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Sylvanie
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Hello Everyone, Looking for feedback on my practice scripts below. As always, very much appreciated.

BOYS & GIRLS CLUB

Put this card in the hands of a child and there’ll be no room for a gun. A needle. Or a knife. It’s only a piece of paper, but that little membership card has helped keep millions of kids off drugs, out of gangs and in school. To learn how you can help the Boys & Girls Clubs, call 1-800-854-Club. Boys & Girls Clubs of America. The POSITIVE Place For Kids.

BURT’S BEES

You asked me to define myself? What should I say? I’m complicated. I’m complex. I’m a boss. And beautiful. I’m all these things and a million things more. But one thing I’m not? I’m not synthetic. So why would I use beauty products that are? Introducing new Burt’s Bees Beauty. A full line of natural cosmetics that make you feel your beautiful best. Because of how they’re made, not in spite of it. Burt’s Bees.

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