[David Goldberg]

Hi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!

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[detoomey]

Here’s another to pick apart. Any thoughts out there? Thanks!

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[hsturgis]

I really like this one too, your tone is much deeper and the general mood is much more serious. Your pitch is good and I think matches what this sort of spot would call for. Only thing is that towards the end with the call to action it feels a little rushed and like we’re missing a word there. But great job!

[Earthbul]

I agree with hsturgis. Your tone and pitch are spot on. I really think this type of read is in your wheelhouse. Would love to hear it with the audio cleaned up a bit. I’d really love to your interpretatiin of my Olympia motors piece. It’d be a perfect fit.

[detoomey]

Thanks for the feedback. And the Olympia spot idea, that sounds fun, I’ll give it a shot (mind you home studio isn’t ready, but I’m game)

[detoomey]

Here is a run of the Olympian spot – did my best to try to forget your read after I transcribed it but here’s what I got, lol

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[detoomey]

Howdy folks – no home studio yet, but hoping to get some general thoughts/feedback on this read. Thanks very much.

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[Tom_S]

Very nice voice and it sounded well-recorded. I like how you told a story and maintained my attention.

[detoomey]

Appreciate the note Tom

[hsturgis]

This feels really conversational, in the best way! I feel like you are really painting the picture of what the commercial would look like. And I think pacing and tone were appropriate as well.

[gwenthevoice]

Hello All! Here is a practice script for the awesome Nordic Track! Any comments are welcome but I especially would like feedback on the following:
•Does my read sound conversational?
•How is my diction?
•Working on my pace – how is it?
Am I reading my copy with a good flow or do I sound choppy?
How is my audio?
Thanks in advance!

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[detoomey]

Gwen. you have a very smooth tone and quite soothing to listen to. Lovely. It’s a bit controlled, and could be messier and a pacing could have more variety. Overall, you have a strong vocal presence that draws you in.

[gwenthevoice]

Detoomey, thank you very much for that insightful feedback! I will keep this in mind and try to vary my pace a bit. 🙂

[Earthbul]

Any and all feedback is welcome and appreciated. Script written by Chat GPT for an existing company.

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[detoomey]

Earthbull, very strong right out the gate and very consistent. Voice is buttery and inviting and it worked well with the mood of the piece.

[MattSchonberg]

Hi all, working on a Commercial demo and posting here for feedback on my practice. Thanks! Script is The REI Difference in the library.

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[Terra Ashe]

I think you have a nice pace! Sometimes you’re emphasizing certain words a bit hard, maybe try a “shrug it off” take to bring in a little more converstaional-ness to it, but good job!

[gwenthevoice]

Hi everyone! I am practicing for a commercial demo. Looking for feedback to this Nutro dog food ad. For starters, here are some questions I have:
Does my read sound conversational?
How is my diction?
Working on my pace – how is it?
Am I reading my copy with a good flow or do I sound choppy?
How is my audio?
Thank you in advance!

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[Brian Lakes]

Hi Gwen!
Your voice is very calming. I like it! Your pace and diction are good, you had a pause in there between full and active lives. A tad more inflection to sound even more believable. Audio sounds good!
Overall good job. Keep it up!

[gwenthevoice]

Brian, thank you for that feedback! I will keep this in mind and add more inflection and be sure to watch out for pauses! 🙂

[AirlinesOfficeDesk]

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[rjoesbury]

Hi all, first time poster. Looking for feedback on pacing, breathing, sound quality and voice. Thanks.

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[Kim Meade]

Please review and provide constructive criticism of my Coronavirus public service announcement.

Thanks

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[gwenthevoice]

This is a good audio, good pace, relatively upbeat. You have just a bit of mouth noise but that can be reduced. Check out Waves plugins. Particularly, the Waves NS (noise suppression) and the Waves DeEsser.

[Frantz]

Hello everyone, just practicing here- creative feedback regarding my tone/flow/pace is appreciated!

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[gwenthevoice]

Your voice is almost musical! 🙂 Good pace, good pitch. One minor thing… On the grammarly script the word ‘meet’ disappears… You seem to rush through that. Beyond that, I would not change a thing.

[waninick]

Hey gang. Wanted to post something to see if my audio stack is up to the task. This is a clip where the first part is dry, straight from the mic. It is then repeated with R10 De-click, De-Noise, and ProEQ3, all in Studio One 6.5 (not the Pro version).

Any feedback is welcome. Thanks.

TimG

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