[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[Jahna Bobolia]

Hello! Feedback appreciated! Looking specifically for creative feedback rather than technical feedback.

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[ScottCarr]

Hi Jahna. I liked your reads very much! Sounded quite natural to me, not like you were just reading a script. I also thought your pacing was good.

[Jahna Bobolia]

Thank you for your feedback!

[Dominic]

Hi everyone,

Uploading a few commercial practice takes, any feedback appreciated. Thank you!

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[Jahna Bobolia]

I enjoyed the H4H read. It sounded conversational and authentic.

[Krista Andersen]

Hi all, This is my first time here, just started my 1st coaching classes. Looking for creative feedback only, please. Appreciate your time and looking forward to learning together!

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[Jahna Bobolia]

I thought both reads were clear with strong diction.

[Krista Andersen]

Thank you for the feedback!

[alayne_chappell]

Hello everyone! This is my first post and I’m new to voice over so a lot of room for improvement! Please note I’m not looking for tech-related feedback since this was recorded on my phone in my closet 🙂 I’m mostly focused on e-learning and education and working on reducing glottal stops and coming off authentic; and just getting started understanding what I need to work on. Thank you so much for any feedback.

-Alayne

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[DicksonVO]

Alayne…recorded from your phone? WOW…GOOD READS! Your voice feels so natural for e-learning or education. My one comment would be to slow just a bit. Since it’s e-learning, 2 important things are happening. 1) There are more than likely visuals (videos or slides) that are going along with this and…2) there are people trying to digest the information you are delivering. You can slow your VO read slightly per slide because the slides or video will be on the screen for 3-5 seconds and that should allow the learner time to digest the information. Make sense?

Your read was very authentic, but in trying to be authentic we sometimes have the tendency to talk faster. I bet if you paced yourself a tad bit slower you could still achieve a great authentic read. Good luck!

[alayne_chappell]

Thank you so much for this feedback! I’ll definitely work on slowing my pace and that’s good advice to think about the slides/video as I’m recording.

[SuperLuke]

Hi Alayne,
That was a good read from your phone. And I think you can do much better with practice. When I listened to your recordings, it sounded like I was hearing Alexa for e-learning. Practice connecting and engaging with your listeners more as you perform your copies.

[alayne_chappell]

Thanks for your feedback! That’s good advice to practice engaging with the listener more.

[tmanning.tix]

Greetings All.
Still working on editing these pieces but also looking for feedback on delivery and tone. Thanks for listening.

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[Jahna Bobolia]

Nice sound, I would try slowing the scripts down.

[TalVerd]

Hello everyone! looking to get feedback on 2 scripts today. Specifically, I’m only looking for performance feedback, no technical feedback. (I don’t have a studio set up yet, so it’s going to sound a bit off)

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[Krista Andersen]

Hi TalVerd, nice readings. I’m new to this so take my suggestion lightly 😉 You have a nice sounding voice but it seems more “announcer” than conversational or “yours”. My coach pointed out for me too so maybe that’s why I’m picking up on it more.

[waninick]

Hey Gang…! Been a bit, but looking forward to interacting a lot more in the coming weeks.
This is a recording I put together today from the script library. I know the room sound is not what it should, or will, be, but looking more for a review of the delivery.

Thanks for your time.

TimG

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[Krista Andersen]

Hi Tim, really enjoyed listening to this one! Made me want to hop on the train and head to Navy Pier! Very personal feel to your voicing.

[SuperLuke]

Hi Tim,
That was a very nice performance. I like how you emphasize key words in the copy and deliver positive energy that the listeners want to hear.
There is a moment where I think emphasizing, “Now if they could only operate the microwave”, with some humor could be helpful.

[Brian Witt]

Hey everyone. In advance of my next coaching session, I was hoping to get some feedback on these reads. They’re for working on narrations. Please let me know what you think!

–Brian

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[waninick]

Nice read..! The pace and phrasing are really spot on. And they both have a nice one-on-one feel.
Smooth where it can be, and edgy where it needs to be.
Impressive…!

-TimG

[solin232]

Hi, I would love to get some feedback on this read, any feedback would be appreciated.
Thanks in advance!
Steve

Atten2 – Explainer video

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[SuperLuke]

Hi Steve,
It was a good read. And I think you can make it better with practice.

[solin232]

Thank you!

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[debbyc]

Hey everyone. Embarrassed….this is my 3rd attempt at uploading my files. Fingers crossed! As part of my training, I would appreciate all feedback. Do I sound conversational? How is my speed, diction, etc. Thanks in advance.

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