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  • #15468
    David Goldberg
    Edge Studio Staff

    Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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  • #70439
    CHRISTOPHER WHITING
    Participant

    He everyone, I just finished another round of homework and welcome any and all feedback. Thank you in advance!

    Aetna/US Healthcare
    No matter where we live–when it comes to something as important as health care–we all want the best. That’s why AETNA and US HEALTHCARE have joined forces to create a partnership that will set a new standard for quality and caring. AETNA and US HEALTHCARE. Raising the standard for your town, for your family, and for you.

    Beavers
    The b****r builds its lodge out of intertangled twigs and sticks; as freezing weather nears, they plaster their lodge with mud, making a concrete layer that no predator can break through. During the early nineteenth century, the b****r pelt was the single most valuable commodity; the pelt being used for robes, coats, clothing trims, and top hats. (FWIW, the forum automatically starred out “eave” lol)

    American Airlines
    Welcome aboard American Airlines coast-to-coast service. We’ll be happy to do everything possible to make your flight with us a most pleasurable experience. We’ll provide you with all the information you need to know about your flight, your destination, and the equipment on which you are currently flying. In addition, we are proud to present our American Airlines feature film presentation, for our transcontinental passengers. We’d like you now to remove the plastic insert found directly in front of you in the seat back pocket. Please review the safety information during the flight for your own protection, in the unlikely event of an in-flight emergency.

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    • #70566
      nettipo1
      Participant

      Hi Christopher,
      Your voice is so nice to listen to. I enjoyed all three, but especially the American Airlines most of all. The Beavers read could probably be less announcery…I guess it would be the right tone if you are giving a guided tour of a b****r habitat, but I think it might need a different kind of tone if it was a tv documentary. Anyway, you definitely are on point with your reads.

  • #70431
    Sheila Harris
    Participant

    Hi, just uploading two scripts for feedback. Thanks in advance!

    Sandals
    Somewhere in the Caribbean, there are 5-star luxury resorts where it’s all-inclusive, all the time. Sandals, where love is all you need. Because everything else is included. Call 1-800-Sandals.

    Honey Bunches of Oats
    It’s amazing! I never thought one cereal would make my whole family stay for breakfast. HONEY BUNCHES OF OATS. There’s never been a cereal like it. With big corn flakes and crunchy bunches of oats. Finally … a cereal my whole family loves.

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    • #70452
      Evette75
      Participant

      nice work, Sheila. I did sense a hint of pause during the Sandals read at the 5-star luxury part that made the flow a little interrupted. The Honey Bunches read had good energy, like how you emphasized the keys components of ad.

  • #70427
    Esandyii
    Participant

    Homework submission for Art Bruder.

    ES

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    • #70676
      TimberTykes
      Participant

      Hello!

      You did a great job with this! Your voice is a solid choice for this narration piece, and perhaps even a comfy audiobook.

      Everything seems well paced, as well. I’ve no complaints here. Great work!

  • #70425
    Esandyii
    Participant

    Homework submissions for Art Bruder.
    ES

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  • #70420
    AyalC93
    Participant

    Hi all. Just dropping 2 more bits of commercial homework. Would love some feedback. Thanks!

    Jimmy Deans TV Spot – Food and Beverage
    Make any morning of the week feel like the weekend with the Jimmy Deans simple scrambles breakfast cup. Eggs, sausage, bacon n’ cheese all included in one simple cup.

    The Zebra – Car Insurance
    Wendel lives in a bounce house. But he doesn’t wanna bounce around the internet to save on car insurance. So he uses the Zebra app to compare the top companies. Save an average of $440 on car insurance. Compare and save at TheZebra.com

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  • #70408
    Nekole
    Participant

    Hello Everyone!

    Please review my scripts and provide me with any helpful feedback. Thank you and I appreciate your time!

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  • #70403
    Evette75
    Participant

    Hi Community – adding some sample recordings, please provide feedback.

    Secret –
    Fresh & Aluminum Free. Sevret Aluminum Free helps ELIMINATE ODOR. Secret believes odor should be one less thing to sweat! Our ALUMINUM FREE formula helps ELIMINATE ODOR instead of just masking it with 3X MORE ODOR FIGHTERS And it’s FREE OF parabens, dyes and talc.

    Things We’re Talking About This Week – from a magazine
    Everything bagel ice cream challenges taste buds – Jeni’s Splendid revealed a breakfast-inspired new flavor featuring garlic and onions with sesame and poppy seeds in cream cheese ice cream.

    Gabrielle Union and Dwayne Wade’s Shady Baby gets her own book – The couple wrote a children’s book featuring their little Instagram star, 2-year-old daughter Kaavia James – aka the adorably opinionated Shady Baby.

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  • #70398
    EdSoliz
    Participant

    My last three homework assignments, feedback would be much appreciated!

    American Lung Assocation
    For a kid with asthma, the joys of childhood quickly become living nightmares. A playful kitten, a cuddly puppy, a bouquet of flowers, all are potential triggers for terrifying attacks. Don’t let Asthma rob another childhood. Call 1800 Lung, USA. The American Lung Association.

    Lexus
    This is not a time for business as usual.
    Unless your business as usual has always been about putting people first.
    Find out how your Lexus dealer can service your individual needs.

    BASF
    At BASF, we don’t make the cooler, we make it cooler. We don’t make the jeans, we make them bluer. We don’t make the toys, we make them tougher. At BASF, we don’t make a lot of the products you buy. We make a lot of the products you buy better. BASF.

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  • #70395
    HelpYourself
    Participant

    If anyone have time, please review my script and provide feedback. I would like to know your thoughts before I continue with my private sessions. Thanks so much for your time.

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  • #70383
    Titus Nichols
    Participant

    Hey everybody,

    I just started my training and I would like feedback on a few scripts that I used for practice. I appreciate any feedback you all can give me on what I can do to improve my style.

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    • #70390
      edixon310
      Participant

      I think you’re off to a good start. Great tone and diction. There is, however, audible room noise impacting your recording. Please ensure you record in an acoustically treated space. If you already have acoustic treatment, it may not be adequate.

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