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Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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Hi everyone! I’m uploading two practice narration reads for feedback please! I’m working on pace, conversational style and flow. Any tips? Thank you so much for listening!
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Hi All,
I have uploaded a couple of narration practice reads and would love to hear any feedback you may have. Thank you in advance!!
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Hey Jeff, great work on these reads! I enjoyed your pacing and felt both reads had an almost musical quality making them easy to listen to. Both these reads also felt like they were being delivered by a knowledgeable and trusted source. Nicely done!
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My first narration homework, uploaded a bit later than intended!
3COM:
Nearly twenty years ago, 3Com Corporation launched a new industry by developing the first technology for networking personal computers. Today, 3Com is a company that maintains its leadership role with innovative solutions spanning the scope of communications. From the global enterprise to the neighborhood business, from the Internet point of presence to the home office, 3Com systems and products put computing resources within easy reach of millions of users worldwide. 3Com combines cutting edge research and development with world-class manufacturing facilities, and international service and support.
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Hello, lmzawarski!
I thought that this was a very well done read! The read was clear and concise, with proper emphasis and variance where needed. The pacing was pretty accurate, also.
I didn’t think there was a big problem with pops, though I couldn’t help but to hear a lot of mouth sounds while listening. Maybe your mouth was dry during the recording? It happens to me a lot. Regardless, great work!
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Hello all. Would appreciate feedback on these two medical narration mp3s, including the quality of the audio. Many thanks in advance.
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I just want to start by saying, I think your voice is PERFECT for medical narration. However, I feel like you should work on your clarity in the “knee replacement” read. I heard a bit of muddled lines that kinda blurred together. But it was still an enjoyable listen.
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Hello, Esandyii!
First things first, I really enjoy your voice. Very nice and rustic, in my opinion.
In ‘Knee,’ I think the read was very to the point, although I feel that since it’s the topic of the narration and therefore pops up more often, ‘Partial Knee Replacement’ could do with more variance. Also, it seems like some words were running together, but that could just be me. I also like the way you said ‘particular,’ for some reason.
I like ‘A-fib’ much more! I heard more variance here, but I would probably elevate the first ‘ventricles’ and ‘also.’
Great reads, and thank you for allowing me to listen to them!
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Hello everyone,
This is my first submission. I have a few more to upload. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.-
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Great start! I love the soothing tone of your voice, and I think you’re finding your niche quite well. For the Advil piece, I had some slight difficulty telling what the first few words were initially; the way you ran them together wound up sounding more like “mussulex” than “muscle aches.” I think this was due to rushing into the next word, since later on you say the same phrase with far better diction. Then again, maybe I’m projecting because that’s something I tend to do often, myself…
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