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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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May 16, 2023 at 4:41 pm #87178
vlwalinski
ParticipantHello Feedback Forum! In preparation for my VO coaching session, attached are two recordings for feedback. The Lipitor recording was a challenge because it’s written like a Webster’s definition, not a normal paragraph. Would love to hear your thoughts!
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May 15, 2023 at 6:38 pm #87136
Earthbul
ParticipantI created the script using ChatGPT. A great resource for tailoring reads that fit your style
Highly recommend it !! Any and all comments welcomed and appreciated.Attachments:
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May 21, 2023 at 2:52 pm #87273
Brandyhart610
ParticipantSounds conversational & awesome.
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May 18, 2023 at 12:00 am #87217
melodyz
ParticipantLoved the read! Your voice fits the product perfectly. Totally engaging.
May I ask what kind of mic you are using. It sounds so clear.
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May 17, 2023 at 4:47 pm #87205
suzanne dangler
ParticipantThis is great! I can picture a fantastic 70s Old Spice style video going along with this!
I was tempted to test chatGPT and was also pretty shocked at what it came up with with just a few sparse descriptions! Can’t quite bring myself to use it though… 🙂
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May 15, 2023 at 4:53 pm #87119
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May 18, 2023 at 12:05 am #87218
melodyz
ParticipantThe variety of spots truly shows your range. Loved it. Wasn’t clear on the yoga studios name the first time you said it, but caught it at the end. Your voice and tone are fantastic.
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May 17, 2023 at 10:15 pm #87214
Michele Martin
ParticipantHi A-
I liked the variety for your demo! Nice mix! Regarding the yoga script- When you said, “Visit us today at Alluem Yoga”, I thought that “today” could benefit from just a touch more up-beatness. I thought it was a super read and I know that the subject calls for a calm and relaxing tone, but think that the invite to “visit today” could be read in a just a teeny bit more subtle enthusiasm. Maybe a little bit of a higher note on “today”. Congratulations on working on your demo! It all sounded great! This feedback is of course just my opinion and subjective :). -
May 15, 2023 at 6:41 pm #87138
Earthbul
ParticipantThe Yoga and Vroom spots were really good. Yoga was nice and calm without being boring while the Vroom spot had a perfect cadence and kept me listening. Really nice work.
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May 15, 2023 at 6:35 pm #87135
Earthbul
ParticipantI enjoyed the Seventh Generation spot but I felt more emphasis should’ve been put on the first line.
A little more forceful. Ending more on an upswing. That being said I really enjoy your voice. Very pleasing to the ear.
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May 13, 2023 at 8:07 pm #87093
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May 13, 2023 at 7:03 pm #87091
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May 13, 2023 at 6:55 pm #87089
Earthbul
ParticipantJust a practice read. Any and all comments welcomed and appreciated.
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May 25, 2023 at 3:26 pm #87367
BJ
ParticipantHi – Excuse my delay in getting back with you. You have a very natural, warm and conversational delivery. I really like the expressiveness you bring to specific words. Is this a commercial read? If so, I’d be curious how this would sound if you brought more energy to your delivery and brought up the music a bit. Overall, really well done! Thanks again for giving my snippets a listen. BJ
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May 21, 2023 at 2:56 pm #87274
Brandyhart610
ParticipantSmooth read, conversational, sounded effortless. You’re hired.
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May 12, 2023 at 5:07 pm #87040
Brmassey
ParticipantHi y’all! Looking for some feedback on a couple of commercial reads. Ignore the mic issues, I just got it and am starting to play around.
Thanks!
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May 17, 2023 at 4:53 pm #87206
suzanne dangler
ParticipantThese sound pretty good! The Crate and Barrel one, I thought you kind of drifted…back with it. Lounging in the corner maybe? 😉 It just got a bit quieter towards the end. But otherwise was good!
For the Legos, I think you could try a bit more conversational/casual. The flow worked really well. I think a more kind of off-the-cuff “my kid does the weirdest things” sort of feel could be fun to try with it! 🙂
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May 10, 2023 at 10:23 am #87000
BJ
ParticipantHi – Please help me build my narration demo by listening to these short reads and giving me some feedback. The first two are for a non-profit and the second two are for pet adoption. What works? What doesn’t? Do let me know which versions of each you prefer, too. Appreciate you!
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May 28, 2023 at 7:50 am #87403
atperry
ParticipantLove your work! Conversational, engaging, well paced, technically sound are just a few ways to describe your great delivery !! C u on the champagne carpet 🙂
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May 13, 2023 at 9:49 pm #87096
Earthbul
ParticipantI found things to like all the versions you posted. You have a very calm,comforting sound. You take your time feeling out the words but can pivot pretty well towards a faster paced interpretation. Really enjoyed it. Hey, I posted a read called The Farmers Dog. I’d love to hear your interpretation of it.
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May 12, 2023 at 5:11 pm #87043
Brmassey
ParticipantHi BJ,
You have a lovely voice! It’s so warm and it kept me engaged throughout. You also have great versatility. The scripts read a little on the fast side–especially GunineaPigV2 so that’s something to be aware of. Toward the end, it sounded like you sped up a bit. I prefer AAFAV1 and GuineaPigV1 as well. Good luck 🙂
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May 9, 2023 at 8:34 pm #86991
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