[David Goldberg]

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[Sarania]

Hello All,
I did 3 commercials for homework and would love any feedback you can give me.
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!

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[elizbrooksbell]

You hit the key words really well! Great work!

[Cheechman]

I thought Betty Crocker lacked sincere emotion, something I have a big problem with, by the way…lol
The best one for me was the movie read.
Very natural and hit the key words great.

[JoyceVOA]

Betty Crocker – great read! I thought you sounded warm and inviting. I wanted to hear more about Betty. Some words you over pronounced and woman needed a little more emphasis.

[brendiginette]

Hello everybody! I’m a newbie looking for some feedback on these scripts. My main focuses are: keeping good pace, avoiding micro pauses, and to not pitch down at the end of every sentence.

Any and all feedback will be greatly appreciated! Thank you community!

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[elizbrooksbell]

The pacing was really good, however I would recommend a lead-In so it doesn’t sound like you’re just reading it of the page. Great job!

[JoyceVOA]

Great diction and pace.However they both sounded like reads and not conversational.

[VoicesByJeff]

Hey everyone! Just did some practice scripts for my latest assignment from my coach. Would love any feedback you have! Thanks!

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[Gill]

VoicesbyJeff,
Really nice jobs on these reads! Each sounded natural, pace complements each script and you’re clear with your diction. I liked that you changed the phrases of the last script with born instead of born itself. I caught myself being distracted with each word instead of the phrase so nice job on catching that in your variations.

[Gill]

Hi some more practice scripts, any feedback would be great!

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[Alli]

Both reads were really good. They sounded very clear and natural flowing, especially for 711. You have good inflection that keeps the script alive. I think youre doing great

[VoicesByJeff]

These were both really strong! I thought the 711 was the stronger of the two but not by much. Voice clarity, pace and diction were all great. Keep it up!

[Rebekah]

Hello all,
I am an aspiring voice-over actress. This is my assignment for my 3rd private session. THis time I wanted to have a little fun with the Air Jamaica script and no, I am not a Jamaican native. Keep in mind I have been MIA for about 5 months as you offer your appreciated feedback. Let me know what you all think.

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[Benn Pharr IV]

Hey Rebekah,

Your accent for Air Jamaica was pretty good. I had a good laugh as you stated you’re not native to the island. My only suggestion would be to add a little more energy and excitement to your delivery. Good job!

[Gill]

Hi Rebekah,
Air Jamaica:You did a nice job making me feel like I was going to Jamaica. If you didn’t mention it I would have said you sounded native. I think your pace is good for this read because anything faster with the accent would have probably made it harder to understand. Your diction was also clear. The only thing I would say about this is to make sure you continuously stay in the accent as I hear it dropped a few times.
Motivational-Informercial: I like that you made this your own, for this read I would be mindful of your diction with research, your pace is good.
National Gallery of Art: I liked your energy for this read and pace. I would be careful with some of the pronunciations with this read like Picasso sounded like Pocasso, nice job overall!

[Rebekah]

Hi Gill,
Thank you so much for your feedback. I will definitely keep those things in mind.

[johntells114]

Hello. I would appreciate anyone who can give me performance/acting feedback on my horror narration. Thanks.

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[Thomas_D]

Hey Johntells114! What effects are you using here? It sounds like your using a small bit of some sort of octave distortion? Either way I think it’s perfect as it’s not too much or too little.

One thing I would like to hear differently is maybe switching up the tone on some words (similar to how you said “Stop It!”). Reason being is that I wonder if the you can play with tension a little more throughout to keep the horror/suspense there.

[johntells114]

Hey Thomas yea I just did de-clicker/esser and then bass boost equalization. Anyways, thank you so much for your feedback.

[JNMullett]

Hi All,

Another practice read for narration. I recorded on my mac so the tone is a bit hollow. I would love to get any feedback you might have. Thank you in advance!!

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[VoicesByJeff]

Very nice flow. I thought your voice had the right tone and was consistent.

[RoxyMel]

Very engaging voice Jeff! Very expressive, especially towards the end. If I had to dig deep to find constructive feedback, I would say maybe bring some more of that expression in towards the beginning as well. Excellent read.

[RoxyMel]

Appreciate your feedback much, thank you!

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[rustylj63]

Hey Y’all,
Eight days and counting. Let me hear what you think about these please? Thank you so much!

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[Cheechman]

Would recommend checking which words to hilite in the script.
I thought some that were hilited should not have been so much and some should have been more.
Great voice!

[Honeyvoice]

This was an excellent read! You sounded relaxed and very clear. I think you can up the energy and emotion just a little.

[slemay]

Ok, this is my first time doing this so would love to get some feedback. I did it off my phone so its not going to be the best recording. I would love to hear any advice on speed, clarity, etc. THANKS!

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[RoxyMel]

Hi again Slemay. On your second read foe Nike again super good job for a first time for you! I would say for me there is just a little too long of these micro pauses between phases and I feel you could even add just a little more excitement. Such a good job though for being so new to this! Keep it up!

[slemay]

Thanks so much for both of your feedback posts. MUCH appreciated.

[RoxyMel]

Hi Slemay. Great job for your first time!! I would say that it does sound a little to me like you are reading in some parts,also you can probably vary your list more (when listing the attributes of the vehicle). Keep up the good work!

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