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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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April 16, 2024 at 6:04 pm #95316
Tom_S
ParticipantThe first few times I recorded this, I went way too fast. This seems to be a tendency. I would appreciate any feedback on pacing, tone, or anything else. Thank you!
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April 24, 2024 at 12:27 pm #95516
Terra Ashe
ParticipantYour tone and pace is lovely I think you can have some more variation from the first half problem being stated part to the second half of we have a solution. A lot of mouth noise and I would give yourself a lead in to help get into it. But nice read!
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April 16, 2024 at 5:58 pm #95314
Tom_S
ParticipantThis is my first submission to the feedback forum. Any feedback is appreciated. I am most interested in my pacing, diction, and if my delivery is choppy. I have a decent recording setup. I am using Studio One with a Shure MV7X mic. I’ve uploaded a wave file but you can also listen on SoundCloud (private link) if you’d rather not have a file download. Thank you!
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April 12, 2024 at 8:24 pm #95188
hsturgis
ParticipantHi everyone! I don’t have an at home studio but would love any and all constructive feedback on these two spots I’ve been practicing– mainly about my tone, diction and pacing! They are fairly contrasting. Thanks!
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April 14, 2024 at 10:35 am #95208
detoomey
ParticipantSturgis – very nice work, zero pretense to your voice. Super natural. Feels like I’m listening to you. Only note, is you tend to lose a little air and voicing at ends of sentences and the line gets swallowed a tad. Very strong. Appreciated your feedback as well
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April 7, 2024 at 2:15 pm #95091
detoomey
ParticipantHere’s another to pick apart. Any thoughts out there? Thanks!
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April 12, 2024 at 8:32 pm #95193
hsturgis
ParticipantI really like this one too, your tone is much deeper and the general mood is much more serious. Your pitch is good and I think matches what this sort of spot would call for. Only thing is that towards the end with the call to action it feels a little rushed and like we’re missing a word there. But great job!
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April 14, 2024 at 9:34 pm #95229
Earthbul
ParticipantI agree with hsturgis. Your tone and pitch are spot on. I really think this type of read is in your wheelhouse. Would love to hear it with the audio cleaned up a bit. I’d really love to your interpretatiin of my Olympia motors piece. It’d be a perfect fit.
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April 7, 2024 at 1:44 pm #95089
detoomey
ParticipantHowdy folks – no home studio yet, but hoping to get some general thoughts/feedback on this read. Thanks very much.
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April 15, 2024 at 8:08 pm #95264
Tom_S
ParticipantVery nice voice and it sounded well-recorded. I like how you told a story and maintained my attention.
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April 12, 2024 at 8:29 pm #95192
hsturgis
ParticipantThis feels really conversational, in the best way! I feel like you are really painting the picture of what the commercial would look like. And I think pacing and tone were appropriate as well.
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April 1, 2024 at 7:35 pm #95025
gwenthevoice
ParticipantHello All! Here is a practice script for the awesome Nordic Track! Any comments are welcome but I especially would like feedback on the following:
•Does my read sound conversational?
•How is my diction?
•Working on my pace – how is it?
Am I reading my copy with a good flow or do I sound choppy?
How is my audio?
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April 14, 2024 at 10:24 am #95206
detoomey
ParticipantGwen. you have a very smooth tone and quite soothing to listen to. Lovely. It’s a bit controlled, and could be messier and a pacing could have more variety. Overall, you have a strong vocal presence that draws you in.
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May 8, 2024 at 3:11 pm #95692
gwenthevoice
ParticipantDetoomey, thank you very much for that insightful feedback! I will keep this in mind and try to vary my pace a bit. 🙂
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March 31, 2024 at 1:44 am #94992
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March 30, 2024 at 3:05 pm #94988
MattSchonberg
ParticipantHi all, working on a Commercial demo and posting here for feedback on my practice. Thanks! Script is The REI Difference in the library.
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May 28, 2024 at 10:40 am #95947
Terra Ashe
ParticipantI think you have a nice pace! Sometimes you’re emphasizing certain words a bit hard, maybe try a “shrug it off” take to bring in a little more converstaional-ness to it, but good job!
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March 27, 2024 at 11:40 pm #94953
gwenthevoice
ParticipantHi everyone! I am practicing for a commercial demo. Looking for feedback to this Nutro dog food ad. For starters, here are some questions I have:
Does my read sound conversational?
How is my diction?
Working on my pace – how is it?
Am I reading my copy with a good flow or do I sound choppy?
How is my audio?
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April 17, 2024 at 1:47 am #95337
Brian Lakes
ParticipantHi Gwen!
Your voice is very calming. I like it! Your pace and diction are good, you had a pause in there between full and active lives. A tad more inflection to sound even more believable. Audio sounds good!
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May 8, 2024 at 3:15 pm #95693
gwenthevoice
ParticipantBrian, thank you for that feedback! I will keep this in mind and add more inflection and be sure to watch out for pauses! 🙂
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March 27, 2024 at 5:28 am #94941
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March 27, 2024 at 11:12 am #94944
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