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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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July 29, 2022 at 6:39 pm #78665
ladyburdkm
ParticipantHi all, I welcome feedback on these commercial reads; creativity, pace, clarity, and conversational delivery.
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August 8, 2022 at 4:44 pm #78984
Rachel MSP
ParticipantHi,
I thought this sounded like a great radio ad. I prefer the crayola-2 rather than 4 because it didn’t sound as confident and the inflections/cadences on certain words/phrases didn’t sound like they were placed where you might have wanted them.
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August 16, 2022 at 5:58 pm #79246
ladyburdkm
ParticipantThank you kindly Rachel! Going to keep on practicing! 🙂
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July 31, 2022 at 2:41 pm #78717
samsheeks
ParticipantThe sound quality is really great! And totally believable “mom” voice. The thoughts felt a little choppy at points and that was distracting, especially in the first line. Maybe work on connecting thoughts and driving the through-line.
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August 1, 2022 at 2:55 pm #78774
ladyburdkm
ParticipantExcellent, I felt the choppiness as well. I really appreciate this. Thank you
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July 29, 2022 at 2:42 pm #78653
TeatroMan
ParticipantLooking for feedback on my narration spots. Any micro pauses, am I pronouncing words correctly? Engaging? That sort of stuff
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August 1, 2022 at 11:05 am #78762
Gill
ParticipantHi TeatroMan,
Nice work on your reads you showed a wide variation of your pitch. I really liked cosmos because I felt that had a more conversational connection and your pace was good for the read. I’m not sure what you were aiming for with one piece. If you’re considering a gaming read for it then I would say your projection would be on track but if you weren’t then its a little over projected. I did like your characterization of it. For Chaplin, I did hear some slurring of your words so just be mindful of that. Overall nice job! -
July 31, 2022 at 2:44 pm #78718
samsheeks
ParticipantGreat work! I can hear you trying to pronounce things clearly – keep it up! I think it will keep getting easier!
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July 29, 2022 at 1:43 pm #78647
Amy Connerley
ParticipantPreparing for my commercial demo! I would love feedback on if these sound conversational and my pacing! *Traveling at the moment so recording on my phone, so no notes on recording quality please!
Thank you! 🙂
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August 11, 2022 at 1:38 am #79069
elizbrooksbell
ParticipantReally good work! The only thing I would mention would be the pacing, sometimes you seem to be going a bit fast, and other times too slow. I would just say to be more consistent!
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July 31, 2022 at 2:54 pm #78728
samsheeks
Participantgreat enthusiasm and connection to the script! I can hear that your room needs some treatment. It was a bit echo-y and I can hear some static or so from your equiptment.
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July 31, 2022 at 2:07 pm #78701
nicolance
ParticipantHello Amy – great energy. Slow down on Barbie a little – this will help with enunciation – lost the t on adult both times, and the d in assembled. And who are you talking when you say “you can be anything”? It will sound more conversational if you have someone you are telling this to . . .as for Discovery – that is more of a promo than a commercial . . .promos tend to be big – and so if you add more energy and again think about who you are telling this to, you will have more of a conversational tone. Great job on both – Lance
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July 30, 2022 at 9:59 am #78683
Cheechman
ParticipantAre you using a “pop” filter?
The letter s is very noticeable.
Otherwise, they sound good.
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July 28, 2022 at 8:29 pm #78624
BB123
ParticipantTest. Plz ignore
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July 28, 2022 at 6:52 pm #78621
nicolance
ParticipantHi Forum folks – sample of a commercial for radio – did the audio sound clear? Any technical issues? Thanks Lance
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July 29, 2022 at 6:07 pm #78664
ladyburdkm
ParticipantGreat voice and I love your texture! Great pace and very clear.
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July 29, 2022 at 1:47 pm #78650
Amy Connerley
ParticipantLove your read and your pacing! I would like a little more conversational feel to the “in fact” and the “why” direction changes, but I really love your tone!
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July 28, 2022 at 7:40 pm #78623
88KeysDC
ParticipantThe audio was nice and clear and your voice was a pleasure to listen to – I can almost imagine the background music that could be paired with this when it hits the radio. Good stuff!
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July 28, 2022 at 6:41 pm #78614
88KeysDC
ParticipantHi everyone,
I’ve been away from Voice Over training for a little while, and I’m trying to get back into the swing of things. I figured I’d upload a couple of samples in the hopes of getting some feedback. I’d appreciate any comments on my pacing and flow. I’m also trying to improve my recording quality, so any feedback on the production would be very helpful.
Thanks in advance!
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July 31, 2022 at 2:47 pm #78719
samsheeks
ParticipantThese were great! Keep up what you’re doing. Good understanding of script and intention.
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July 29, 2022 at 4:35 pm #78662
ladyburdkm
ParticipantWow, these are great. I enjoyed the tone of your voice and you had an excellent pace. I felt like you were talking to me! Very happy you shared your reads. Thank you
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July 28, 2022 at 6:50 pm #78620
nicolance
ParticipantHi 88KeysDC – Thank you for posting your samples. I enjoyed listening to them – the high professional quality of your recording, your friendly, engaging and conversational tone and the fact that I thought you were talking to me. I don’t know why you’ve been away from VO – but it is time to pursue. You’re a natural! Lance
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July 28, 2022 at 2:22 am #78568
samsheeks
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August 8, 2022 at 5:31 pm #78992
Rachel MSP
ParticipantHello,
These were both very clear and had a good pace.
I thought your interpretation of both scrips were very unique. I would suggest rereading them with different inflections to find something the sounds/feels more natural and less like you are acting. -
July 28, 2022 at 6:44 pm #78617
88KeysDC
ParticipantVery clean recordings and I can hear your enthusiasm for the brands. Good stuff!
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July 28, 2022 at 2:24 am #78571
samsheeks
ParticipantHere are my most recent practice recordings with my current set-up! Working on making my home studio sound as clean as possible. Would love some input!
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July 30, 2022 at 10:02 am #78684
Cheechman
ParticipantNeed more emotion, excitement, in the read.
I have the same problem and it’s hard to work on.
The 2nd and 4th read were my favs.
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July 28, 2022 at 4:20 pm #78607
daveg
ParticipantOk. Nice sound. clean, no obvious problem…at least in my studio monitors. Your reads sound a bit…dramatic…can i hear you smile while you read some of this…? let the sun shine in on consumer brand reads…the audience is gonna be female…imagine a good friend who is an at home mom…
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July 28, 2022 at 2:19 am #78566
samsheeks
ParticipantWould love some feedback on this practice recording for Spotify. Thanks so much! 🙂
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August 8, 2022 at 5:45 pm #78994
Rachel MSP
ParticipantThis sounded really good in my opinion. I would only suggest going back over the word “is” at the end you kind of threw it away when you said “the right music is always at your fingertips”.
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July 30, 2022 at 12:23 am #78670
madtrammell
ParticipantGreat Work! The sound quality was excellent and you have very good pacing and delivery as well!
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July 27, 2022 at 5:03 pm #78557
elizbrooksbell
ParticipantLooking for some feedback on my narration!
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July 31, 2022 at 2:50 pm #78725
samsheeks
ParticipantI can hear some echo in your recording. I would work on upgrading your space or equipment.
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July 30, 2022 at 12:32 am #78672
madtrammell
ParticipantVery pleasant sounding voice! Only note that I have is that the pauses seem a bit long between phrases, I have been told that this can make recordings sound un-natural. One rule that I have implemented when editing my recordings is half a second pause for periods and a quarter of a second for commas. Well done!
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