[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[smith_voice]

Greetings- Just completed recording my first commercial scripts…any feedback would be welcome…

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[suecat]

Hey, I thought your tone, pitch and volume were spot on — your tempo went just a tad too fast. I didn’t get the feeling that you were speaking directly to one person. As my coach says, find the person, and why you’re giving them the information. Overall, good job!

[suecat]

Hello,
Still looking for feedback on narration reads. Thanks!

J**k the hero Dog
When the littlest dog in the litter
Takes the biggest journey in Africa
He will make new friends
Face new challenges
And find his destiny.

Congaree National Park narration
IT IS A PLACE OF CONSTANT CHANGE. OF WOOD AND WATER, SUNLIGHT AND SHADE. THIS IS CONGAREE NATIONAL PARK.
NOT FAR FROM SOUTH CAROLINA’S STATE CAPITOL, THIS MAJESTIC WILDERNESS OF TOWERING TREES IS A SANCTUARY. FOR WILDLIFE… FOR CHAMPION TREES… FOR VISITORS FROM AROUND THE WORLD.
DAY BY DAY, SEASON BY SEASON, THIS FLOODPLAIN FOREST CHANGES–SHAPED AND RESHAPED BY WATER. A NEW PLACE TO EXPLORE…EACH TIME YOU RETURN..

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[Alexandra Potocka]

Hi there!
Great job! Try focusing on different words in your script to get different emphasis. Play around with the script and see how when you accent different words, it sounds completely different. For example, for the hero dog.. Try emphasizing the words littlest, biggest, and new.. So BIGGEST journey, and NEW friends, face NEW challenges etc…… Hope this helps!

[suecat]

Alexandra, thank you so much for listening and giving feedback. Yes! All suggestions are a great help! I will play with emphasizing different words in other reads. Much appreciated.

[Don Sack]

Hey Sue!
Great pipes! Very Soothing! Thinking…..pop filter? back off the mic? I don’t know, I just here a lot of “mouth noises” if you know what I mean; I have a same issue in that if one slows down a bit the clarity of enunciation is better?
Rock On!

[suecat]

Oh Don!!! Thank you so much! I will certainly back off the mic, because I used the pop filter, so I must have been just too close! I’ll work on slowing it down! I appreciate you listening and giving feedback!

[RoxyMel]

I would appreciate any feedback. Thank you!

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[1stassi]

Hi Roxy!!

On Hello User I kind of wanted your voice to be a little bit more upbeat but soothing at the same time. Not sure if that makes sense. The recording sounded a little too sleepy but it could’ve just used a little more tune to get me more interested into wanting to reset my password. Hope this makes sense.

[RoxyMel]

Thank you so much, I will try it out. Much appreciated! 😉

[RoxyMel]

Feedback much appreciated, thank you

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[Haley Gross de Jimenez]

Hi Roxy,

This may sound strange, but on the Chevy commercial I kept wanting to hear a little more grit in your voice. I think the timing, inflections, and tone were great but it sounds very clean and you are talking about off-roading and getting d***y.

On the Raven you brought great character to it. I felt like I was watching you perform rather than listening to you read. Really enjoyed it and I think that is what I was looking for in the Chevy recording – that performance.

[RoxyMel]

Thank you so much for your feedback Haley! I will play around with that. Much appreciated!

[Anonymous]

Hi Geeks,
I am a new student to edge studio and fresher in this field. I am getting training currently and I have tasks to complete. I realize that I can get some guidelines from here.so I come here. here is the speech which I have just record. any suggestion will be appreciated.”Hi, Welcome to the show. Earth. Tiny space we live in this huge universe. We get everything here, Oxygen, water and everything to survive as humans. We are all here to provide to make it better to live to provide something better to our future generation. we have been here for thousands, But the universe is here for billions of years. omegle tv It’s our responsibility to save. It’s our duty “

[Don Sack]

Hey Meer!
Yaz gots to download the audio to the Feedback. “Choose File” Looking forward to hearing you!
Rock On!

[RoxyMel]

Hi there Mere, idk if is just me, but I am not seeing your audio post.
Maybe I missed something. Good luck with all your training & tasks btw!

[RoxyMel]

Meant “Hi there Meer”…spell correct might have changed it.

[jackjacknovak]

Homework recording for Art Bruder from Jack Novak.

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[La Voz]

Hi Everyone,

I’m new to this so please have patience. I’d like to share an except from Live from Golgotha by Gore Vidal. Hope it makes you laugh and of course I welcome any feedback.

Martina

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[La Voz]

Hi Everyone,

I’d like to share this practice read of Becoming by Michelle Obama. Her story resonated with me.

Thanks,

Martina

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[La Voz]

I am having trouble uploading. Trying once more.

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[RoxyMel]

Hi Martina, you were able to read this in such a way that I could not stop listening – keeping the storytelling and suspense in tact. I think there were a couple of small words that may need a small edit, but really great job with this read, especially considering the legnth!

[La Voz]

Thanks Roxy for your feedback! I really appreciate it.

Martina

[NoreenQuadir]

Hi! I did a few practice VO samples and would love to get feedback on them. Thanks in advance!

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[suecat]

Hey Everyone!
I’m preparing for my narration demo and BOY do I need your help! Here are a couple of reads for you to listen to and share your feedback! Thank you for your help!
AEC Foundation narration
Every child deserves to grow up with opportunities to learn and thrive. With his skills, her talents, each is a potential leader, a contributor, a productive citizen. How kids grow up will determine their success as adults. But sadly, more than one in five children in America are growing up in poor families and poor neighborhoods, where the chance to thrive is anything but a given. The Annie E. Casey Foundation is dedicated to changing that.

Narration for Marching Band Competitions
1. (Very polite) The authority would like to remind the citizens to only perform music that utilizes major and minor scales, and to avoid dissonance and improvisation of any kind. Thank you.
2. (Mildly frustrated) At this time, the authority would like to remind the citizens to only play music that was written before the year 1900. Thank you.
3. (Quite Agitated) The authority would like to remind the citizens that the use of complex rhythms and contemporary music is strictly prohibited. Those who continue to disobey the authority will be punished accordingly.

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