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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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July 12, 2022 at 8:53 pm #78209
brendiginette
ParticipantHello everybody! I’m a newbie looking for some feedback on these scripts. My main focuses are: keeping good pace, avoiding micro pauses, and to not pitch down at the end of every sentence.
Any and all feedback will be greatly appreciated! Thank you community!
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August 11, 2022 at 1:50 am #79074
elizbrooksbell
ParticipantThe pacing was really good, however I would recommend a lead-In so it doesn’t sound like you’re just reading it of the page. Great job!
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July 13, 2022 at 5:25 pm #78230
JoyceVOA
ParticipantGreat diction and pace.However they both sounded like reads and not conversational.
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July 12, 2022 at 7:11 pm #78201
VoicesByJeff
ParticipantHey everyone! Just did some practice scripts for my latest assignment from my coach. Would love any feedback you have! Thanks!
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July 14, 2022 at 1:25 pm #78234
Gill
ParticipantVoicesbyJeff,
Really nice jobs on these reads! Each sounded natural, pace complements each script and you’re clear with your diction. I liked that you changed the phrases of the last script with born instead of born itself. I caught myself being distracted with each word instead of the phrase so nice job on catching that in your variations.
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July 12, 2022 at 12:53 pm #78193
Gill
ParticipantHi some more practice scripts, any feedback would be great!
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July 14, 2022 at 12:16 am #78232
Alli
ParticipantBoth reads were really good. They sounded very clear and natural flowing, especially for 711. You have good inflection that keeps the script alive. I think youre doing great
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July 12, 2022 at 7:20 pm #78206
VoicesByJeff
ParticipantThese were both really strong! I thought the 711 was the stronger of the two but not by much. Voice clarity, pace and diction were all great. Keep it up!
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July 11, 2022 at 10:44 pm #78181
Rebekah
ParticipantHello all,
I am an aspiring voice-over actress. This is my assignment for my 3rd private session. THis time I wanted to have a little fun with the Air Jamaica script and no, I am not a Jamaican native. Keep in mind I have been MIA for about 5 months as you offer your appreciated feedback. Let me know what you all think.Attachments:
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July 14, 2022 at 5:35 pm #78246
Benn Pharr IV
ParticipantHey Rebekah,
Your accent for Air Jamaica was pretty good. I had a good laugh as you stated you’re not native to the island. My only suggestion would be to add a little more energy and excitement to your delivery. Good job!
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July 12, 2022 at 1:09 pm #78196
Gill
ParticipantHi Rebekah,
Air Jamaica:You did a nice job making me feel like I was going to Jamaica. If you didn’t mention it I would have said you sounded native. I think your pace is good for this read because anything faster with the accent would have probably made it harder to understand. Your diction was also clear. The only thing I would say about this is to make sure you continuously stay in the accent as I hear it dropped a few times.
Motivational-Informercial: I like that you made this your own, for this read I would be mindful of your diction with research, your pace is good.
National Gallery of Art: I liked your energy for this read and pace. I would be careful with some of the pronunciations with this read like Picasso sounded like Pocasso, nice job overall!
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July 11, 2022 at 6:03 pm #78174
johntells114
ParticipantHello. I would appreciate anyone who can give me performance/acting feedback on my horror narration. Thanks.
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July 13, 2022 at 11:49 am #78225
Thomas_D
ParticipantHey Johntells114! What effects are you using here? It sounds like your using a small bit of some sort of octave distortion? Either way I think it’s perfect as it’s not too much or too little.
One thing I would like to hear differently is maybe switching up the tone on some words (similar to how you said “Stop It!”). Reason being is that I wonder if the you can play with tension a little more throughout to keep the horror/suspense there.
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July 13, 2022 at 2:21 pm #78226
johntells114
ParticipantHey Thomas yea I just did de-clicker/esser and then bass boost equalization. Anyways, thank you so much for your feedback.
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July 11, 2022 at 5:51 pm #78172
JNMullett
ParticipantHi All,
Another practice read for narration. I recorded on my mac so the tone is a bit hollow. I would love to get any feedback you might have. Thank you in advance!!
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July 14, 2022 at 9:29 pm #78247
VoicesByJeff
ParticipantVery nice flow. I thought your voice had the right tone and was consistent.
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July 11, 2022 at 9:32 pm #78180
RoxyMel
ParticipantVery engaging voice Jeff! Very expressive, especially towards the end. If I had to dig deep to find constructive feedback, I would say maybe bring some more of that expression in towards the beginning as well. Excellent read.
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July 11, 2022 at 12:12 pm #78156
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July 11, 2022 at 11:14 am #78152
rustylj63
ParticipantHey Y’all,
Eight days and counting. Let me hear what you think about these please? Thank you so much!Attachments:
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July 24, 2022 at 2:51 pm #78491
Cheechman
ParticipantWould recommend checking which words to hilite in the script.
I thought some that were hilited should not have been so much and some should have been more.
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July 11, 2022 at 4:33 pm #78166
Honeyvoice
ParticipantThis was an excellent read! You sounded relaxed and very clear. I think you can up the energy and emotion just a little.
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July 10, 2022 at 6:56 pm #78134
slemay
ParticipantOk, this is my first time doing this so would love to get some feedback. I did it off my phone so its not going to be the best recording. I would love to hear any advice on speed, clarity, etc. THANKS!
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July 10, 2022 at 10:32 pm #78145
RoxyMel
ParticipantHi again Slemay. On your second read foe Nike again super good job for a first time for you! I would say for me there is just a little too long of these micro pauses between phases and I feel you could even add just a little more excitement. Such a good job though for being so new to this! Keep it up!
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July 10, 2022 at 10:28 pm #78144
RoxyMel
ParticipantHi Slemay. Great job for your first time!! I would say that it does sound a little to me like you are reading in some parts,also you can probably vary your list more (when listing the attributes of the vehicle). Keep up the good work!
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July 10, 2022 at 3:42 pm #78131
slemay
Participant#78110 Elise I thought your energy was really good on the Space camp read and you made me want to visit the location with your enthusiasm.
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