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Nice reads! Your tone and pace were good in both scripts, although I felt like your pitch and emphasis could of varied with certain words.
In the first script, try changing your pitch upward at the end of your opening line (… a lot!), like you did with “… right now!” Maybe emphasis “easiest” in the second sentence, and “Recycling is important…” in your last line. Just my thoughts.
With the second script, the opening line, “What exactly goes into candy to make it so sweet and yummy?”, seemed to lack the enthusiasm and excitement compared to the rest of your read.
Good job! Keep at it!
Kathy
