[cammons01]

Hi Nikka,

Very nice voice! I like both reads. Just a few things
1) The tone was appropriate for both of them. You added variety throughout the 2nd read very nicely
2) For the “4-H” read, at the end when you said “4-H grows here”, there were micro-pauses in between the words making it sound ….”robotic” (lol for lack of better words). Maybe if you blend them together, I think it would sound more coversational as you tail off the read

3) For the “running shoes” read, same thing…there were some micropauses as well, but not as noticeable as the “4H” read.

Overall, great job. Keep up the good work.