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  • #85133
    Provocaleric
    Participant

    Dear Nikka,
    You have a friendly, clear voice that I want to listen to! However, if I had to criticize I would say your pacing started great and then became a bit choppy and you sound a little disconnected from the copy, less reading it and more helping your friend or someone else. I like lead in’s they help me. Thank you for putting yourself out there and look forward to hearing more from you.

  • #85132
    Provocaleric
    Participant

    Hi AnnellaKaine,
    I think you voice can be perfect for e learning or telephony it sounds crisp and authoritative. I would only suggest to connect with the copy with a clear image in your mind. Lead in’s help as well I look forward to hearing more of you too!

    • #85216
      annellakaine
      Participant

      Thanks for the listen and feedback!

  • #85131
    Provocaleric
    Participant

    Hi BJ,
    Excellent work! I really like both of your reads. I like your voice, it sounds friendly yet authoritative and I like your pace, volume and tone. I only suggest you try to get a couple of totally different versions of these reads recorded because you could be asked to do this. Great work.

    • #85139
      BJ
      Participant

      Hi – Thanks so much for your kind words and for suggesting that I work on a couple of different versions – good idea!

  • #85118
    BJ
    Participant

    Hi – Would you please give these reads a listen? The first narration is for a Non-Profit and the second is an Announcement. The copy is attached. What do you think is working and what’s not? I’m new to this Forum of Truth (as participant Provocaleric aptly named it) and I’m looking forward to hearing the truth from you. Grateful for your time and input! BJ

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    • #85268
      M
      Participant

      Hi BJ. Professional reads on both as far as this novice can tell! Very confident. Appropriate tone. Engaging. Not a ton to critique, so these comments might fall into the category of personal preference and/or nit picky. Regarding Asthma: I felt a longer pause between the end of the sentence containing “health” and the start of the following sentence beginning with “They’ll…” would give it a bit more space. Also, I heard some breaths that interrupted the flow of the sentence (e.g., “learn more about asthma (breath) is to…” “Visit the allergy (breath) and asthma foundation” and “AAF (breath) dot o r g.” Regarding TJ: great energy. I thought you easily have the skill to maintain that crucial energy while slowing it down just a tad. Impressive!

    • #85197
      Luke V
      Participant

      I really like both reads. Clear enunciation and emphasis on key words all on top of a consistent flow. I’m learning much about what to strive for my recordings simply by listening to yours. Your TJ read sounds exactly like something I’d expect to hear while shopping or on the radio.

      • #85220
        BJ
        Participant

        Hi Luke – Thanks so much for the cheers! What’s so great about this Forum is that we get to learn from one another! BJ

  • #85094
    annellakaine
    Participant

    Oops I’m having some tech trouble getting the 2nd sample to upload, not sure why. So I guess it’s just the one sample then!

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  • #85092
    annellakaine
    Participant

    Hi all! Working on narration and would happily take any feedback you can spare. The first is a corporate explain and the second doc. Thanks!

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    • #85124
      BJ
      Participant

      Hi – Thanks for sharing your read. For your consideration, think of slowing down a bit and creating a picture in your mind of who you’re speaking to. Looking forward to hearing more from you, BJ

  • #85089
    Nikka Kowidge
    Participant

    Hi! I’d love some feedback on the attached commercial record. Conversational sound? I’m working on choosing a specific audience and speaking to them. Does that come through? Also, any and all comments on vocal quality and glottal stops. Thank you so much!

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    • #85100
      M
      Participant

      Great job! Engaging, energetic but still natural. Nice variety of intonations. To me the word “camera” has a different accent than the rest of the piece. Along those lines but having more to do with the rising intonation, “seven” and the final “Google” could be spoken perhaps with more solid confidence. Excellent read! Look forward to hearing the other.

  • #85086
    Steven
    Participant

    Hello!
    This is a commercial practice piece. I would greatly appreciate some feedback on it.
    Thanks for your help!

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    • #85099
      M
      Participant

      Nice. Good energy. Good tone. Maybe consider mixing up the rhythm and intonation in the middle; the emphasis on “never” “been” “cereal” and “like” feels to me a little too predictable, but that could be just a personal preference for me and is definitely minor.

      • #85127
        Steven
        Participant

        Interesting. I hadn’t thought of it like that. I’ll definitely play with this! Thank you!

    • #85091
      Nikka Kowidge
      Participant

      Great read, Steven! Your voice quality fits this read very well. I like the way you slow down a little bit when describing the cereal, I can see the flakes and bunches in the bowl. I think you can vary your tone a little bit on the last sentence to indicate a little more excitement. The tone with the first sentence great and the last mirror each other, which makes sense because they are very similar sentiments. A difference on the end could help really hit home the idea.

      • #85128
        Steven
        Participant

        Thanks for the feedback! I see what you mean, and I can hear it, now. Thanks!

  • #85022
    M
    Participant

    Hello. Considering options for a narration reel (down the road a piece) and this one is a possibility. Any feedback/fresh ideas are welcome! no need to sugar coat! thanks people!

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    • #85062
      T Hayes
      Participant

      I thought this sounded very good! I liked your tone and the pace was appropriate. My one suggestion for improvement is the introduction sounded a little choppy and a tad bit too slow.

      • #85098
        M
        Participant

        I completely agree! Thanks so much!

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      M
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  • #85020
    Provocaleric
    Participant

    Mary, thank you I appreciate your comments

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