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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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June 21, 2023 at 11:00 pm #88073
Eric
ParticipantHello all. First time on the forum. I am starting my commercial journey and I am looking for some creative feedback only. Thank you for taking time to listen and critique!
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June 27, 2023 at 4:56 pm #88217
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantHey Eric! One thing that my coach always reminds me to focus on is the 3 W’s (Who are you talking to? Where are you? and Why are you telling them this?) These can really help when it comes to sounding conversational. On the Rocket Money script I would be mindful of micro pauses. Little tiny pauses that we decided to insert but aren’t actually in the script. Thank you for sharing your work! : )
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June 19, 2023 at 8:15 pm #88030
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantHi Everyone! Looking for creative feedback on these two reads for my coaching sessions. Thank you!!
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June 19, 2023 at 8:47 pm #88034
debbyc
ParticipantYour read of the Lego script was very nice! Great energy, nice pace, you were a mom and you sold me on Legos!
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June 20, 2023 at 10:37 am #88041
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantThank you for the feedback!
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June 18, 2023 at 7:47 pm #87999
Artist7
ParticipantHi, everyone! I’ve uploaded two commercial practice reads that I’d really appreciate some feedback on! Thanks so very much!
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June 23, 2023 at 2:42 pm #88123
alayne_chappell
ParticipantHi! I really liked the energy on the Orajel read. It felt like you were enthusiastic about the product and I liked how you emphasized the “Orajel” at the end.
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June 17, 2023 at 11:55 pm #87990
dschneider411
ParticipantHello there! Feedback welcome on these two commercial scripts. My studio setup was not available when I recorded these, and the audio quality reflects that, but I welcome your thoughts on the reads themselves. Thank you!
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June 23, 2023 at 2:38 pm #88121
alayne_chappell
ParticipantI really liked your tone and choice of word emphasis on the Lexus read. You may try a slightly faster pace; it feels conversational but a bit slow toward the end. Good luck!
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June 19, 2023 at 8:10 pm #88028
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantHi! I think for the Butterball commercial I might play with different ways to deliver the word Thanksgrilling.
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June 16, 2023 at 9:42 pm #87978
debbyc
ParticipantHi everyone. I am looking to get feedback on my first two narration script readings. How is my pace? Do I sound conversational? All feedback is greatly appreciated.
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June 19, 2023 at 8:07 pm #88027
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantYour diction was quite clear!
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June 16, 2023 at 9:38 am #87967
debbyc
ParticipantHi everyone. I am looking to get feedback on my first two narration script readings. How is my pace? Do I sound conversational? All feedback is greatly appreciated.
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June 16, 2023 at 7:37 am #87963
ScottCarr
ParticipantHello everyone. First time posting. Two practice scripts. Any feedback appreciated.
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Ancient alien theory grew out of the centuries-old idea that life exists on other planets, and that humans and extraterrestrials have crossed paths before. The theme of human-alien interaction was t****t into the spotlight in the 1960s, driven by a wave of UFO sightings and popular films like 2001: A Space Odyssey. The space program played no small part in this as well: If mankind could travel to other planets, why couldn’t extraterrestrials visit Earth?
In 1968, the Swiss author Erich von Däniken published Chariots of the Gods?, which became an immediate bestseller. In it, he put forth his hypothesis that, thousands of years ago, space travelers from other planets visited Earth, where they taught humans about technology and influenced ancient religions.Attachments:
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June 14, 2023 at 6:32 pm #87943
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June 13, 2023 at 4:53 pm #87929
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantHello! Feedback appreciated! Looking specifically for creative feedback rather than technical feedback.
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June 18, 2023 at 7:49 am #87995
ScottCarr
ParticipantHi Jahna. I liked your reads very much! Sounded quite natural to me, not like you were just reading a script. I also thought your pacing was good.
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June 19, 2023 at 8:03 pm #88026
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantThank you for your feedback!
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June 12, 2023 at 5:13 pm #87911
Dominic
ParticipantHi everyone,
Uploading a few commercial practice takes, any feedback appreciated. Thank you!
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June 13, 2023 at 5:05 pm #87933
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantI enjoyed the H4H read. It sounded conversational and authentic.
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