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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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October 20, 2022 at 5:39 pm #80904
madtrammell
ParticipantHello everyone, I have a narration practice read that I would love some feedback on!
Thank you and I hope you all have a great week!Attachments:
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October 20, 2022 at 1:44 pm #80895
Gregory Taylor
ParticipantHey all!
Trying to expand genres and go where the $. Check out these 2 samples. One is a Johnnie Walker ad and the other is an infomercial. Tell me what you think.Thanks in advance and I’ll be listening out for you!
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October 20, 2022 at 7:13 pm #80913
Hazaro
ParticipantGreat job with the Beta Prostate. Your voice is great for Johnny Walker as well, though I really would have liked to have heard your point of view with it on that one as the copy could be played with. Like, were you containing excitement to discover it in a store near you that never carried it before? Or were you surprised to find it in your cupboard at home after a long days work because you were craving it? Have fun with it to see what comes through. Your voice will naturally support it!
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October 20, 2022 at 12:29 am #80885
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October 18, 2022 at 8:26 pm #80870
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October 18, 2022 at 11:52 am #80853
smarlowe
ParticipantHello,
I have my last coaching session tonight and I just wanted a little feedback on my reads. Thanks!Attachments:
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October 20, 2022 at 7:20 pm #80914
Hazaro
ParticipantLoved what you brought to these reads. The sound is a bit echoey (is that even a word?), but your read is authentic and true. Great work!
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October 18, 2022 at 6:01 pm #80866
SuperLuke
ParticipantMailboxes etc: Your voice is great! The only thing I would do is compare this recording to how it sounds in a raw format. I could hear some Compression or editing in your voiceover file that made it sound a little bit like AI.
Special-K: It sounds like a cold read. Remember to breathe when necessary to give the copy of the read more enthusiasm so that the product sounds desirable.Of course, if it was only meant to be a cold read, then that’s okay too.
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October 18, 2022 at 6:06 pm #80868
madtrammell
ParticipantYou have a very nice voice for commercials! Sounds like you’re ready to take the next step!
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October 17, 2022 at 5:22 pm #80837
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October 17, 2022 at 1:38 pm #80832
Andres
ParticipantThis is an audition of mine, just looking for any feedback. “Lively, animated voice for toy video. Think Monster Jam announcer type of voice. Have fun with it!”
Roll it backwards or forwards to make the wheels light up!
Take on the toughest terrain
They look just like your favorite transformers
And they smash like them too!Attachments:
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October 18, 2022 at 6:05 pm #80867
SuperLuke
ParticipantAside from the copy getting cut off at the end I really thought your commercial read was awesome. loved the energy and the voice. Made me want to buy the product!
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October 18, 2022 at 12:18 pm #80857
smarlowe
ParticipantIt cut off at the end but I thought you really captured the tone you were going for. Very ‘truck rally’ 🙂
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October 17, 2022 at 12:19 pm #80830
Cheechman
ParticipantFor this role, the voiceover will act as a guide to the viewer who is going on scenario-based training
Script to read:
An apartment block could serve perfectly as temporary shelter for the community.
It is located near town, where there are jobs, a market, and a school.
But you need to find out more… There are three actions you can take to investigate the property.
But remember: each action will take a full day to complete.
The choice is up to you.Attachments:
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October 17, 2022 at 12:17 pm #80828
Cheechman
ParticipantProduction is working on a training video which requires a voiceover in the style of a newsreader
Script to read:
The outbreak of war has resulted in thousands of families fleeing their homes.
The UN has deployed peacekeepers in the area, but over 300,000 men, women, and children remain displaced.
A group of 800 households, with nowhere to go, is stranded in a flood-prone field near a town.
With the rainy season fast approaching, these families need a safer place to stay.
As Head of Emergency Response for the area, it’s up to you to find a more suitable solution.Attachments:
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October 22, 2022 at 8:14 am #80950
ShellyMadison
ParticipantYou have a great gravitas to your voice that suits this kind of read. I did notice you have very bright vowels (midwesterner? I noticed it especially in your short “a” sound like in the word “stranded” and “fast”), so as an exercise, I’d suggest seeing if you can take regionalism out of your voice. I think this read is very effective, but having control of that might give you some more options.
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October 17, 2022 at 11:17 am #80826
Cheechman
ParticipantThis an actual audition read for Mandy’s
This is the 1 and only take…I think I nailed it, opinions?
Description is below
Casting for a either British or American English speaking male voiceover artist. The video is a corporate video related to the content of technology and information, including some data, numbers and general description of the internet and technology industry. Your voice needs to be confident, professional, a bit formal, informative and warm.
Script to read:
With a population of nearly 700 million and an average age of just 30, Southeast Asia is embracing the rapid surge of the game industry by virtue of the rapid popularity of the Internet and a large population of young people.
By 2021, the number of online game players reached to 250 million in Southeast Asia.
The compound annual growth rate is expected to be 8.5% from 2022 to 2027.Attachments:
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