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AlexisVOAlexisVO
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Hi all,

I’m looking for feedback on my performance. This was listed as an educational game for kids about space. Thanks! –Alexis

Script:

Today we’re going to explore all of the planets in our solar system and some other places as well. We’ll travel into the future when astronauts live throughout the solar system. On each world we’ll see what the weather is like, what we would wear, and what we would do to have fun! Grab your oxygen, put on your seatbelt, and let’s blast off!

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