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kfvoicekfvoice
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Hi burdahirl!

Nice read!

Pitch and tone were good. I would recommend a longer pause after “Listen.” … It sounds like it’s part of your second sentence. Emphasizing ALWAYS and MULTIPAX a little more will highlight the brand and product.

Overall, good job!

Kathy