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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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July 11, 2022 at 5:51 pm #78172
JNMullett
ParticipantHi All,
Another practice read for narration. I recorded on my mac so the tone is a bit hollow. I would love to get any feedback you might have. Thank you in advance!!
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July 14, 2022 at 9:29 pm #78247
VoicesByJeff
ParticipantVery nice flow. I thought your voice had the right tone and was consistent.
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July 11, 2022 at 9:32 pm #78180
RoxyMel
ParticipantVery engaging voice Jeff! Very expressive, especially towards the end. If I had to dig deep to find constructive feedback, I would say maybe bring some more of that expression in towards the beginning as well. Excellent read.
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July 11, 2022 at 12:12 pm #78156
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July 11, 2022 at 11:14 am #78152
rustylj63
ParticipantHey Y’all,
Eight days and counting. Let me hear what you think about these please? Thank you so much!Attachments:
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July 24, 2022 at 2:51 pm #78491
Cheechman
ParticipantWould recommend checking which words to hilite in the script.
I thought some that were hilited should not have been so much and some should have been more.
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July 11, 2022 at 4:33 pm #78166
Honeyvoice
ParticipantThis was an excellent read! You sounded relaxed and very clear. I think you can up the energy and emotion just a little.
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July 10, 2022 at 6:56 pm #78134
slemay
ParticipantOk, this is my first time doing this so would love to get some feedback. I did it off my phone so its not going to be the best recording. I would love to hear any advice on speed, clarity, etc. THANKS!
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July 10, 2022 at 10:32 pm #78145
RoxyMel
ParticipantHi again Slemay. On your second read foe Nike again super good job for a first time for you! I would say for me there is just a little too long of these micro pauses between phases and I feel you could even add just a little more excitement. Such a good job though for being so new to this! Keep it up!
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July 10, 2022 at 10:28 pm #78144
RoxyMel
ParticipantHi Slemay. Great job for your first time!! I would say that it does sound a little to me like you are reading in some parts,also you can probably vary your list more (when listing the attributes of the vehicle). Keep up the good work!
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July 10, 2022 at 3:42 pm #78131
slemay
Participant#78110 Elise I thought your energy was really good on the Space camp read and you made me want to visit the location with your enthusiasm.
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July 9, 2022 at 11:56 pm #78125
Declan Waters
ParticipantHowdy! I’m new to voiceover, looking for any and all feedback on these two scripts. Thanks!
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July 11, 2022 at 4:51 pm #78167
Honeyvoice
ParticipantYou have a really nice texture to you voice! I think you can up the energy to make your voice more full and more emotion to compel the listeners. Overall a great read!
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July 10, 2022 at 10:41 pm #78147
RoxyMel
ParticipantHi again decofcards. On your second read I would say just slow it down just a bit and maybe just a little more expression. Again you have such a soothing voice quality. Keep up the good work!
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July 10, 2022 at 10:38 pm #78146
RoxyMel
ParticipantGreat job decofcards! You have a wonderful and smooth voice quality which I really like. I belive you could also vary you list a little on the list of the chevy’s attributes. I would say maybe just a sight more excitement too throughout. Really nice though! Especially considering how new you are to this!
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July 9, 2022 at 4:36 pm #78118
LindsayCampbell
ParticipantHello friends!
A few practice scripts for today! All feedback is welcome and appreciated.Attachments:
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July 11, 2022 at 11:20 am #78155
Gill
ParticipantLindsay,
You have such a pleasant voice that pairs very well with each of these reads. Each read kept me engaged and your pace is great! I liked your variations for advance technology, and how medically versed you were with atrial fib, and how you changed inflections on trex. Cynerio had a few pauses in it that made me feel like I was waiting for the next thing. Overall nice job and good luck on your record session! -
July 10, 2022 at 7:03 pm #78138
slemay
ParticipantLindsay I thought your pronunciation was great on the Advance Technologies read and you had a warm friendly tone. I am very new at this but felt the connection to the read.
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July 10, 2022 at 8:41 am #78128
JNMullett
ParticipantHi Lindsay, Thank you for your very kind comments below, I appreciate the encouragement! I like your reads as well. Your pacing is very good and you have a very calm tone. I would caution you, however, to make sure you finish out certain words. I have the same tendency and my coach has worked with me quite a bit on it. Specifically, don’t drop the “t’s and d’s” at the end of words like important and world. Have fun at your demo record session!!
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July 9, 2022 at 3:30 pm #78114
JNMullett
ParticipantHi All,
Just finished my Commercial demo – what a blast!! Now it’s on to Narration. I’m posting a couple of practice reads and would love to get your feedback. Thank you in advance for your time!
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July 10, 2022 at 7:06 pm #78139
slemay
ParticipantI really liked the 4h read. You sounded believable and your voice is very calming but with enthusiasm. Thanks for sharing.
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July 9, 2022 at 4:33 pm #78117
LindsayCampbell
ParticipantHey Jeff- congrats on your demo! How fun! Mine is coming up too and I am so excited. You and I chose the same practice script today! I like both of your reads tremendously- I thought they were great. I could listen to your voice all day!
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July 9, 2022 at 3:02 pm #78110
Elise Duke
ParticipantHi everyone! Can you please provide your feedback on these samples? Particularly – did I engage the listener?, how was my overall flow?, and/or how was my speed? Apparently I was in a space mood 🙂 Thank you!
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July 8, 2022 at 5:29 pm #78102
mir19800
ParticipantThe pace was good. Good read. I know you are working on your studio, but I heard a lot of popping.
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