[DillonP]

I have a new Commercial read and an old Narration I had done. This time I used my newest microphone to record. please give me feedback that can help with my recording and if my new microphone would work better or not.

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[Seth Jackson]

What if you gave the MTV ad a bit more enthusiasm? Mic sounds great BTW.

[Artist7]

Hi, everyone- I’ve uploaded two practice reads that I’d appreciate some feedback on. Thanks so much!

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[BJ]

Hi Artist 7 – Friendly, inviting tone and good energy for both records – nice! Good differentiation between the two, too. Just a quick note that on Spotify the ”p” in partying is popped also the record volume is low for both.

[Artist7]

Hi, BJ- Thanks for the feedback! OK. Looks like I’ll need to look into the sound issues and make some sound adjustments.

[tmanning.tix]

Just a little commercial homework. Feel free to give me some feedback!

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[Seth Jackson]

One thing my teacher is drilling into me, is to make it more conversational.

[Michele Martin]

I just listened to Amex and thought you sounded really believable. When you said “and American Express keeps it that way” I wanted to cheer “Yeah!” for privacy. Thought you nailed that line. Your tone seemed very fitting and appropriately authoritative for the serious content.

[atperry]

Hi Folks, working on telephony. Would love feedback of any kind.

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[atperry]

Hey hey, second recording of Midzipper telephony. Sorry for technical issue on first reeording

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[BJ]

Hi Atperry – I must admit. I’m a sucker for deep voices – yours is beautiful! Overall – nice job! Just a couple of thoughts – trying reading this with a bit of a smile so that the read is warmer but still professional. Also, try backing up from the mic a bit to avoid mouth sounds.

[Seth Jackson]

Removed breaths only because there was one. Looking for feedback on delivery and quality of recording. Thank you much.

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[Michele Martin]

Seth, I thought this sounded so nice! Only thing I can think of is maybe in the second line, smooth out “the all new Acura” just a smidge. Or are those slight pauses intentional for drama? (I don’t mean where you say, “Luxury. Performance. Etc. I can tell those pauses are right on.) Love your voice and tone: Great for a luxury ad!

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[ekairush04]

Hi Everyone,
I’m submitting my two scripts for practice. Let me know what you think. I need all the help I can get.
Thanks,
Elena R.

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[BJ]

Hi Elena – Very easy to listen to your tone and pace. Great pronunciation. Neuroendocrine – there’s a slight hesitation between “electron” and “microscopy.” Social Security – I think you can go a bit warmer here – more conversational. Both recordings sound echoey.

[VoicesByJeff]

Hello everyone! Did some narration reads and any feedback is appreciated! Thanks!

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[VoicesByJeff]

Had an issue with my files so trying again. Thanks in advance for your feedback!

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[DicksonVO]

Hey Jeff! Great voice! For the TN Valley: There were a lot of mouth clicks throughout. I’d suggest to try a de-clicker or edit those out. It was a very fast read. It felt like this would be a documentary, so imagine the images that would appear with the copy you are reading and how long they may appear on the screen during your VO (most likely a couple of seconds or so) hopefully this will help you pace a little slower so your audience can more easily absorb the message. For the Church Attack: It lacked emotion behind the subject matter. The church attack is a horrible thing and the images that would be show with it are also…try putting your hand over your heart or something like that when you read to connect with the script (you don’t have to pour out tears but you would want to connect with the gravity of the situation). Doing that hopefully will help you with slowing your pace also. Hope this helps. Keep going…your voice is great for narration.

[VoicesByJeff]

Really appreciate the honest feedback. The emotion part is something I am working on. Thanks for your input!

[DicksonVO]

Greetings Feedback Forum! Here for the practice and looking forward to your feedback.

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