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August 7, 2020 at 9:27 am #15468
David Goldberg
Edge Studio StaffHi! Upload your recordings, and get feedback from your peers!
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February 27, 2023 at 12:12 am #84761
alexcharles
ParticipantHey everyone!
Finally getting a chance to upload a read for my Coaching Homework. I’m focusing on Narration and this is called “Cosmos” from the edge studio script library. I’ve been trying to work on pacing, conversational style and glottal stops but any feedback at all is welcome!
Let me know what you think!
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March 8, 2023 at 4:41 pm #85057
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ParticipantI was engaged an interested in the material. I liked the elongated connection bt “izzforthe moment;” the articulation of “cosmic perspective;” and the subtle and gentle “soft meadow.”
a few words I thought might need attention (perhaps slowed down?) – “nitrogen,” “certainty” and “accumulated”. lovely voice -
February 28, 2023 at 12:11 am #84818
Thomas_D
ParticipantHey Alexcharles! I thought your tone sounded very conversational and less like you’re reading from a script. I aslo appreciated the technique in which you’re approaching the read (almost like a documentary narrator)
There were two things I noticed as I was listening:
1) the word “nitrogen” seemed very rushed (or it could’ve been clipped in the recording
2) The read sounded very even keel through the entire script. Try playing with giving a few phrases different emotions or slightly changing the pace based on a certain phrase
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February 25, 2023 at 4:36 pm #84742
Michele Martin
ParticipantHello All,
This is my first submission and I do not yet have a home studio set up, so please forgive the audio quality (or lack thereof). I appreciate any feedback on this read of the NASDAQ script. Thank you!Attachments:
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March 11, 2023 at 1:53 pm #85123
BJ
ParticipantHi Michele – Your voice is very easy to listen to. I really like the warmth of your read. It may be just the recording quality, so I’m not sure if I’m hearing sibilant “s”s. Also, consider tightening up the read by eliminating pauses, which in some cases are being dictated by punctuation. Looking forward to hearing more from you, BJ.
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March 13, 2023 at 2:20 pm #85181
Michele Martin
ParticipantThank you, BJ! I appreciate you taking the time to provide feedback and will practice this with fewer pauses! I wondered myself if it was a bit choppy sounding.
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February 24, 2023 at 9:13 pm #84720
Terry Davis
ParticipantHello everyone! I’m looking for feedback on a couple of reads. Any and all feedback is welcome from pace, pronunciation, style, or anything else you can think of. Thanks in advance.
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February 21, 2023 at 9:07 pm #84619
Stephen Winburn
ParticipantHello everyone! I am Steph, and this is my first real attempt at recording something for the forum after a long wait but I hope you won’t go too easy on me!
I’m looking into narration for my demo and I’m trying my hand at the Inspiration/Meditation scripts today.
I’ve uploaded 3 reads of the “Awaken Mental Freedom” found here in the script library.
The first is my neutral read: how I read it without too much self-direction or second guessing.
The second is focusing on slowing the tempo since that is something I was critiqued on in my coaching session.
And the third is shifting the tone of the piece to something a bit more actionable, we’ll say.My only disclaimer is that I know for myself that I wasn’t sitting comfortably in my “signature voice” today, so if at any point you find yourselves thinking maybe a glass of water is what this reading needed, I think so too😂
Looking forward to the critiques🖤
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February 24, 2023 at 9:21 pm #84723
Terry Davis
ParticipantSteph, good job on your reads. I think the best one was your second read. I could hear that you were taking your time with it, which is what this scripts calls for. On your third read I think you punched a couple of words too hard. For instance, “bones” kind of jolted me out of my relaxation listening to you. Overall, you did a great and keep up the good work.
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February 21, 2023 at 8:17 pm #84615
Artist7
ParticipantHi, everyone! I’d very much appreciate some feedback on these two short reads. Thanks!
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February 24, 2023 at 9:27 pm #84725
Terry Davis
ParticipantI really love everything about you History channel promo. Great voice, sounds clean and you can hear just a little smile which is perfect. The Nair read was a fun script and I think it called for a little more of conversational read. It sounded more read than spoken to me. If there’s anything to practice on it would be that. I think you will do great in the VO world if you can nail that down because your voice is so nice and friendly.
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February 21, 2023 at 8:53 pm #84618
Earthbul
ParticipantGreat work. Nice smooth flow, very conversational. Really enjoyed the History Channel spot. Good audio quality as well. Keep it up.
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February 21, 2023 at 3:43 pm #84603
Provocaleric
ParticipantHello and please check this read out and give me some critique, I will be happy to check yours out too, 🙂
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February 24, 2023 at 9:31 pm #84726
Terry Davis
ParticipantI really like this script for your voice. You have a natural caring sound that works just right with this. I thought you pacing was good too. It wasn’t rushed at all. Great job.
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February 21, 2023 at 3:36 pm #84601
Provocaleric
ParticipantNikka,
I enjoyed your read! you have a nice authenticity to your voice. I would only say that sibilance is noticed throughout and try less pausing and more musicality in your voice. Good luck! -
February 21, 2023 at 3:31 pm #84600
Provocaleric
Participantthank you, I felt that uncomfortable pause as well. I’ll blow through it a little better. 🙂
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February 21, 2023 at 11:41 am #84591
Nikka Kowidge
ParticipantHi VO community, thank you in advance for your feedback on the following read.
I’m interested in any thoughts you have regarding conversational tone especially.
Thank you!
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September 12, 2023 at 10:38 am #90170
latyesemca
ParticipantI would like to hear it sped up a little and the difference of inflections as well, but the tone is wonderful! Great to hear you!
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February 24, 2023 at 9:40 pm #84727
Terry Davis
ParticipantNikka, you have a great voice that I could definitely hear coming through my radio or T.V. I would love to hear you smile more through this and put a little more excitement in what you’re talking about. It should sound like this is an awesome car and your thrilled to tell people about it. Pacing was good but maybe just a half tick sped up. Love the voice and I look forward to hearing more from you.
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February 21, 2023 at 7:06 am #84581
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