[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[RetsofNoraa]

Here’s my latest assignment! Going for brighter delivery and more speed control this time around.

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[Silver Wit]

Your delivery sounds good to me, but I feel like if you slow down the line “running your own business running you ragged,” it’ll sound a bit clearer. Good work overall

[Leslie Day]

Hello everyone,
This is my first submission. I have a few more to upload. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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[Silver Wit]

Wow. Such a sweet and relaxing voice. Not too many notes to give, but if I were to have one, I’d say maybe take a slight pause before delivering the last line in your Advil commercial.

[RetsofNoraa]

Great start! I love the soothing tone of your voice, and I think you’re finding your niche quite well. For the Advil piece, I had some slight difficulty telling what the first few words were initially; the way you ran them together wound up sounding more like “mussulex” than “muscle aches.” I think this was due to rushing into the next word, since later on you say the same phrase with far better diction. Then again, maybe I’m projecting because that’s something I tend to do often, myself…

[samsheeks]

One more for Nike

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[joekett]

Nice voice, good read, great pace for the topic. A good Mic and a good sound studio, and you’re off to the races. Keep at ot.

[samsheeks]

Two takes for this one… Not sure how much is too much!

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[madtrammell]

You have a great voice and I really like the energy you brought to this read! The only note I would make is that the pace seemed just a tad quick.

[samsheeks]

A couple spots targeted for kids! Tried to create wonder and excitement.

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[TeatroMan]

Great job with both of them! I think you nailed it with trying to add the excitement to the read and it shows! Keep it up!

[DillonP]

I just finished four reads two commercial and two narration. This is about getting annunciation, Emphasis, speech and other things that will be important. Please let give me feedback I would really appreciate it. Thank You.

Commercials: A-1 Stanek Sauce and Arby’s
Narration: AEC Foundation and USO- Make a diffrence.

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[Hazaro]

Great reads! Enunciation would be one thing to pay more attention to. But very natural!

[samsheeks]

Loved the mood you brought to these! Just make sure you’re dictating the ends of your words – make them more crisp

[Silver Wit]

Hey everyone, I’m working on my first round of assignments (part 3). Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

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[samsheeks]

Make sure you are saving and uploading these as audio files (WAV or MP3) to ensure compatibility with all devices and to make access easy!

[Silver Wit]

Ohhh, whoops. I forgot about that. Thanks for reminding me

[Silver Wit]

Hey everyone, I’m working on my first round of assignments (part2). Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

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[Silver Wit]

Hey everyone, I’m working on my first round of assignments. Any and all help is greatly appreciated.

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[anlevine95]

Hey All! (part 2 since i went over maximum file amount).

I have my demo recording coming up soon and wanted some feedback on my reads if anyone has the time. Thanks in advance!

Adam

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[samsheeks]

Great reads! Focus on diction. You have a very distinct voice – would love to hear you do some fun characters!

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