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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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May 13, 2023 at 6:55 pm #87089
Earthbul
ParticipantJust a practice read. Any and all comments welcomed and appreciated.
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May 25, 2023 at 3:26 pm #87367
BJ
ParticipantHi – Excuse my delay in getting back with you. You have a very natural, warm and conversational delivery. I really like the expressiveness you bring to specific words. Is this a commercial read? If so, I’d be curious how this would sound if you brought more energy to your delivery and brought up the music a bit. Overall, really well done! Thanks again for giving my snippets a listen. BJ
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May 21, 2023 at 2:56 pm #87274
Brandyhart610
ParticipantSmooth read, conversational, sounded effortless. You’re hired.
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May 12, 2023 at 5:07 pm #87040
Brmassey
ParticipantHi y’all! Looking for some feedback on a couple of commercial reads. Ignore the mic issues, I just got it and am starting to play around.
Thanks!
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May 17, 2023 at 4:53 pm #87206
suzanne dangler
ParticipantThese sound pretty good! The Crate and Barrel one, I thought you kind of drifted…back with it. Lounging in the corner maybe? 😉 It just got a bit quieter towards the end. But otherwise was good!
For the Legos, I think you could try a bit more conversational/casual. The flow worked really well. I think a more kind of off-the-cuff “my kid does the weirdest things” sort of feel could be fun to try with it! 🙂
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May 10, 2023 at 10:23 am #87000
BJ
ParticipantHi – Please help me build my narration demo by listening to these short reads and giving me some feedback. The first two are for a non-profit and the second two are for pet adoption. What works? What doesn’t? Do let me know which versions of each you prefer, too. Appreciate you!
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May 28, 2023 at 7:50 am #87403
atperry
ParticipantLove your work! Conversational, engaging, well paced, technically sound are just a few ways to describe your great delivery !! C u on the champagne carpet 🙂
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May 13, 2023 at 9:49 pm #87096
Earthbul
ParticipantI found things to like all the versions you posted. You have a very calm,comforting sound. You take your time feeling out the words but can pivot pretty well towards a faster paced interpretation. Really enjoyed it. Hey, I posted a read called The Farmers Dog. I’d love to hear your interpretation of it.
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May 12, 2023 at 5:11 pm #87043
Brmassey
ParticipantHi BJ,
You have a lovely voice! It’s so warm and it kept me engaged throughout. You also have great versatility. The scripts read a little on the fast side–especially GunineaPigV2 so that’s something to be aware of. Toward the end, it sounded like you sped up a bit. I prefer AAFAV1 and GuineaPigV1 as well. Good luck 🙂
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May 9, 2023 at 8:34 pm #86991
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May 8, 2023 at 2:33 pm #86937
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May 8, 2023 at 1:51 pm #86932
VoicesByJeff
ParticipantHad an issue with my files so trying again. Thanks in advance for your feedback!
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May 8, 2023 at 2:23 pm #86936
DicksonVO
ParticipantHey Jeff! Great voice! For the TN Valley: There were a lot of mouth clicks throughout. I’d suggest to try a de-clicker or edit those out. It was a very fast read. It felt like this would be a documentary, so imagine the images that would appear with the copy you are reading and how long they may appear on the screen during your VO (most likely a couple of seconds or so) hopefully this will help you pace a little slower so your audience can more easily absorb the message. For the Church Attack: It lacked emotion behind the subject matter. The church attack is a horrible thing and the images that would be show with it are also…try putting your hand over your heart or something like that when you read to connect with the script (you don’t have to pour out tears but you would want to connect with the gravity of the situation). Doing that hopefully will help you with slowing your pace also. Hope this helps. Keep going…your voice is great for narration.
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May 8, 2023 at 2:58 pm #86940
VoicesByJeff
ParticipantReally appreciate the honest feedback. The emotion part is something I am working on. Thanks for your input!
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May 8, 2023 at 1:37 pm #86930
VoicesByJeff
ParticipantHello everyone! Did some narration reads and any feedback is appreciated! Thanks!
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May 7, 2023 at 10:18 pm #86913
ekairush04
ParticipantHi Everyone,
I’m submitting my two scripts for practice. Let me know what you think. I need all the help I can get.
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May 8, 2023 at 4:04 pm #86944
BJ
ParticipantHi Elena – Very easy to listen to your tone and pace. Great pronunciation. Neuroendocrine – there’s a slight hesitation between “electron” and “microscopy.” Social Security – I think you can go a bit warmer here – more conversational. Both recordings sound echoey.
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May 6, 2023 at 12:53 pm #86897
Seth Jackson
ParticipantRemoved breaths only because there was one. Looking for feedback on delivery and quality of recording. Thank you much.
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May 6, 2023 at 11:01 pm #86906
Michele Martin
ParticipantSeth, I thought this sounded so nice! Only thing I can think of is maybe in the second line, smooth out “the all new Acura” just a smidge. Or are those slight pauses intentional for drama? (I don’t mean where you say, “Luxury. Performance. Etc. I can tell those pauses are right on.) Love your voice and tone: Great for a luxury ad!
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May 4, 2023 at 8:37 pm #86857
atperry
ParticipantHey hey, second recording of Midzipper telephony. Sorry for technical issue on first reeording
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May 8, 2023 at 3:40 pm #86943
BJ
ParticipantHi Atperry – I must admit. I’m a sucker for deep voices – yours is beautiful! Overall – nice job! Just a couple of thoughts – trying reading this with a bit of a smile so that the read is warmer but still professional. Also, try backing up from the mic a bit to avoid mouth sounds.
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