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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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  • #88030
    Jahna Bobolia
    Participant

    Hi Everyone! Looking for creative feedback on these two reads for my coaching sessions. Thank you!!

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    • #88034
      debbyc
      Participant

      Your read of the Lego script was very nice! Great energy, nice pace, you were a mom and you sold me on Legos!

  • #87999
    Artist7
    Participant

    Hi, everyone! I’ve uploaded two commercial practice reads that I’d really appreciate some feedback on! Thanks so very much!

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    • #88123
      alayne_chappell
      Participant

      Hi! I really liked the energy on the Orajel read. It felt like you were enthusiastic about the product and I liked how you emphasized the “Orajel” at the end.

  • #87990
    dschneider411
    Participant

    Hello there! Feedback welcome on these two commercial scripts. My studio setup was not available when I recorded these, and the audio quality reflects that, but I welcome your thoughts on the reads themselves. Thank you!

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    • #88121
      alayne_chappell
      Participant

      I really liked your tone and choice of word emphasis on the Lexus read. You may try a slightly faster pace; it feels conversational but a bit slow toward the end. Good luck!

    • #88028
      Jahna Bobolia
      Participant

      Hi! I think for the Butterball commercial I might play with different ways to deliver the word Thanksgrilling.

  • #87978
    debbyc
    Participant

    Hi everyone. I am looking to get feedback on my first two narration script readings. How is my pace? Do I sound conversational? All feedback is greatly appreciated.

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  • #87967
    debbyc
    Participant

    Hi everyone. I am looking to get feedback on my first two narration script readings. How is my pace? Do I sound conversational? All feedback is greatly appreciated.

  • #87963
    ScottCarr
    Participant

    Hello everyone. First time posting. Two practice scripts. Any feedback appreciated.

    Starbucks About Us Page
    Every day, we go to work hoping to do two things: share great coffee with our friends and help make the world a little better. It was true when the first Starbucks opened in 1971, and it’s just as true today.
    Back then, the company was a single store in Seattle’s historic Pike Place Market. From just a narrow storefront, Starbucks offered some of the world’s finest fresh-roasted whole bean coffees. The name, inspired by Moby Dick, evoked the romance of the high seas and the seafaring tradition of the early coffee traders.

    Ancient Alien Theory
    According to ancient alien theorists, extraterrestrials with superior knowledge of science and engineering landed on Earth thousands of years ago, sharing their expertise with early civilizations and forever changing the course of human history. But how did this concept develop, and is there any evidence to support it?
    Ancient alien theory grew out of the centuries-old idea that life exists on other planets, and that humans and extraterrestrials have crossed paths before. The theme of human-alien interaction was t****t into the spotlight in the 1960s, driven by a wave of UFO sightings and popular films like 2001: A Space Odyssey. The space program played no small part in this as well: If mankind could travel to other planets, why couldn’t extraterrestrials visit Earth?
    In 1968, the Swiss author Erich von Däniken published Chariots of the Gods?, which became an immediate bestseller. In it, he put forth his hypothesis that, thousands of years ago, space travelers from other planets visited Earth, where they taught humans about technology and influenced ancient religions.

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    • #87981
      debbyc
      Participant

      Hi Scott, both are very clear with great pronunciation. I would like to recommend slowing down a bit on each.

      • #87994
        ScottCarr
        Participant

        Thank you very much for your feedback. Much appreciated!

  • #87943
    DicksonVO
    Participant

    Hello everyone! Looking for feedback on these 2 commercial (conversational) VOs as VO training homework. Thanks in advance.

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    • #87982
      debbyc
      Participant

      Hey there! I thought both were good reads. Very nice, kept my attention.

  • #87929
    Jahna Bobolia
    Participant

    Hello! Feedback appreciated! Looking specifically for creative feedback rather than technical feedback.

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    • #87995
      ScottCarr
      Participant

      Hi Jahna. I liked your reads very much! Sounded quite natural to me, not like you were just reading a script. I also thought your pacing was good.

  • #87911
    Dominic
    Participant

    Hi everyone,

    Uploading a few commercial practice takes, any feedback appreciated. Thank you!

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    • #87933
      Jahna Bobolia
      Participant

      I enjoyed the H4H read. It sounded conversational and authentic.

  • #87893
    Krista Andersen
    Participant

    Hi all, This is my first time here, just started my 1st coaching classes. Looking for creative feedback only, please. Appreciate your time and looking forward to learning together!

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