[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[Earthbul]

Any and all feedback appreciated.
Btw, is the music too overpowering ?

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[Adam Cannon]

Great pacing and diction, I would say you could go a level down on the music

[Earthbul]

Thanks for the feedback Adam. I always question music volume on my spots. Listened to your Haunted spot. Would love to hear one of your more conversational reads.

[Earthbul]

Practice read. Any and all critiques and comments welcomed and appreciated.

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[Honeyvoice]

A struggle But it was fun

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[Earthbul]

Once again recorded in the car lol any and all comments or critiques are welcomed and appreciated.

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[ierxyzz]

Happy new year, everyone! For these practice reads, I’m working on avoiding up-talk and shortening the pauses between lines to keep the flow sharp and engaging. Thanks in advance for any feedback!

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[Earthbul]

I really both of these reads. You kept me engaged with a quick pace and great enunciation. Nice spacing in the edits. Really clean sound as well.

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[Joseph Thompson]

I’m working on material for my demo and need some input on how believable, relaxed and comfortable I sound. Is my diction clear enough, and do I enunciate so that all my words can be heard? Thanks for taking the time to give me some constructive feedback.

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[Earthbul]

I have to agree with the others. A bit choppyand breathy. Could benefit with a quicker pace. Love the accent brother.

[ierxyzz]

Hey Joseph, you have great diction here. I understood everything perfectly. I agree with mike about breaks between words, especially in your Brinox read. Great reads!

[Mike Koziol]

Hi Joseph, You have a strong voice and solid enunciation. I found that your tempo was a bit choppy with long breaks between words. Sounds like your commas in the sentences are over emphasized.

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[Joseph Thompson]

Great feedback, thanks Mike!

[alayne_chappell]

Trying one more time since the Upstart one is a bit distorted now (seems to have happened after reducing the file size – hence I’m not familiar with the tech yet) 🙂 Hopefully this one works!

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[alayne_chappell]

Looks like the third read didn’t upload with my post so adding again here, thanks!

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[alayne_chappell]

Hi everyone, for these practice reads I’m focused on narrative corporate video scripts. Any feedback on technique is much appreciated (pace, achieving a conversational tone, etc, or anything you have comments on; apart from tech since I have yet to dig into good mics and editing :)! I would also be curious which of these folks like best overall. Thank you!

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[Earthbul]

My submission for this weeks contest “Committee for Cleaner Elections”
Any thoughts ?

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[ierxyzz]

I really like how you emphasized each thought. This feels fitting for the adverts I see like this

[Joseph Thompson]

I like your pacing and your tone, but your voice sounds a little too “whispery” to be convincing that you’re a political pundit trying to get me to shift the way I approach my politics this election season. Great voice though!

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