[David Goldberg]

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[JNMullett]

Hi All, another practice read for my narration demo. Thank you for the feedback on my previous read, I will definitely incorporate your advice/observations into my practice. Again, thanks in advance for letting me borrow your critical ears!!

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[Nikka Kowidge]

This is a great read. Your voice fits the subject well and you sound very knowledgeable. I think you might consider a bit slower pace during the more medically dense portion of the piece to ensure the listener can keep up as they digest the material.

[bnielsen15]

Hi everyone! These are 3 narration scripts I chose to practice for my next session.

I’ve been having some issues with my editing software in terms of audio levels, so I’m so sorry if these mp3’s are a bit too quiet. I’m working on that but I wanted to get these out for feedback.

My main focus is pacing, I just want to make sure I’m not zooming through these too fast.

Any and all feedback is appreciated!

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Meditation:
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[Nikka Kowidge]

This is a great read. Your voice fits the subject well and you sound very knowledgeable. I think you might consider a bit slower pace during the more medically dense portion of the piece to ensure the listener can keep up as they digest the material.

[Nikka Kowidge]

Apologies, I posted the wrong feedback on this thread.

I meant to say,
Great job, very conversational tone on all. The pacing sounds good to me on 1 and 3. I would slow the pace on the meditation a bit.

[Cheechman]

Last one of the third coaching session. Onto #4….WOOOHOOOOO

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[madtrammell]

You have a very good voice for this read! I would say try to vary your performance a bit through the read, to give it a bit more energy

[Cheechman]

This read is actually a poem I wrote right after 9/11.

It’s different than i normally read, but I would like independent opinions of the read and content.

Thanks.

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[Cheechman]

Read 3 of 5

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[Cheechman]

This is read 2 of my second set 0f 5.

Did 3 because at first, I was trying to get kids excited, but 3 is a little more natural voiced

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[Cheechman]

Comments or suggestions?

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[Shadiq]

Hi Everyone!

Working on conversational reads and pace. Any other creative only feedback is welcomed as well.

New here (be gentle)

Thanks for your help!
DeAndre

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[Hazaro]

Hi Shadiq! I really liked the flow and build up of the Maryland Lottery piece, nice job with that! The words got clearer as you built up so I would just say to keep the clarity even when being low key as some words got dropped off at the end and I wasn’t sure what was said.
I liked the intimacy and pacing of Jaguar, just felt like it could have had more power with a stronger connection to the piece so there was no question that YOU are the Jaguar.

[Cheechman]

There REALLY needs to be a search engine for this. Too many pages to go thru.

[danielh04]

Hello! I’ve been getting back into the habit of practicing some reads, here are two for my upcoming coach classes, the feedback is greatly appreciated!
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Thank you!

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[Hazaro]

Hi Daniel. You have a genuinely natural tone delivery that’s very sweet. I’m not quite sure what’s missing as I’m not an expert. But maybe more of a sharing of information to help the listener rather then telling them which might add more energy or resonance in the delivery? Again – not quite sure what it is but you’re on your way!

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