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David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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January 19, 2023 at 5:31 pm #83207
AlexS
ParticipantHello VO Colleagues, and Belated HNY to you! May much success (and good health) characterize your ’23. Stylistic and Technical feedback welcome on this “Nike No Limit” recording. No direction given–just a link to a video with a staccato of athletic visuals echoing the copy. Your typical, iconic Nike intensity and aspiration. Thank you!
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January 21, 2023 at 12:34 pm #83236
swester
ParticipantHi ALex, There are a lot of short phrases and action words in this copy. I thought you did a good job of varying pitch while going through them. About 5 seconds in, I think you say ‘through sunrise’ or ‘through some highs’, so you might want to work on that piece, but otherwise, it was pretty good. Keep it up!
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January 19, 2023 at 6:20 am #83193
Debbie
ParticipantI’m working on being more conversational for narration and tutorials. No technical notes please, but any other feedback is appreciated!
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January 20, 2023 at 2:28 pm #83223
dejapowell
ParticipantHi Debbie, I am currently working on being more converational as well. One thing that my coach is helping me with is speed. I think that your pace is a little quick, slowing down a bit may help a bit.
Good luck!
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January 18, 2023 at 10:33 pm #83186
Earthbul
ParticipantRe-Posting Planet Earth’s “Grasslands” due to faulty editing.
Don’t drink and edit folks LOLAttachments:
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January 19, 2023 at 5:40 pm #83209
AlexS
ParticipantHi, Earthbul. Man, your timbre is enviable for this type of copy. I think if you address just a couple of issues, I’m ready to tune into this nature special: (1) I hear several clicks and some juiciness in your narration–edit these out for smoothness or try another take with these mouth-noises in mind; and (2) I believe if you slow your pace down a bit to allow me to absorb the visuals of your narration (and images that would be on screen) that would make your good read greater. Well done! Best, Alex
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January 19, 2023 at 8:51 pm #83211
Earthbul
ParticipantI fully agree on the mouth noise. Hoped the music would distract from it in earlier versions lol I also feel the pauses should be longer in spots. I enjoy narration but I’m more comfortable with an upbeat commercial read. As for audio, I’m always tinkering with audacity settings to find the sweet spot. Thanks again for your take on it. I appreciate it.
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January 18, 2023 at 6:12 pm #83172
Nikka Kowidge
ParticipantHello fellow, VO actors! I’m looking for feedback on the following practice read. I’m looking to sound conversational and reduce my glottal stops. Thoughts? Any and all feedback minus the technical appreciated! Thank you all so much.
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January 25, 2023 at 11:17 am #83431
weiss-richmond
ParticipantHi Nikka, I really appreciate the energy you’re bringing to this read and can tell you connect with the material. I think picturing a particular person and really speaking to them might help you with being conversational. With regard to glottal stops, one trick I learned a long time ago in a theatre context is to put a teeny ‘h’ before the vowel, just to get your air moving. Full disclosure: I’m a newbie to the world of VO and I have no idea whether the pros would agree with me — that might be something that microphones would too easily catch. But, could be worth a try! -Hondo
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January 26, 2023 at 12:37 pm #83483
Nikka Kowidge
ParticipantThank you so much for this feedback! I really appreciate it.
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January 18, 2023 at 6:04 pm #83167
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January 18, 2023 at 6:02 pm #83165
SuperLuke
ParticipantHello,
Feedback about this commercial I am practicing for would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks,
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Which iPhone is right for you? Welcome the ultimate iPhone 14. From $999, a total powerhouse. From $799, as amazing as ever. From $599, serious value. iPhone 14. Love the power. Love the price.Attachments:
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January 18, 2023 at 4:06 pm #83156
Earthbul
ParticipantAny and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated. Thanks !
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January 18, 2023 at 5:33 pm #83161
SuperLuke
ParticipantWhen you say, “There are guys who will smirk at you”, at the beginning of the copy, I think if you put more emphasis and power into the word “There are guys”, the rest of your recording will flow smoothly. Think about how the listener of this commercial will feel, hearing the build-up and the importance of what you have to say in this recording. Everything else flowed just fine =)
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January 18, 2023 at 8:14 am #83126
RGK3
ParticipantHi all:
I’d appreciate any feedback on these two reads, particularly on pacing and whether they sound conversational. Am I hitting the right money words?
Thanks!
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January 20, 2023 at 2:25 pm #83222
dejapowell
ParticipantIn my opinion both recordings were very conversational, and your diction was very good. The only suggestion I would make is to work on your speed just a bit. Overall, very good!
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January 17, 2023 at 9:00 pm #83121
BB123
ParticipantHello All,
Looking for feedback on these two for my homework assignment. Two different styles. Any feedback would be appreciated
Thank you
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January 21, 2023 at 12:38 pm #83237
swester
ParticipantHi – I like how varied your voice is with each piece. I like how you read the first line in the Dunkin spot. In the Pimco copy, I would work on hitting the word ‘bond’ a little harder to ensure it is coming across, as that is what the spot is about. Good Job!
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January 17, 2023 at 7:12 pm #83115
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