[David Goldberg]

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[JNMullett]

Hi All,

I have uploaded a couple of narration practice reads and would love to hear any feedback you may have. Thank you in advance!!

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[Joe Slade]

Hey Jeff, great work on these reads! I enjoyed your pacing and felt both reads had an almost musical quality making them easy to listen to. Both these reads also felt like they were being delivered by a knowledgeable and trusted source. Nicely done!

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[ColtonJLong]

My first narration homework, uploaded a bit later than intended!

3COM:

Nearly twenty years ago, 3Com Corporation launched a new industry by developing the first technology for networking personal computers. Today, 3Com is a company that maintains its leadership role with innovative solutions spanning the scope of communications. From the global enterprise to the neighborhood business, from the Internet point of presence to the home office, 3Com systems and products put computing resources within easy reach of millions of users worldwide. 3Com combines cutting edge research and development with world-class manufacturing facilities, and international service and support.

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[joekett]

I agree with the previous post. A bit rushed, but well read. I don’t know your natural voice, but if you could make ie more relaxed it would be great.

[Joe Slade]

Great read here Colton! To my ear, the pacing seemed just a bit rushed but otherwise very well done.

[lmzawarski]

Here’s a recording of the “Gordon College” script. Struggling a bit with the pops…

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[TimberTykes]

Hello, lmzawarski!

I thought that this was a very well done read! The read was clear and concise, with proper emphasis and variance where needed. The pacing was pretty accurate, also.

I didn’t think there was a big problem with pops, though I couldn’t help but to hear a lot of mouth sounds while listening. Maybe your mouth was dry during the recording? It happens to me a lot. Regardless, great work!

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[Esandyii]

Hello all. Would appreciate feedback on these two medical narration mp3s, including the quality of the audio. Many thanks in advance.
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[Silver Wit]

I just want to start by saying, I think your voice is PERFECT for medical narration. However, I feel like you should work on your clarity in the “knee replacement” read. I heard a bit of muddled lines that kinda blurred together. But it was still an enjoyable listen.

[Esandyii]

Many Thanks
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[TimberTykes]

Hello, Esandyii!

First things first, I really enjoy your voice. Very nice and rustic, in my opinion.

In ‘Knee,’ I think the read was very to the point, although I feel that since it’s the topic of the narration and therefore pops up more often, ‘Partial Knee Replacement’ could do with more variance. Also, it seems like some words were running together, but that could just be me. I also like the way you said ‘particular,’ for some reason.

I like ‘A-fib’ much more! I heard more variance here, but I would probably elevate the first ‘ventricles’ and ‘also.’

Great reads, and thank you for allowing me to listen to them!

[Esandyii]

Appreciate the feedback
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[RetsofNoraa]

And here’s the other half of my assignment, which I forgot to attach to my previous post. Oops!

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[TeatroMan]

You have a nice presence and it works for the assignment. It might be on my end but it did sound like some words were meshing together. I’d suggest timing it next time. Other than that it was good

[RetsofNoraa]

Here’s my latest assignment! Going for brighter delivery and more speed control this time around.

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[Silver Wit]

Your delivery sounds good to me, but I feel like if you slow down the line “running your own business running you ragged,” it’ll sound a bit clearer. Good work overall

[Leslie Day]

Hello everyone,
This is my first submission. I have a few more to upload. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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[Silver Wit]

Wow. Such a sweet and relaxing voice. Not too many notes to give, but if I were to have one, I’d say maybe take a slight pause before delivering the last line in your Advil commercial.

[RetsofNoraa]

Great start! I love the soothing tone of your voice, and I think you’re finding your niche quite well. For the Advil piece, I had some slight difficulty telling what the first few words were initially; the way you ran them together wound up sounding more like “mussulex” than “muscle aches.” I think this was due to rushing into the next word, since later on you say the same phrase with far better diction. Then again, maybe I’m projecting because that’s something I tend to do often, myself…

[samsheeks]

One more for Nike

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[joekett]

Nice voice, good read, great pace for the topic. A good Mic and a good sound studio, and you’re off to the races. Keep at ot.

[samsheeks]

Two takes for this one… Not sure how much is too much!

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[madtrammell]

You have a great voice and I really like the energy you brought to this read! The only note I would make is that the pace seemed just a tad quick.

[samsheeks]

A couple spots targeted for kids! Tried to create wonder and excitement.

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[TeatroMan]

Great job with both of them! I think you nailed it with trying to add the excitement to the read and it shows! Keep it up!

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