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January 24, 2021 at 11:24 pm
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Hi Hulykulani! Good job on these 3 scripts – good pacing and energy for all of them, and good emphasis on key words.
On Script 2 the tone raised at the end of the sentence as if a question instead of a period on “With big corn flakes and crunchy bunches of oats.” Minor thing. Good job here!
Mary