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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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May 26, 2023 at 1:47 pm #87381
John Sevier
ParticipantA practice read to get some feedback on how my voice and copy read is developing. My home studio is still very basic, so please ignore tech aspects. I am looking more for feedback on pace, acting, technique, etc. Appreciate the feedback in advance!
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June 5, 2023 at 1:10 pm #87693
JOHN LANNERT
ParticipantPleasant voice, good pace and pitch. Your voice faded at “Shakespeare and company,” and the break seemed slightly long between “possible” and “in ways.”
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June 7, 2023 at 6:01 pm #87795
John Sevier
ParticipantThanks so much for the feedback! Definitely agree with you and will work to improve that. Thanks again
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May 20, 2023 at 10:14 am #87263
TalVerd
ParticipantHello all, I’d like some feedback on these reads I did, especially in 4 areas:
Does my read sound conversational?
How is my diction?
How is my pace?
Am I reading my copy with a good flow or do I sound choppy?
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May 22, 2023 at 12:17 pm #87291
TalVerd
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May 25, 2023 at 3:51 pm #87370
BJ
ParticipantHi – Of the two, I think Pete’s is stronger. You sound more conversational. I do think you can really play up the first couple of lines where you talk about Marie – have fun with it. In the Corolla spot, it may be just me but I think the beginning was cut off. If it helps, think of having a conversation with a friend about this car – you’re excited and energized when talking about this car. I think you can pick up your pace, especially in the beginning. I’m not a techie, so I can’t offer remedies, but I did notice that your recordings sound cavernous (hoping someone on the Forum can offer some guidance). Looking forward to hearing your next records.
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May 20, 2023 at 10:41 am #87264
TalVerd
ParticipantIt seems my uploads are not working, I’ll contact the education team.
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May 18, 2023 at 6:03 pm #87241
HillOKeefe
ParticipantHi all! I’d be grateful for any feedback on the attached audition; creative, performance, and technical. I’m working on speeding up my audition process.
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May 21, 2023 at 2:39 pm #87271
Brandyhart610
ParticipantYou sound amazing – voice, delivery & technical!
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May 19, 2023 at 8:07 pm #87254
Earthbul
ParticipantLove your voice and delivery. A little tightening up on some of the pauses maybe but great read ! Sound quality is A+ as well.
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May 21, 2023 at 6:35 pm #87281
HillOKeefe
ParticipantThanks so much! That encouragement means a lot 🙂 would you mind sharing where in the script the pauses needed tightening? I’ve received similar feedback before but haven’t asked for the examples. Thanks!
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May 17, 2023 at 4:44 pm #87201
suzanne dangler
ParticipantHello!
I would love some creative feedback on this little snippets. I have a terrible habit of being a speedy talker, so hopefully these aren’t too fast. I’m working my way towards a narration demo, with hopes of audiobook demo shortly after. So, I’ve got a snippet of museum/walking tour audio guide, a snippet of documentary, and a snippet of an original short story.
Any thoughts would be greatly appreciated! Thank you!
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May 22, 2023 at 6:30 pm #87305
suzanne dangler
ParticipantThank you both! I’ll have to work on reading through things a bit more before recording, to hopefully help with getting it more relaxed and free flowing. 🙂
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May 21, 2023 at 2:44 pm #87272
Brandyhart610
ParticipantHalloween sounded conversational and with lots of inflection inviting the listener to stay connected. Davies and some of Trinity sounded like you were reading from a paper more, with the exception of the transition “walk ahead & meet me at ___”.
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May 17, 2023 at 9:33 pm #87213
Earthbul
ParticipantI thought they were all good reads. Sound quality nit so much but thst’s just technical and easily remedied. Don’t know much about the guided tour styleof read so I can’t really comment on it. Slow down a tad on the doc read and let the listener live in it a little. I really enjoyed the Halloween read. Nice inflections. It never felt like you were just reading words on a page. Take all this with a grain of salt though. I’m by no means a pro at this.
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May 17, 2023 at 1:39 pm #87197
TalVerd
ParticipantHello, Feedback Forum. I’ve got 2 uploads I’d like some feedback on. I’d especially like feedback on 3 areas.
1. How conversational do I sound?
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May 16, 2023 at 4:41 pm #87178
vlwalinski
ParticipantHello Feedback Forum! In preparation for my VO coaching session, attached are two recordings for feedback. The Lipitor recording was a challenge because it’s written like a Webster’s definition, not a normal paragraph. Would love to hear your thoughts!
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May 15, 2023 at 6:38 pm #87136
Earthbul
ParticipantI created the script using ChatGPT. A great resource for tailoring reads that fit your style
Highly recommend it !! Any and all comments welcomed and appreciated.Attachments:
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May 21, 2023 at 2:52 pm #87273
Brandyhart610
ParticipantSounds conversational & awesome.
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May 18, 2023 at 12:00 am #87217
melodyz
ParticipantLoved the read! Your voice fits the product perfectly. Totally engaging.
May I ask what kind of mic you are using. It sounds so clear.
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May 17, 2023 at 4:47 pm #87205
suzanne dangler
ParticipantThis is great! I can picture a fantastic 70s Old Spice style video going along with this!
I was tempted to test chatGPT and was also pretty shocked at what it came up with with just a few sparse descriptions! Can’t quite bring myself to use it though… 🙂
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May 15, 2023 at 4:53 pm #87119
AAsterita
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May 18, 2023 at 12:05 am #87218
melodyz
ParticipantThe variety of spots truly shows your range. Loved it. Wasn’t clear on the yoga studios name the first time you said it, but caught it at the end. Your voice and tone are fantastic.
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May 17, 2023 at 10:15 pm #87214
Michele Martin
ParticipantHi A-
I liked the variety for your demo! Nice mix! Regarding the yoga script- When you said, “Visit us today at Alluem Yoga”, I thought that “today” could benefit from just a touch more up-beatness. I thought it was a super read and I know that the subject calls for a calm and relaxing tone, but think that the invite to “visit today” could be read in a just a teeny bit more subtle enthusiasm. Maybe a little bit of a higher note on “today”. Congratulations on working on your demo! It all sounded great! This feedback is of course just my opinion and subjective :). -
May 15, 2023 at 6:41 pm #87138
Earthbul
ParticipantThe Yoga and Vroom spots were really good. Yoga was nice and calm without being boring while the Vroom spot had a perfect cadence and kept me listening. Really nice work.
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May 15, 2023 at 6:35 pm #87135
Earthbul
ParticipantI enjoyed the Seventh Generation spot but I felt more emphasis should’ve been put on the first line.
A little more forceful. Ending more on an upswing. That being said I really enjoy your voice. Very pleasing to the ear.
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May 13, 2023 at 8:07 pm #87093
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May 13, 2023 at 7:03 pm #87091
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