 at 8:24 pm #82054
cbehrens
ParticipantAny feedback on conversational style or point of view are appreciated! Thanks!
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December 13, 2022 at 8:50 pm #82300
RCori
ParticipantI really like how clear your words are and the diction sounds good. I think it could be more conversational however, the tone and pitch are staying at the same level through most of the piece, so it doesn’t sound like you’re having a conversation with someone about Almond Breeze. I’m working on this with my coach as well, but she has some great pointers on reminding me to think of someone specific and concentrate on them through out the “conversation”.
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