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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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January 31, 2023 at 8:20 pm #83760
Artist7
ParticipantHello! Looking for feedback on these two practice reads. Thanks so much!
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February 1, 2023 at 2:39 pm #83819
M
ParticipantGreat job.
RB thoughts: the connection gets lost by “omega 3”and the song-song of “flax seeds” – I was expecting a list after “seeds”. Loved the emphasis on “plump” and “juicy” – two great words to “taste” when you say them.
CJ thoughts: great choices on pace and tone! Wonderful delivery suited for your soothing, yet playful, voice. Really nice work! -
January 31, 2023 at 11:14 pm #83789
Shawn
ParticipantI thought the cool-jazz reading was great. Seductive voice and enticing read. Very jazzy.
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January 31, 2023 at 9:18 pm #83769
Earthbul
ParticipantI enjoyed both reads. I felt biggest and news should’ve flowed a little better. Plus a slight pause between flaxseed & plump juicy raisins. With a slight emphasis on the latter would really bump it up. Heck, now you have wanting to take a shot it lol
Great job on both. I look forward to hearing your next one.
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January 30, 2023 at 9:21 pm #83698
Earthbul
ParticipantAmerican Tire Supply practice read
Put a little more pep in my step.
I was in a b****r of a Monday mood but I had fun with recording and editing this one.
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February 2, 2023 at 5:49 pm #84006
RCampos
ParticipantLots to compliment here: the burst of “free” at the top, the chuckle, and the “hey” – all nice touches that make this very effective. I would suggest a couple of minor tweaks:
An ever so slight pause after: a while right? At the moment, the “well” feels like it comes too soon. You’ve got listener hooked and a little pause can build suspense.
And – “one all weather radial” runs together for me. Just a little differentiation here would help clarify the details of the deal. By the by, I listened to your comments on my AIG VO and made changes – just reloaded today. Would appreciate your take on it. Thanks!
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January 30, 2023 at 3:38 pm #83685
Debbie
ParticipantHello everyone!
I’m working on being conversational and my glottal stops, so wanted to practice on copy that has key words starting with vowels.
I’m a little congested so you may be able to hear it. No tech notes please, all other feedback welcome!Attachments:
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February 2, 2023 at 6:00 pm #84007
RCampos
ParticipantHi Debbie, very nice job on this VO. I just have a few suggestions:
It feels like you tightened your throat on the word “scenes.”
You could enunciate “definitely” more – sounds like you gobble up a syllable in the middle.
Other than that, I think a little slower would be better, and a touch more of the resonance in your voice. It sounds like most of this is in your “head” voice, rather than from the diaphragm.
Finally, if you have a moment, I’d appreciate your comments on a VO I just loaded today: AIG. Thanks! Robert -
February 1, 2023 at 5:20 pm #83826
M
Participantvery nice. Keep it going/connected with “this is definitely the place for cross country…etc…”
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January 31, 2023 at 7:36 pm #83754
Earthbul
ParticipantI liked your read very much. I felt it was very conversational, laid back and I could hear the smile in your voice. Great enunciation as well. Lovely voice. I’d love to hear you even more relaxed in the read if that makes sense. I feel it would be even better than it is now.
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January 29, 2023 at 5:21 pm #83630
Jaljr
ParticipantHey, folks –
A couple of lightly edited commercial reads. I value your comments.
Be well…
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February 1, 2023 at 2:58 pm #83820
M
ParticipantDeluth: great match for your voice: deep, hint of south, confident, outdoorsy with a hint of a “commanding general” to it. Bravo.
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January 30, 2023 at 7:49 pm #83696
VOgalUS
ParticipantI could hear ‘money’ in your voice for Acura. Your voice would do good for an even more expensive car. The copy for Duluth distracted me from ‘hearing’ you. Buck n***d for a trading company. Clever.
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January 29, 2023 at 10:43 pm #83654
Earthbul
ParticipantI enjoyed listeng to your delivery on the Deluth read. Perfect fit. Didn’t feel the same about Acura. You didn’t sound comfortable and it didn’t flow. Also a bit of mouth noise in that one as well. That being said I’d love to hear you do a food or travel piece. You have an awesome folksy delivery. Great work.
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January 29, 2023 at 2:20 pm #83612
Earthbul
ParticipantJust experimenting with mixing at the moment.
Not sure if the music is overpowering or under.
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February 2, 2023 at 6:06 pm #84009
RCampos
ParticipantEnjoy listening to your reads!
Just a few notes:
The “t” in retirement is a bit lost.
And – almost sounds like a double “d” on He’d – or is there extraneous click there?
As for the music mix, it’s low enough as to be too distant from the VO. I think if you’re going to use music, it should be more integrated. I would raise the level. All best,
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January 29, 2023 at 5:34 pm #83634
Jaljr
ParticipantThat was a good read. I had to turn it up to get the music in my ears. Certainly not overpowering. Nice job.
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January 29, 2023 at 12:02 am #83588
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January 28, 2023 at 8:30 pm #83583
Earthbul
ParticipantThoughts on recording quality ? Was also wondering if the music mix is adequate ?
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February 9, 2023 at 9:25 pm #84292
ShellyMadison
ParticipantYour voice is clear and forward. Recording sounds well recorded and mastered. I think the music should be louder to sound more cohesive. Currently being lost in the background (at least on my computer speakers)
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January 27, 2023 at 6:02 pm #83526
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January 27, 2023 at 5:34 pm #83522
jnamar
ParticipantHi everyone,
Hope you all doing great! I want feedback on this commercial read. I recorded this on my iphone so the sound quality is err. I’m working on sounding relax and with that I’m also trying not to drop syllables, or the inflections, and also want to know if I pick a good focus on the script.
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January 30, 2023 at 2:33 pm #83684
Tim Kraft
ParticipantHi – agreed, you have a very pleasant, relaxed voice…and you can hear that relaxation on the first line, then it gets fast. Almost like you want to finish it quickly.
Take a breath at the end of that first line, stay relaxed. Personally I’d pitch down the “dals” in “Sandals”. Sounds more conversational as, in natural speech, we tend pitch down at the end of phrases.
Keep at it, I think this can be a good read for your voice style!!
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January 29, 2023 at 2:17 pm #83611
Earthbul
ParticipantSlowing it down a bit and putting more emphasis on certain words could really bring this up a notch.
You have a very pleasant sound to your voice.
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January 26, 2023 at 12:58 pm #83485
Nikka Kowidge
ParticipantHello voiceover actors, here’s a commercial read I’m working on. please feel free to give any feedback besides technical. Specifically, I am still working on glottal stops as well as conversational read. Does it sound like I am talking to my friend?
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February 8, 2023 at 4:42 pm #84255
kburman
ParticipantHello Nikka,
It sounded very conversational. I like the pace. Just a few tweaks as felt like there were two pauses that I would leave out. between Revlon and High and after gently protect. Those slight changes and Red heads will want the product. Nice work!
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January 27, 2023 at 3:10 pm #83520
Debbie
ParticipantHi Nikka! Great read, you have a really nice tone. There are some moments in the copy where you could be more conversational. I find that making the effort to keep smiling through the read (even when it feels super weird) helps a lot for me, so that may be something to try if you haven’t already.
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January 26, 2023 at 2:54 pm #83488
jnamar
ParticipantHi Nikka, I like your voice and delivery sounds young and lively. If you want try for a more sassy read. Usually these hair-dye commercials have some of that. This attitude might help the glottal stops. Good luck!
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