[David Goldberg]

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[Provocaleric]

Hello and please check this read out and give me some critique, I will be happy to check yours out too, 🙂

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[Terry Davis]

I really like this script for your voice. You have a natural caring sound that works just right with this. I thought you pacing was good too. It wasn’t rushed at all. Great job.

[Provocaleric]

Nikka,
I enjoyed your read! you have a nice authenticity to your voice. I would only say that sibilance is noticed throughout and try less pausing and more musicality in your voice. Good luck!

[Provocaleric]

thank you, I felt that uncomfortable pause as well. I’ll blow through it a little better. 🙂

[Nikka Kowidge]

Hi VO community, thank you in advance for your feedback on the following read.

I’m interested in any thoughts you have regarding conversational tone especially.

Thank you!

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[latyesemca]

I would like to hear it sped up a little and the difference of inflections as well, but the tone is wonderful! Great to hear you!

[Terry Davis]

Nikka, you have a great voice that I could definitely hear coming through my radio or T.V. I would love to hear you smile more through this and put a little more excitement in what you’re talking about. It should sound like this is an awesome car and your thrilled to tell people about it. Pacing was good but maybe just a half tick sped up. Love the voice and I look forward to hearing more from you.

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[ajcarste]

Hello Community,

I have here three samples. I would love feedback on if you think these come off as conversational.

Thank you so much!
Andrew

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[BJ]

Hi AJ – I like the tone of your voice. 1st sample – You seem comfortable with this script, so I do think you are conversational here. 2nd sample – More pauses within this copy, so it doesn’t come off as conversational here. 3rd sample – Consider eliminating some of your pauses to gain a more natural read. Looking forward to hearing more from you, BJ

[jadethevo]

Hi all,

Forgive me if this is a duplicate, but I can’t see my post so I’m resubmitting. Open to all feedback, including audio quality.

Thanks!

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[ajcarste]

Hello Jade,
I think it might be nice if it increased in volume or intensity at a slower rate.
I hope this helps,
Andrew

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[Earthbul]

Saw someone post this script read earlier and thought I’d have a crack at it.
Any and all comments or critiques are welcomed and appreciated,

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[ajcarste]

Hi Earthbu,
I think its a really nice recording. There is a a hesitancy in the voice which is calming. I think there could be better background music which matches the voice recording.
I hope this helps,
Andrew

[Artist7]

The recording sounds great! I think that you could emphasize or do a slight “play on words” at the end with the words “no strings attached.”

[Earthbul]

I fully agree on the “no strings attached” line. Slightly sarcastic with a bit of a wink lol Thanks for the feedback. Are you working on anything ? Looking forward to it 🙂

[Provocaleric]

Nice Erik, I think your sound definitely has marketability! I like your thick sound and my only real criticism would be to do more face and mouth stretching, I can hear some binding up at the end of some of those thick phrases, but really nice job! Please feel free to critique me, thanks!

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[Provocaleric]

Hello fellow Voice artists! My name is Eric and I would appreciate some honest criticism about this recording. I would be happy to evaluate you as well, thank you for taking the time. One Vanderbilt Observation Deck Audio Simulation. Hello, and welcome to the audio simulation of the One Vanderbilt Observation Deck. Please adjust your audio volume to a level that best represents my voice at a normal speaking volume to a person standing next to you. This will calibrate your headphone level. Please do not adjust your audio volume again over the course of the simulation. Thank you.

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[Michele Martin]

Hi Eric- This is my first time on this forum providing feedback, so please bear with me if this comment is not in the right place. It’s intended to be feedback on the practice file of One Vanderbilt OB deck. I really enjoyed your read and find your voice very pleasant to listen to, and also very professional-sounding (if that’s a thing- ha). Aside from the micro-pauses someone else mentioned, the only other thing that caught my attention was the “Hello!” at the beginning of the piece. It sounded a touch like “Hullo” and I thought the pronunciation might be tweaked a bit more in the “Hello” (like in chelo) direction. Not sure if that’s a subjective thing, or a correct/incorrect thing, so disregard my comment if it’s just a personal taste issue. Nice sound!!
Michele

[Tim Kraft]

Hi Eric – Overall I think this is a good read, but gets a little “pause-y” in the middle. You do: “a level that best represents my voice (pause) at a normal speaking volume (pause) to a person standing next to you”. Personally I’d go straight through that, no micropauses. I often find that blowing through commas in a script makes it sound less choppy. Conversely adding the pause sounds hesitant and less conversational.

A good match for your sound though…friendly, enthusiastic and clear, all very applicable to instructional reads. Nice job !

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