[Provocaleric]

Nice Erik, I think your sound definitely has marketability! I like your thick sound and my only real criticism would be to do more face and mouth stretching, I can hear some binding up at the end of some of those thick phrases, but really nice job! Please feel free to critique me, thanks!

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[Earthbul]

Saw someone post this script read earlier and thought I’d have a crack at it.
Any and all comments or critiques are welcomed and appreciated,

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[ajcarste]

Hi Earthbu,
I think its a really nice recording. There is a a hesitancy in the voice which is calming. I think there could be better background music which matches the voice recording.
I hope this helps,
Andrew

[Artist7]

The recording sounds great! I think that you could emphasize or do a slight “play on words” at the end with the words “no strings attached.”

[Earthbul]

I fully agree on the “no strings attached” line. Slightly sarcastic with a bit of a wink lol Thanks for the feedback. Are you working on anything ? Looking forward to it 🙂

[jadethevo]

Hi all,

Forgive me if this is a duplicate, but I can’t see my post so I’m resubmitting. Open to all feedback, including audio quality.

Thanks!

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[ajcarste]

Hello Jade,
I think it might be nice if it increased in volume or intensity at a slower rate.
I hope this helps,
Andrew

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[ajcarste]

Hello Community,

I have here three samples. I would love feedback on if you think these come off as conversational.

Thank you so much!
Andrew

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[BJ]

Hi AJ – I like the tone of your voice. 1st sample – You seem comfortable with this script, so I do think you are conversational here. 2nd sample – More pauses within this copy, so it doesn’t come off as conversational here. 3rd sample – Consider eliminating some of your pauses to gain a more natural read. Looking forward to hearing more from you, BJ

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[Nikka Kowidge]

Hi VO community, thank you in advance for your feedback on the following read.

I’m interested in any thoughts you have regarding conversational tone especially.

Thank you!

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[Terry Davis]

Nikka, you have a great voice that I could definitely hear coming through my radio or T.V. I would love to hear you smile more through this and put a little more excitement in what you’re talking about. It should sound like this is an awesome car and your thrilled to tell people about it. Pacing was good but maybe just a half tick sped up. Love the voice and I look forward to hearing more from you.

[latyesemca]

I would like to hear it sped up a little and the difference of inflections as well, but the tone is wonderful! Great to hear you!

[Provocaleric]

thank you, I felt that uncomfortable pause as well. I’ll blow through it a little better. 🙂

[Provocaleric]

Nikka,
I enjoyed your read! you have a nice authenticity to your voice. I would only say that sibilance is noticed throughout and try less pausing and more musicality in your voice. Good luck!

[Provocaleric]

Hello and please check this read out and give me some critique, I will be happy to check yours out too, 🙂

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[Terry Davis]

I really like this script for your voice. You have a natural caring sound that works just right with this. I thought you pacing was good too. It wasn’t rushed at all. Great job.

[Artist7]

Hi, everyone! I’d very much appreciate some feedback on these two short reads. Thanks!

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[Earthbul]

Great work. Nice smooth flow, very conversational. Really enjoyed the History Channel spot. Good audio quality as well. Keep it up.

[Artist7]

I really appreciate the feedback! Also, many thanks for the feedback on the audio quality, as I’ve been working on that, too!

[Terry Davis]

I really love everything about you History channel promo. Great voice, sounds clean and you can hear just a little smile which is perfect. The Nair read was a fun script and I think it called for a little more of conversational read. It sounded more read than spoken to me. If there’s anything to practice on it would be that. I think you will do great in the VO world if you can nail that down because your voice is so nice and friendly.

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