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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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June 12, 2023 at 11:17 am #87875
alayne_chappell
ParticipantHello everyone! This is my first post and I’m new to voice over so a lot of room for improvement! Please note I’m not looking for tech-related feedback since this was recorded on my phone in my closet 🙂 I’m mostly focused on e-learning and education and working on reducing glottal stops and coming off authentic; and just getting started understanding what I need to work on. Thank you so much for any feedback.
-Alayne
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June 14, 2023 at 6:43 pm #87947
DicksonVO
ParticipantAlayne…recorded from your phone? WOW…GOOD READS! Your voice feels so natural for e-learning or education. My one comment would be to slow just a bit. Since it’s e-learning, 2 important things are happening. 1) There are more than likely visuals (videos or slides) that are going along with this and…2) there are people trying to digest the information you are delivering. You can slow your VO read slightly per slide because the slides or video will be on the screen for 3-5 seconds and that should allow the learner time to digest the information. Make sense?
Your read was very authentic, but in trying to be authentic we sometimes have the tendency to talk faster. I bet if you paced yourself a tad bit slower you could still achieve a great authentic read. Good luck!
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June 23, 2023 at 2:32 pm #88119
alayne_chappell
ParticipantThank you so much for this feedback! I’ll definitely work on slowing my pace and that’s good advice to think about the slides/video as I’m recording.
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June 12, 2023 at 12:16 pm #87882
SuperLuke
ParticipantHi Alayne,
That was a good read from your phone. And I think you can do much better with practice. When I listened to your recordings, it sounded like I was hearing Alexa for e-learning. Practice connecting and engaging with your listeners more as you perform your copies.-
June 23, 2023 at 2:34 pm #88120
alayne_chappell
ParticipantThanks for your feedback! That’s good advice to practice engaging with the listener more.
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June 11, 2023 at 11:20 am #87861
tmanning.tix
ParticipantGreetings All.
Still working on editing these pieces but also looking for feedback on delivery and tone. Thanks for listening.Attachments:
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June 13, 2023 at 5:07 pm #87934
Jahna Bobolia
ParticipantNice sound, I would try slowing the scripts down.
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June 9, 2023 at 12:59 pm #87828
TalVerd
ParticipantHello everyone! looking to get feedback on 2 scripts today. Specifically, I’m only looking for performance feedback, no technical feedback. (I don’t have a studio set up yet, so it’s going to sound a bit off)
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June 12, 2023 at 2:31 pm #87899
Krista Andersen
ParticipantHi TalVerd, nice readings. I’m new to this so take my suggestion lightly 😉 You have a nice sounding voice but it seems more “announcer” than conversational or “yours”. My coach pointed out for me too so maybe that’s why I’m picking up on it more.
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June 8, 2023 at 8:25 pm #87816
waninick
ParticipantHey Gang…! Been a bit, but looking forward to interacting a lot more in the coming weeks.
This is a recording I put together today from the script library. I know the room sound is not what it should, or will, be, but looking more for a review of the delivery.Thanks for your time.
TimG
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June 12, 2023 at 2:25 pm #87896
Krista Andersen
ParticipantHi Tim, really enjoyed listening to this one! Made me want to hop on the train and head to Navy Pier! Very personal feel to your voicing.
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June 12, 2023 at 12:54 pm #87886
SuperLuke
ParticipantHi Tim,
That was a very nice performance. I like how you emphasize key words in the copy and deliver positive energy that the listeners want to hear.
There is a moment where I think emphasizing, “Now if they could only operate the microwave”, with some humor could be helpful.
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June 8, 2023 at 4:16 pm #87810
Brian Witt
ParticipantHey everyone. In advance of my next coaching session, I was hoping to get some feedback on these reads. They’re for working on narrations. Please let me know what you think!
–Brian
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June 7, 2023 at 8:58 pm #87797
solin232
ParticipantHi, I would love to get some feedback on this read, any feedback would be appreciated.
Thanks in advance!
SteveAtten2 – Explainer video
For over 10 years, Atten2 has been providing technological support to the industrial sector, enabling them to make precise decisions thanks to its advanced and patented optical technology. By expanding the information about asset health and lubricant quality, early detection or prevention of problems can be achieved.
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June 7, 2023 at 5:25 pm #87793
debbyc
ParticipantHey everyone. Embarrassed….this is my 3rd attempt at uploading my files. Fingers crossed! As part of my training, I would appreciate all feedback. Do I sound conversational? How is my speed, diction, etc. Thanks in advance.
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June 7, 2023 at 1:45 pm #87791
debbyc
ParticipantHoping I’m able to upload this time! I have just started my journey into narration voice over training. I would appreciate your feedback on my first couple of reads. One is for a travel planning video. The other is an audio voice over for a museum tour. I would love some feedback please. I am working on sounding conversational, slowing my pace and sounding natural vs choppy. Thanks in advance.
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June 6, 2023 at 5:48 pm #87769
debbyc
ParticipantHi everyone! I have just started my journey into narration voice over training. I would appreciate your feedback on my first couple of reads. One is for a travel planning video. The other is an audio voice over for a museum tour. I would love some feedback please. I am working on sounding conversational, slowing my pace and sounding natural vs choppy. Thanks in advance.
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June 6, 2023 at 3:47 pm #87753
debbyc
ParticipantHi everyone! I have just started my journey into narration voice over training. I would appreciate your feedback on my first couple of reads. One is for a travel planning video. The other is an audio voice over for a museum tour. I would love some feedback please. I am working on sounding conversational, slowing my pace and sounding natural vs choppy. Thanks in advance.
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