[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[Donnamichelle444]

#79253 was awesome in many ways but I will start by it over all feel. It was like a real down home welcome to breakfast. I found it very very professional!! something to aspire to for sure

[Bil-Bo]

Atlanta Bread Company
When you think of Atlanta Bread Company, don’t just think bread. Think of an entire breakfast menu. Fresh baked pastries…hot breakfast sandwiches and specialty coffees. Think of our cafe with savory sandwiches, daily soups and crisp
salads. And don’t forget…we can cater your next special event or meeting. Atlanta Bread Company. More than just bread.

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[jliebert]

My only feedback is…great!

[MayeWest]

Now I want some bread!!!

[Silver Wit]

Dang, that sounded really, really solid. Though I will say, I didn’t hear the “r” in the word “crisp.” But sounded good overall. Liked the music in the BG too, nice touch.

[TimberTykes]

Good Morning!

I have a couple of recordings today! Feedback of any kind is much appreciated.

I really hope I’m doing right in the way of avoiding pauses- I’ve been taking time to make sure I don’t wait too long in-between sentences.

Either way, thanks in advance, and enjoy your day!

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[jliebert]

For the Uber recording, I would suggest working on the natural conversational tone. Picture yourself looking a friend in the eye and telling them earnestly the great things about this job you discovered, ticking off the benefits on each finger. I hope this helps.

[Silver Wit]

I like the bit of personality you had in your voice for the Uber commercial. Also sounds like your pauses are on a good tempo.

[joekett]

Hello TT,
Good energy. You should work on your pronunciation in the Zeal recording. Make sure you pronounce the D and bring it down to a more natural, relaxed presentation.
Uber was much better.

[TimberTykes]

Thank you for your feedback!

It’s funny, because I was paying so much attention to pronouncing my Ts, and then my Ds start to suffer. I can even tell in the recording. I still have a long ways to go, but I’ll continue to work at it!

[Elise Duke]

Hi everyone! Your feedback on these samples is much appreciated. I’m looking for your feedback on connectivity to the reads, choppiness and tone. Thank you!

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[Silver Wit]

Perhaps it’s because I’m still training my ear, but both of these performances were spot on in my book.

[Nikka Kowidge]

Hi everyone! I’m uploading two practice narration reads for feedback please! I’m working on pace, conversational style and flow. Any tips? Thank you so much for listening!

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[joekett]

Good read on both. Relaxed, easy to listen to. I’d watch the quick pass over the T in the “sweet and ynmmy” Otherwise, nice.

[JNMullett]

Hi All,

I have uploaded a couple of narration practice reads and would love to hear any feedback you may have. Thank you in advance!!

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[Joe Slade]

Hey Jeff, great work on these reads! I enjoyed your pacing and felt both reads had an almost musical quality making them easy to listen to. Both these reads also felt like they were being delivered by a knowledgeable and trusted source. Nicely done!

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[ColtonJLong]

My first narration homework, uploaded a bit later than intended!

3COM:

Nearly twenty years ago, 3Com Corporation launched a new industry by developing the first technology for networking personal computers. Today, 3Com is a company that maintains its leadership role with innovative solutions spanning the scope of communications. From the global enterprise to the neighborhood business, from the Internet point of presence to the home office, 3Com systems and products put computing resources within easy reach of millions of users worldwide. 3Com combines cutting edge research and development with world-class manufacturing facilities, and international service and support.

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[joekett]

I agree with the previous post. A bit rushed, but well read. I don’t know your natural voice, but if you could make ie more relaxed it would be great.

[Joe Slade]

Great read here Colton! To my ear, the pacing seemed just a bit rushed but otherwise very well done.

[lmzawarski]

Here’s a recording of the “Gordon College” script. Struggling a bit with the pops…

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[TimberTykes]

Hello, lmzawarski!

I thought that this was a very well done read! The read was clear and concise, with proper emphasis and variance where needed. The pacing was pretty accurate, also.

I didn’t think there was a big problem with pops, though I couldn’t help but to hear a lot of mouth sounds while listening. Maybe your mouth was dry during the recording? It happens to me a lot. Regardless, great work!

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[Esandyii]

Hello all. Would appreciate feedback on these two medical narration mp3s, including the quality of the audio. Many thanks in advance.
ES

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[Silver Wit]

I just want to start by saying, I think your voice is PERFECT for medical narration. However, I feel like you should work on your clarity in the “knee replacement” read. I heard a bit of muddled lines that kinda blurred together. But it was still an enjoyable listen.

[Esandyii]

Many Thanks
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[TimberTykes]

Hello, Esandyii!

First things first, I really enjoy your voice. Very nice and rustic, in my opinion.

In ‘Knee,’ I think the read was very to the point, although I feel that since it’s the topic of the narration and therefore pops up more often, ‘Partial Knee Replacement’ could do with more variance. Also, it seems like some words were running together, but that could just be me. I also like the way you said ‘particular,’ for some reason.

I like ‘A-fib’ much more! I heard more variance here, but I would probably elevate the first ‘ventricles’ and ‘also.’

Great reads, and thank you for allowing me to listen to them!

[Esandyii]

Appreciate the feedback
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[RetsofNoraa]

And here’s the other half of my assignment, which I forgot to attach to my previous post. Oops!

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[TeatroMan]

You have a nice presence and it works for the assignment. It might be on my end but it did sound like some words were meshing together. I’d suggest timing it next time. Other than that it was good

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