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RoxyMel
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Great job Ilene! With the sesame st read, I Love the excitement in you voice! Just the one line that starts with now is not completely clear on the emphasis. I think the meaning of this sentence could be clearer depending on where you put the emphasis. But I love your work! & kids will want this if you hear your voice, I think.